Steph’s Reviews > The Predator > Status Update

I am so tired of Morana. I would take the dad’s POV at this point.

I’m bored.

This girls whole personality is she’s a computer genius but is written to be an actual idiot. Also I’m going to go out on a limb and guess her father had something to do with the kidnapped girls? And I’d beg Tristian’s sister was one of them.

I can count the words they’ve exchanged on two hands

Ok I get that this is self published but did NO ONE proof read it????

WE GET IT HIS EYES ARE BLUE

“Eagles. Dozens of them. Circling the building…Somewhere on the premises was a corpse – she looked up at the birds, at their number – more than one corpse”
Does this author mean vultures????

One chapter in and…it’s not great