Maybe if I were ten, I would find this dialogue realistic. But holy god, this is cheesy. I've read cheesy MG books before, but this is one of the cheesiest I've run into. Everything just lacks subtlety - not just the dialogue, but the characterization and the conflict as well. Obviously, MG books can't be too subtle, but I feel like they can be done better than this.
— Dec 12, 2015 09:04PM
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