So a couple of obvious errors that any editor should have caught. The MC, while fending off an assassination attempt, takes an arrow to the gut and an arrow in his forearm. Then the MC is fully healed but never mentions how and when he got fixed. Then MC goes off galavanting with the wolf girl. During yet another display of the MC's awesomeness, he accidentally turns the wolf girl's fur white - and nobody notices.
— Oct 21, 2024 09:07AM
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