Okay...I'm questioning why the character has amnesia in this story at all. It's being strangely handled fine, a long coma has affected his memory...but the instant he needs to remember a specific thing, he calms himself, and the memory comes back. So...from a story perspective, the amnesia doesn't affect anything, do you get what I'm saying? If the amnesia crumbles basically on command, why is it a plot point?...
— Nov 07, 2023 05:56AM
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