Some parts are really good and some are the opposite.
Parts like this weren’t bad:
i used to think
i was broken
because
i never once
spent my
daydreams
plucking
swollen pomegranates
from
someone else’s tree.
- then i learned that society is broken, not me.
But it’s mostly not very good. The new
line
after
each
word does
not make it profound
and can
get
a
bit
jarring
— Apr 11, 2022 12:44PM
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