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no this isn’t it:

when i see
your light pieces
with
my dark pieces,
i begin to
understand why
they say
opposites attract.

I was rooting for this book!

Some parts are really good and some are the opposite.

Parts like this weren’t bad:
i used to think
i was broken

because
i never once

spent my
daydreams

plucking
swollen pomegranates

from
someone else’s tree.

- then i learned that society is broken, not me.


But it’s mostly not very good. The new
line
after
each
word does
not make it profound
and can
get
a
bit
jarring