Status Updates From The Lion (Clan Ross of the ...

82% in and the hero is still a ZERO…extremely unlikable I don’t think I’ll ever like him,I’ve yet to feel any love….it’s supposed to be a standalone it’s failing so far.

Not off to a good start. Who uses the word sex interchangeably for cock.

Editing is very poor. Writing is not much better. Trying to power through it. It is a free read through Kindle Unlimited.

I see I’m not the only read who has felt this is written odd. It feels like multiple drafts pasted together and they don’t match. For example, if the H and h said at dinner they were going for a walk after and they did. Then why 5 pages later is the family all upset bc she was missing and they almost sent guards to search.

I had high hopes and wanted to read this author. I’ll read the books I bought already

Interesting story but I’m not sure if it’s editing or maybe this was put together as drafts and things referenced are a bit off or what. The scenes are disjointed at times.