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Cait
is 48% done
I am struggling to read this as a reader instead of a writer. The writing seems juvenile. I don’t mean it feels like a YA novel. It feels like a young, inexperienced writer. Everyone has to start somewhere, but I have read much better debuts. Lots of telling instead of showing.
— 15 hours, 24 min ago
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Dan Green
is 10% done
Too many unconnected storylines and/or flashbacks to follow easily on audio. Soldier, scribe, pirate/prisoner, kid falling out of apple tree
— Apr 30, 2025 11:46AM
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