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below is the first sentence in chapter 2. I almost had a stroke reading it, no punctuation, just a word barf.

the SWAT captain growled, crossing his arms as he addressed the rookie recruit who’d been making his fucking cock hard since her first day when she’d been ordered to wash the SWAT truck as part of the hazing ritual and decided to do so in a white tank top and cutoff shorts—her body was magnificent.

Because I hate myself and I want to see how this author can make a female swat officer a doormat and an idiot. She will tell us she is strong but then show us that she is stupid. Show vs Tell is not this author’s strength. Why am I reading this? I need to be analyzed...