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Melody
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He watched her for several seconds before asking in a level voice, “Why were you following me?”
Olivia clenched her hand into a fist and threw out a question of her own. “Why were you robbing the Platts?” Her conscience pricked a bit as she thought of the silver frog. But she had her reasons.
He shrugged one broad shoulder. “Because I can.”
It was so typically Dodger that Olivia bit her lip to keep from smiling.
— Apr 06, 2018 12:39PM
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Olivia clenched her hand into a fist and threw out a question of her own. “Why were you robbing the Platts?” Her conscience pricked a bit as she thought of the silver frog. But she had her reasons.
He shrugged one broad shoulder. “Because I can.”
It was so typically Dodger that Olivia bit her lip to keep from smiling.
Karen Barber
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Ch1-2. Oliver has become Miss Olivia Brownlow, but your past is hard to escape.
— Apr 06, 2018 10:36AM
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Melody
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Me: I'm intrigued by this premise. Am excited for this book.
(A few pages in...)
"Olivia’s caramel-colored hair and odd, yellowish eyes" and "his blue eyes as frosty as a December morning."
Oh, so it'll THAT kind of writing, huh? :/
Let's be real, dear Author - 'yellowish eyes' in a character who is supposed to have a secret identity was an annoying and unnecessary choice.
— Apr 05, 2018 11:26PM
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(A few pages in...)
"Olivia’s caramel-colored hair and odd, yellowish eyes" and "his blue eyes as frosty as a December morning."
Oh, so it'll THAT kind of writing, huh? :/
Let's be real, dear Author - 'yellowish eyes' in a character who is supposed to have a secret identity was an annoying and unnecessary choice.
Karen Barber
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Love the prologue setting up how we come to get ‘Oliver’
— Apr 05, 2018 02:52PM
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