Status Updates From Path of Tears (Saga of The ...

Really starting to like Brental. Great character development, both on his account and Treace's. A little baffled about why he's helping Treace right now, but I'm not complaining!

Better 'cliffhangers' at the end of chapters. But, to be honest, I just wanted to read about Treace; I don't care all that much about Brental.

Does the author not have an editor? The story has soul (which is why I'm still reading), but there are a LOT of places it could flow better. Fight scenes, for example. There's too much description about where a foot goes, or a hand, or an arm....Give me the juicy bits, make it quick. Fight scenes are fast and fierce. Not bogged down with details - and readers don't want to know every precise limb location.

So far this book is kind of lame its spends more time on the villain then on the main character. After the first book proved to be fairly decent this one so far is just one lost after another.