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Davey as embodiment of shame is interesting.

Again, why this jump cut here now? The strangeness in the structure might be one weirdness too many.

I’m so baffled by this jump back to wifi land when we were in the middle of an urgent return to the mountain with a corpse.

I feel like Mimi is just a manic pixie dream girl and i’m disappointed.

So are we just done with the wifi plot now???

If the story was not so interesting it would be a DNF by now purely based on the creepy way the narrator describes all women, it's fucking gross. I can't tell if its a choice based on the narrator being not quite human and rather odd or if Doctorow is one of those authors