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Chris, the Dalek King
Chris, the Dalek King is 3% done
As the Daily’s fashion columnist, hanging out with Laney could seriously damage Beau’s street cred. Laney’s frilly top and her pants appeared about two sizes too small, probably as result of her gig as the Daily’s food writer.

um, what the ever living fuck??

Well, ok, one of your MCs is a massive fucking douchebag. Got it.
Nov 11, 2017 03:35PM Add a comment
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Denise H.
Denise H. is 24% done
*** Looking good so far... ! :)
May 11, 2016 06:03PM Add a comment
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Teri
Teri is 37% done
This is so odd
Apr 02, 2016 09:45AM Add a comment
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Teri
Teri is 15% done
This is not making my insides feel good
Apr 02, 2016 06:38AM Add a comment
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Sandra Ramirez
Sandra Ramirez is finished
Take the job Beau, you'll be happier.
Jan 25, 2016 05:12PM Add a comment
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M
M is 32% done
Akward. I have absolutely no problem with sex scenes fading to black, especially when the plot is strong and I get engrossed in a mystery. BUT. This one felt... odd. Why would you describe the foreplay in detail and end the scene with one MC being impatient and thinking how he can't wait for... things to happen? It's like telling me he's having the best burgers in town, but not elaborating on what they taste like!
Jan 19, 2016 02:33AM Add a comment
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Bryan Clark
Bryan Clark is 10% done
This book grabbed me with the first page and just keeps getting better
Sep 26, 2015 10:12AM Add a comment
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