Status Updates From Prisoner of the Raven

It also takes away a bit of mystery from the book. Sometimes the titles are easy to figure out but other times you have to think about it and all of that is taken away when the title is said in the book. I'm getting so stuck-up. >.>

I always hate when author's explicitly have the name of the book mentioned during dialogue in said book. It feels super cheesy to me and I can just imagine the author sitting back and smirking going "See what I did there?!!?!?!". Yes, we saw. So brilliant.

"his bear-paw of a hand" hahahah. I found that funnier than I should have.

There were some things here that just made it impossible for me to like this. It started out ok, but ugh.

Page 24-25. What the hell just happened? Is there a missing page? One moment MC are talking about wine, the next - about Randulf's wives.