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Megan
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I like that there is a strong female character as the lead and I love that there is a fan of walking dead! I do however find the actual writing to be ... Stiff, it doesn't really flow, there are a lot of places where two sentences are used but one slightly longer one would read better. There is also an overuse of the world I instead of using -ing on the end of a verb.
— Jun 27, 2016 12:59PM
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Mai Balaibo
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Annnddd...this nice change gets pretty old fast.
— Oct 30, 2014 12:48AM
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Mai Balaibo
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It's a nice change that it's the girl MC who does the protecting (and she has three guys in tow). Kinda wanna read it in her POV.
— Oct 29, 2014 08:23PM
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Mai Balaibo
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That 'I ♥ Daryl' guy is really starting to annoy me.
— Oct 29, 2014 07:40PM
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pinK
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I really wish I knew more of what is going on. I can't help but think Holly would be a better main character than Galen.
— Jul 17, 2013 09:02PM
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pinK
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Wow! This is freakin fast paced. Galen is a bit of a wimp, bit can be expected during a freakin zombie apocalypse. Holly is a total badass though.
— Jul 17, 2013 02:20AM
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Elizabeth Arrowood
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Putting this one on hold to read the Never series.
— Jul 16, 2013 12:19PM
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