Megan’s Reviews > DeadBorn > Status Update

I like that there is a strong female character as the lead and I love that there is a fan of walking dead! I do however find the actual writing to be ... Stiff, it doesn't really flow, there are a lot of places where two sentences are used but one slightly longer one would read better. There is also an overuse of the world I instead of using -ing on the end of a verb.