Status Updates From Elian (The Marriage Groups #1)

Not really grabbing me. Have issues with why didn't they let him know that they would be picking him? Why let him just feel unwanted. I am going to take a break & come to this a little later.

To dnf or not? Surely my time is worth more than this!

Really struggling to finish this book. It's just bad.

yes, there's been definitely some progress since Tate Pack (finally an editor on the case), but still the same issues of "make it up as you go along", "let's describe what they're wearing" and "if you don't have a clue how to solve the plot, stall". And the names... Carrington. Really?! Nevin JUNIOR!? Why do I keep doing it myself...

I swear I will get a bruise for the amount of facepalm I have been doing with this book o.O

_"he wanted to scream, to tell he was there, to choose him, pick him, anyone"... wasn't this a line from one of "mated at midnight"? The one with the twin unicorns?

This is me giving Vicktor Alexander another chance. I can only hope there have been significant improvements since Tate Pack (oh please pretty please).

I know Mpreg stories are limited on how a child can be born but I just felt a head desk moment there.

I'm speechless after that last chapter. I don't know how many times I went "Eh? o_0"

I have a feeling I'm going to have trouble reviewing this one.

Info dump alert. This one is the second one in this book. I appreciate this is sci-fi but I've read hardcore sci-fi that isn't this boring with massive amounts of world building junk dumping on me.

Really, Elian? The god Andalusia just spoke directly to you, told you "you are special" in so many words, and you're still saying you're not? Really?

What the fuck? this book is so jumpy and what is really sad is that i am skimming through the sex scenes just to get them over with, what should be extremely erotic is just flat and rushed and lacking, also way to common.