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Will
is 89% done
The cutie: clever conceit but bordering on the farcical. Good twist, though a bit predictable. Would be a four starter of a lesser author, but that's an Egan ⭐⭐⭐
Into Darkness: excellent hard conceit and twist. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Appropriate Love: Shudder worthy body horror by way of captialism, but also arguably bit written-by-a-man. ⭐⭐⭐⭐
The Moral Virologist. Solidly executed - great punchline⭐⭐⭐⭐
— Aug 08, 2022 01:32AM
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Into Darkness: excellent hard conceit and twist. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Appropriate Love: Shudder worthy body horror by way of captialism, but also arguably bit written-by-a-man. ⭐⭐⭐⭐
The Moral Virologist. Solidly executed - great punchline⭐⭐⭐⭐

Will
is 68% done
The walk: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ - as above: use tech to come up with a conceit with metaphysical implications, put a character in a situation where they arise, resolve with a twist. Very well done, if a bit paint by numbers (but then it is early Egan....)
— Aug 03, 2022 02:53AM
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Will
is 63% done
The Moat: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Very well executed, touches on the concept without dwelling too much on it, teases and intrigues.
— Aug 03, 2022 02:03AM
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Very well executed, touches on the concept without dwelling too much on it, teases and intrigues.

Will
is 59% done
A kidnapping (⭐⭐⭐) and Learning to be me (⭐⭐⭐⭐) both feature the thorny questions of sentience, consciousness and self that were such a joy in Permutation City.
— Aug 02, 2022 08:18AM
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Will
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The safe-deposit box: ⭐⭐⭐⭐
Quantum leap meet metaphysics. Applied dust theory (q.v. Permutation City)
— Aug 01, 2022 08:32AM
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Quantum leap meet metaphysics. Applied dust theory (q.v. Permutation City)

Will
is 37% done
Axiomatic : ⭐⭐⭐⭐
Tight little techno-moral fable.
— Aug 01, 2022 03:50AM
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Tight little techno-moral fable.

Will
is 32% done
Blood Sisters: ⭐⭐
Story 's got too much crammed into it, it makes the arc and the pacing unbalanced.
— Jul 31, 2022 07:42AM
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Story 's got too much crammed into it, it makes the arc and the pacing unbalanced.

Will
is 26% done
The Caress: ⭐⭐⭐
Efficient and full of potential, but I am discovering that 90s Egan's capacity for an excellent premise overtakes his ability to drive it home, plot-wise.
Bit like Eugene in this respect. Still very effective, though
— Jul 31, 2022 02:26AM
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Efficient and full of potential, but I am discovering that 90s Egan's capacity for an excellent premise overtakes his ability to drive it home, plot-wise.
Bit like Eugene in this respect. Still very effective, though

Will
is 17% done
Eugene: ⭐⭐⭐⭐
A very good set-up teeing off a surprising dénouement.
— Jul 29, 2022 06:32AM
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A very good set-up teeing off a surprising dénouement.

Will
is 11% done
The Hundred-light-year Diary: 4 stars.
Also exploring looser conceit that wouldn't stand a longer format (though this one could yield several stories - maybe it will)?
Good Eganian collision of mundane realism and big sci-fi concepts. Very nice arc. Very tight. There's no fat on this text.
— Jul 27, 2022 09:22AM
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Also exploring looser conceit that wouldn't stand a longer format (though this one could yield several stories - maybe it will)?
Good Eganian collision of mundane realism and big sci-fi concepts. Very nice arc. Very tight. There's no fat on this text.

Will
is 6% done
The Infinite Assassin: 3 stars. Competent, but the conceit means the form has to be short and the ending a bit meaningless. Tight opener.
— Jul 27, 2022 07:53AM
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