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The tribe you're using the name of is indigenous to ECUADOR. The Aztec empire was confined mostly to Mexico. THIS IS MAKING ME INSANE

Calling being a carrier of a non-fatal genetic condition having a "defective genome" is so fucking eugenicist holy fuck

Also what if we didn't call the mixed race kid w albinism "cotton" given the extremely racially charged history of the fibre holy shit lady

Author idk how to explain to you that two parents being carriers for one of the genes that can cause albinism in humans does not guarantee albinism 😭

What the fuck is happening

Anacondas are typically not this actively aggressive btw

The listing the scientific name of every species that gets mentioned thing is super fucking annoying

The dystopia is so annoying bc the author keeps mentioning weird fucked up concepts and then Not Expanding on them

Like girl what the fuck is a "mandatory death experience"

Stop doing racism never before conceived of and explain that shit

I know I'm mostly commenting on mundane bullshit things and not the extremely horrific and overt racism but I'm gonna keep doing that and say this: Jaguars don't purr

Also I hate the main character

"They think you're *El Tigre*, the Jaguar man. Imagine, the long awaited Aztec God"

Author in the meanest way possible, and doing exactly 0 research: you're wrong

1. This tribe is Ecuadorean, the Aztec empire did not extend to Ecuador
2. That means "the tiger"
3. Aztec god names aren't typically in Spanish
4. Jaguar in Spanish is... Jaguar

Oh no

Author please do not be weird about indigenous people (too late)

The genetics don't make any sense either

Also using Daught as shorthand for daughter is very strange and annoying

What the fuck is happening

Minor gripe given the general racist Everything about this book but: facial moles are called beauty marks. Diseased moles are called melanoma usually

Giving the Asian character dragon tattoos :/

Why did this lady invent a bunch of fake racial slurs based on gemstones 😭😭😭

See I knew this was gonna be racist but holy fucking shit I'm 7 pages in and I've read neonazi manifestos less racist than this

every new page of this slaps me across the face with another batch of insane sentences

this book is so insane. her mom decided their family tree was small and boring so she started calling Emily Dickinson her aunt. the oppressed little white girl is so full of hate and vitriol for anyone who’s not white and yet calls this man she’s fucking her “dark prince”. the delulu is so powerful here

PAPYRUS FONT SPOTTED

That was not a proper ending shut the fuck up LMAO

Victoria PLEASE be normal about them liking each other

Not Edens dad says she has a woman brain and can't make sound decisions because of her hormones 💀

I feel like the best time to say I love you to your whatever these two are is no directly after her dog died

WHAT IS THIS RELATIONSHIP WHY ARE THEY SO TOXIC