Status Updates From The Gift of Illusion

Pretty bored so far...

Double the meh!

... meh.

Finished. Whew! it was interesting for certain and points for the ending but the jury in my head needs to process the rest. Review to come soon...

now we're getting somewhere...ooh but do we really have to go in the creepy old mansion of horror? O-O

Okay...I was having a hard time getting into it, but now I'm curious where it will lead. Have to mention though...it reminds me A LOT of this one movie with Denzel Washington where the song "Time is on My Side" was predominately featured... hmmm...

I've only just begun but wow...that's quite an opening sequence. Curious what held our "hero" back though and what the "tit-for-tat" remark was about. we shall see...

I've only just begun but wow...that's quite an opening sequence. Curious what held our "hero" back though and what the "tit-for-tat" remark was about. we shall see...

So I'm getting better at reading though the writing issues, plus it's not as bad further in the book but I do believe I just read the grossest book scene ever created. I might be sick. Seriously.

Apparently in Elmwood the police force is really not interested in evidence and I've now watch this cop steal evidence, destroy evidence, put his bare hands all over crime scene before they're dust etc and now throw evidence in the trash. I mean if you really were attacked, the guy hadn't been found and your night gown was covered in his blood. They would not let you throw it in a trash can. Seriously?!

So I started drafting some of the things I want to mention in the review and I feel like my review is going to be come a how to writing manual. Between MASSIVE POV issues and a mix of info dumping what he did research and scenes that clearly demonstrate a lack of research to write a helpful and detailed review it's going to take forever.