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message 101: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
"Ye call that rank bowl of dry leaves a salad?" my brother questioned angrily, scratching under his arm.


message 102: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
I shrugged, "In case you have failed to take note of it, I am slightly poor at the moment..'


message 103: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
"Aye, that you are," said he, smiling nastily, but at a sudden sweeping gesture from his female companion he seemed to relent.


message 104: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
I shrugged, though I wondered by what power this woman was using to keep my brother in line; blackmail, maybe?


message 105: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
I had little time to think on it however, for a-sudden as I watched, the empty salad-bowl, at a word, from the lady, rose into the air gathering up its spilt contents in the same moment.


message 106: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
I stared, pretty sure I had a horrified expression on my face.


message 107: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
"The meal will suffice," Nora said to my brother, as she seated herself at the table where, only a few moments earlier, I had refreshed myself with a cup of tea.


message 108: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
Since it was the only chair in the whole house, I decided to evacuate to my bedroom upstairs were I could read my book in peace.


message 109: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
Though I shut the door firmly as I entered, the sounds of my brother's most unmannerly smacking still came clearly to my ears.


message 110: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (last edited Aug 20, 2012 11:24PM) (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
I picked up my travelling guitar, playing it one last time before I had to sell the prescious thing.


message 111: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
My state of poverty, I must confess, was mostly of my own doing.


message 112: by Jonathan , The Wise (new)

Jonathan  Terrington (thewritestuff) | 457 comments Mod
I had sold my possessions for moral reasons.


message 113: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
And yet, when times like my current situation arose, I could not help but feel rather foolish at having done so.


message 114: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
Unknowingly, a tear came to my eye- but it wasn't because I had sold almost all of my scarce possessions.


message 115: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
I had often hoped, through the passing of many years, that when my brother and I saw one another face to face again it would be on better terms, never the matter how unlikely such a hope was.


message 116: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
"You always were my Favourite," came the soft voice from behind me, making me jump.


message 117: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (last edited Aug 26, 2012 10:07PM) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
I whipped round and saw, standing in my bed-room doorway, the elegant form of Nora Threatening.


message 118: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
I stared at her, livid confusion on my face.


message 119: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
"It's really always been you I wanted," she said softly, a slow and (thought I) rather devious smile parting her lips.


message 120: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
"What do you mean, exactly?" I said, choosing my word carefully as I did and taking one last step backwards.


message 121: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
"Isn't it obvious?" she almost purred, using my unease to her advantage and moving closer.


message 122: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
"I.. Don't think so.."


message 123: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
At that moment the angry shouting of my brother came roaring up the stairs.


message 124: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
I grabbed my coat, taking advantage of the lady's distraction and dashed out of my bedroom, heading for the door.


message 125: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
She did not make a move to stop me, only said in a low, humming sort of tone: "It's alright if you run for now; I'll see to you before long."


message 126: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
I shuddered, "make sure you lock up my house when you are done contaminating it with your presence, brother!" I called behind my back.


message 127: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
As I made my way slowly down the deserted lane I could not surpress a shudder.


message 128: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
I hoped my dog was alright there by himself.


message 129: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
It seemed to me to take an hour, but it was really only a few minutes later that I entered the small village upon the fringes of which I dwelt.


message 130: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (last edited Jun 16, 2014 02:04AM) (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
I breathed in the smell of freshly cut fruit and heard the sound of the night to night sights.


message 131: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
(Ummmm... Wasn't it night?)

I did not pause for sight-seeing however, but made my way straight to the tavern.


message 132: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
(ummm..... RAINBOW UNICORN! *goes back to story*)

As I arrived, I chanced a look up.


message 133: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
I nodded to myself, having caught the glance of the dark form waiting upon the steps; I had not come to the tavern for a drink.


message 134: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
Getting my wits about me, I bounded up the stairs to the tavern two at a time, knowing this was a very impatient and dangerous man to leave waiting.


message 135: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
"Ye made it," he said as I reached him; "excellent."


message 136: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
Glancing behind me with worried eyes, I asked him, " Have you got it?"


message 137: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (last edited Sep 02, 2012 09:49PM) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
He considered my nervous question with a rather smug air, taking no care in my apparent haste, and answered: "Maybe. 'Ave ya got me coin?"


message 138: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
"Depends. Do you have the item I requested?" I said, taking out and jingling all the money I had saved up to buy what I wanted.


message 139: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
A new look crept into his eye, and he hastily produced from somewhere in the folds of his very dirty attire a small bottle filled with an emerald liquid.


message 140: by Kylie Reads A Lot (new)

Kylie Reads A Lot (kyliereadsalot) I greedily snatched it from his dirty hands and placed it into my coat pocket.


message 141: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
I hand him the money, repressing the growing smirk that threatened to show itself before the conclusion of the trade.


message 142: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
I started back home.


message 143: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
The trip home was cold and sticky - I still had to wash that sugar out of my comfy cloak.


message 144: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
The trip home was cold and sticky - I still had to wash that sugar out of my comfy cloak.


message 145: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
The wind had begun to pick up.


message 146: by Mantha8225 (last edited Apr 30, 2013 04:34PM) (new)

Mantha8225 | 21 comments I could've sworn I heard rustling steps behind me, not at all in sync with mine, but when I looked back nervously, afraid of being robbed of the "package" that had cost me so dearly, but saw nobody.


message 147: by Agony (new)

Agony | 124 comments It was in that exact moment that I herd a loud Scream. The hairs on my neck stood on end as I turned to see a dark silouette standing there. My heart began to race as it stepped slowly towards me.


message 148: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
Its voice reached me a moment later; a voice like a snake's hiss slithering through mud: "Time to pay up."


message 149: by Agony (new)

Agony | 124 comments slowly, I stepped back.


message 150: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
The growing fear was a-rising in my chest - I feared my heart would burst upon this creature's words.


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