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message 51: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
I stepped forward quickly intending to continue, half blinded by the heat of my wrath, but he was too swift for me.


message 52: by Jonathan , The Wise (new)

Jonathan  Terrington (thewritestuff) | 457 comments Mod
I watched as he stepped aside, allowing my momentum to carry me into the hard, wooden door.


message 53: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
"Don't start," he spat, his heavy Scottish accent sounding far more fierce than I recalled.


message 54: by Jonathan , The Wise (last edited Aug 05, 2012 11:59PM) (new)

Jonathan  Terrington (thewritestuff) | 457 comments Mod
"'Don't start,'" I mocked from the floor, "You started this by arriving here!"


message 55: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
"So ye thinks I came here on me own account?" he asked, peering down at me, and raising high one bushy eyebrow.


message 56: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
"Then why are you in my house?" I retorted angrily.


message 57: by Jonathan , The Wise (last edited Aug 06, 2012 12:08AM) (new)

Jonathan  Terrington (thewritestuff) | 457 comments Mod
"We was a put a little out of our ways - Ye certaintly are living in a hermit like way, brother!"


message 58: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
I rose slowly to my feet, never taking my eyes off him.


message 59: by Jonathan , The Wise (new)

Jonathan  Terrington (thewritestuff) | 457 comments Mod
Any Crown-Man, particularly my brother, was not to be trusted.


message 60: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
"Always heard that hermits treated company with right nice kindess, a meal maybe?"


message 61: by Jonathan , The Wise (new)

Jonathan  Terrington (thewritestuff) | 457 comments Mod
I glared at him, "I would never treat anyone who serves the Crown to such hospitality!"


message 62: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
My brother sighed, put his fingers to his mouth and whistled, and the next moment the golden haired lady I had seen with him earlier appeared in the doorway.


message 63: by Jonathan , The Wise (new)

Jonathan  Terrington (thewritestuff) | 457 comments Mod
She had a bewitching smile, the reason for which became obvious as she raised a dainty hand.


message 64: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
I cowered; my brother was one thing, but enchantment was another.


message 65: by Jonathan , The Wise (new)

Jonathan  Terrington (thewritestuff) | 457 comments Mod
An arc of light flickered on the edge of her index finger threateningly.


message 66: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
"I-I believe you said something about a meal?" I stammered, slumping in defeat.


message 67: by Jonathan , The Wise (new)

Jonathan  Terrington (thewritestuff) | 457 comments Mod
"You are most...enchanting," the woman's voice was soft but tinged with venom.


message 68: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
"As you are threatening, miss." I replied, straightening up and pulling at the crinkles in my sleeve.


message 69: by Jonathan , The Wise (new)

Jonathan  Terrington (thewritestuff) | 457 comments Mod
"It's Miss Threatening, actually...Miss Nora Threatening."


message 70: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
"How suiting..."


message 71: by Jonathan , The Wise (new)

Jonathan  Terrington (thewritestuff) | 457 comments Mod
The smile broadened visibly upon her face.


message 72: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
I shuddered because these people were in my house.


message 73: by Jonathan , The Wise (new)

Jonathan  Terrington (thewritestuff) | 457 comments Mod
"So," I asked, "What can I get you ladies first?"


message 74: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (last edited Aug 07, 2012 12:27AM) (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
"Don't refer to me as a girl, brother, ever again, or i will kill in such a painful and brutal manner you will die screaming..." My kind brother growled murderously, "But my Lady would like some salad, at the least?"


message 75: by Jonathan , The Wise (new)

Jonathan  Terrington (thewritestuff) | 457 comments Mod
"Salad and water, no meat or else I cannot perform...my duties."


message 76: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
"What du-" I started, but then cut off from the murdrous look still on my brother's face.


message 77: by Jonathan , The Wise (new)

Jonathan  Terrington (thewritestuff) | 457 comments Mod
"One does not question the Lady," he stated.


message 78: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
"And this lady represents....?" I countered.


message 79: by Jonathan , The Wise (new)

Jonathan  Terrington (thewritestuff) | 457 comments Mod
A solid blow placed me on the floor again.


message 80: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
"Ouch. What was that for?" i muttered, getting up off the floor for the second time in a row.


message 81: by Jonathan , The Wise (new)

Jonathan  Terrington (thewritestuff) | 457 comments Mod
"Stop talking!" My brother was in a foul mood.


message 82: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
"Oh, look.... Talkety, talketty, talk talk." i said, being immature.


message 83: by Jonathan , The Wise (new)

Jonathan  Terrington (thewritestuff) | 457 comments Mod
My brother's eyes narrowed dangerously.


message 84: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (last edited Aug 07, 2012 01:07AM) (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
Sighing, i relented my immaturity and instead asked a reasonable question, "Why are you even at my house, anyway? There's a Inn just down the road that is never full..."


message 85: by Jonathan , The Wise (new)

Jonathan  Terrington (thewritestuff) | 457 comments Mod
"Because that house of drunkards is not fit for a lady!"


message 86: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (last edited Aug 07, 2012 01:13AM) (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
"Of what status is she? Noble? If commoner, she can do just as the rest of us normal people do!" i said, walking into my tiny tidy kitchen and getting out the equipment i needed to make a salad.


message 87: by Jonathan , The Wise (new)

Jonathan  Terrington (thewritestuff) | 457 comments Mod
"Royal blood actually," the woman answered this time.


message 88: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
I stop what i was doing and turned to my brother, asking, "And you brought her here?"


message 89: by Jilda (new)

Jilda Leigh (Jilda_Leigh) | 5 comments My brother replied, "Hell yeah I brought her. Someone has to be the DD if we're drinking Tequila!"


message 90: by Jonathan , The Wise (new)

Jonathan  Terrington (thewritestuff) | 457 comments Mod
"We are not amused," I said in answer to his jibe.


message 91: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (last edited Aug 07, 2012 11:40PM) (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
"We?" my borther inqired, raising an eyebrow, "got a friend here, have you?"


message 92: by Jonathan , The Wise (new)

Jonathan  Terrington (thewritestuff) | 457 comments Mod
"Trust me, royalty in the future will use that line to death!"


message 93: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
"Always with the jokes, brother. Always.." he sighed tiredly.


message 94: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
I refocused my attention to the preparation of the salad.


message 95: by Jonathan , The Wise (new)

Jonathan  Terrington (thewritestuff) | 457 comments Mod
There is, it must be said, nothing to take the anger away from a man like making a salad.


message 96: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
I started to whistle as I made the salad cheerfully, not realizing I was.


message 97: by Jonathan , The Wise (new)

Jonathan  Terrington (thewritestuff) | 457 comments Mod
The tune was an old one our mother used to sing over our cribs.


message 98: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
My brothers eyes narrowed, recognizing the tune.


message 99: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
Presently, I finished preparing the sparse meal and set it before him- only to have it thrown up into my face.


message 100: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
I sighed,"You've never changed, have you?"


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