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An apple. A brilliant shade of red, depending on type. Or the hue of softest green. And a stubby stem erupting from the top, displaying a leaf, one that seems ready to shrivel and fall. And a burst of light radiates of the shiny skin, when fallen under it's kin. When teeth push into the tender skin, the mouth is rewarded with a flood of sweet juice, sticky and fine.
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Thank you! I had to write that really quickly too.
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Awesome guys!:-) You're all so talented!****
Delicious, to say the least. Colored vibrantly in all cases. Surface so smooth, your hand glides on it without trouble. Shaped perfectly, accurately. Named apples. Ah, apples! Stomach demading apples, your teeth caress on it's gleaming, hard suface. Ever so slowly, you gnaw it, the apple turning into little chunks of yummy crumbs. Your eyes flutter closed, tasting every inch of the apple. Nippling, pinching, chawing, chomping, crushing, munching, crunching, no more is there. You crave for more. You want more. You need more.
Apples.Hard, yet soft. Greener than grass, or redder than Snow White's lips.(or in the case of a pink lady, both.) And don't you just want a kiss? So sweet, when good. When bad, suddenly it isn't greener than grass, but greener than ooze. Not redder than lips, but than blood spilled. You always picture the perfect apple - round, red, delicious, its stem short, decorated with a small leaf. Yet I always picture a different apple. Green, ovel, it has a little bump on one side and has a bit of a sour side to its taste, its stump pulled out by a child. How do I know? I just do.
Beautiful.
((LOL. Mai, you sound like a commercial.))
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Delicious, to say the least. Colored vibrantly in all cases. Surface so smooth, your hand glides on it without trouble. Shaped perfectly, accuratel..."
That's awesome.. haha, Pirl's right, you do sound like you're advertising..
Pirl[HelpTheInvisibleChildrenWeMustStopKony!} wrote:
Apples.
Hard, yet soft. Greener than grass, or redder than Snow White's lips.(or in the case of a pink lady, both.) And don't you just want a kiss? So sweet, when goo..
This struck me for some reason. I really, really like it. It's like free verse poetry, almost. Really good imagery.
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Grace snagged the first apple off the tree, brushed her thumb briefly over the faintly rough surface, and raised the fruit to her mouth, sinking her teeth in. Sweet, cool juices burst into her mouth, puckering her lips slightly. She chewed, savouring the crunch. Bliss with sweet drops of juice as she swallowed, wanting to smile with delight.
Moving on, Grace tossed the green fruit aside, having only took one bite. It didn't matter. The first bite always tasted the best.
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I can't. I've never been inlove.I'lll skip this one.
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But I don't want a perfect guy. I don't know what I want.
Thanks:D Lol I just realised that!I'll write it later:P
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Mai~KONY 2012 wrote: "Awesome guys!:-) You're all so talented!****
Delicious, to say the least. Colored vibrantly in all cases. Surface so smooth, your hand glides on it without trouble. Shaped perfectly, accuratel..."
Ahaha, lol, it sounds more like ur describing a guy wanting sex with his girlfriend again. ahah, lol :P still really good Mai :) xxx
Lol ewww! Didn't mean that! Thanks anyways!:P Why don't you write one? For the other challenge?
Lol, haha, yeh but it's still good and still does describe an apple :)And I cba right now but maybe later, lol :P xxx
Hahaha thank you!:)Lol can't wait to read it!
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Delicious, to say the least. Colored vibrantly in all cases. Surface so smooth, your hand glides on it without trouble. Shaped p..."
Haha it totally does!
If anyone wants too, I started a new story plus I have three chapters in my old one, here: http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/7...
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Here's the link if you can't find it http://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/8...
It's ma amie, Autumn lolAh, I've never been in love, but I'll try this out.
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I don't know ANY french. Our school only offers Arabic.Which is perfectly fine, cuz I would probably pick Arabic anyway, given the choice. In Arabic in high school you go to all these cool trips and stuff, plus it's an interesting language.
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Guess what, Pirl???I know French and Arabic. In your face!!! Haha just kidding:P
But you don't know Hebrew, honey. Not that impressive anymore, is it?
I don't need to know Hebrew because I won't really need it that much.
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Haha take me with you!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really wanna go to Paris!! I love French too. Speaking of French, I have my French exam next week. I am scared!
I'm never planning on leaving the borders of Israel except for visiting family, and they're all in the US and in a place in Europe which's name I can't remember, but they don't speak French.Mai: good luck.
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My perfect guy wouldn't be much specific. The only feture he's have to have were nice, striaght, white teeth. Like Taylor Laughtner's. God, I love his teeth.
I love teeth. Look him up, you'll see why I love them so.
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I think teeth is not a super important trait to have.
Nemphisi! How could you saw that!and Cheyla, lucky you. I'm still going through the braces.
French and Mandarin at the same time. :3
I have braces. That is why I say teeth aren't that important. Because I am freaking sick of braces.
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and Cheyla, lucky you. I'm still going through the braces."
Thank you :) and I think braces are cool
Trust me, you think braces are cool until you have them.
This is not a contest.
Your first challenge is:
Describe an apple