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Mar 01, 2012 03:47PM

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Okay, well, of course I'm going to post The Ballad of a Rain Girl first! My most popular, and farthest developed story http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
my, well, I will just have to take a look at this story which I have course not read yet *bats eyelashes innocently*
HA! You, not read The Ballad? PUH LEASE, you're like the first one to comment on every one ;D
This is getting written on about on an online magazine, I may be getting interviewed for this soon! :DD Just a little short story that is supposed to be attached to pics my dad took of a red chair. http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
This is getting written on about on an online magazine, I may be getting interviewed for this soon! :DD Just a little short story that is supposed to be attached to pics my dad took of a red chair. http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Description:
My sister died at the beach last summer.
Well, not really.
She almost died.
We’ll never know how she fell, until she wakes up.
If she ever does.
She’s in a coma, lying in a hospital bed three miles away from home.
She’s not dead.
But she’s not alive either.
It's all Angelica's fault, or so she believes, that her sister Carmen fell down from the rocks and into the water. Ani is trapped in a world of fear and guilt, surrounded by people who cannot live without her sister.
Then she meets Martin. He's dangerous, spending eight weeks in a youth detention centre where Ani's dad works. But Martin isn't all that he seems - he's seen trauma like Angelica, and can explain things about life that nobody else can.
But the closer they get, the more complicated things become . . .

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
For others, my normal story:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
READ THEM!!! THEY ARE MASTER PIECES!!!!!! Lol just kidding!:P
The No Names, a story of the extraordinary kids held back by society with labels like "clinically insane", or, in our girl Svetlana Hale's case, "mentally impaired".
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
Hey please read and comment on my poetry and songs!
Songs: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
Poetry: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
You can also check out my books here: http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/8...
THANKS!
Songs: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
Poetry: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
You can also check out my books here: http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/8...
THANKS!

Demi Costello is heartbroken, frustrated and scared. She is living in a world of grief and horror.
Kelsea Richardson was her best friend. And three weeks ago, she went missing, leaving no trace or information.
Then Demi finds her diary. Of course the police want any evidence they can find, or anyone can find, but that diary is full of Kelsea's life, her hopes, her dreams, her hardships, and secrets.
Demi can't hand it in. Yet. She has to find out what happened first, before anyone else does.
In this story, we take a journey through two best friends' lives, written in two different formats - Kelsea's heart warming, breath taking diary enteries, filled with love, tenderness and sorrow. And Demi's flashbacks, and memories, of her time spent with her best friend.
And every step along the way, the reasons why become clearer . . .
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
...Anyone wanna do a read for read?
I read over it, and I thought it was very, very good. You have a real talent, and I'm looking forward to reading more from you! :)
Belle LaCordé is the new girl at Bête Academy, a prestigious school that is full of only the best of the best. From straight A+ students to children of big CEO's, you're going to have to be a somebody to attend Bête Academy. Belle's father, Maurice, used to be a rich businessman, until he lost multiple shipments, plummeting his riches to rock bottom. To help support Maurice, Belle picks up a part-time job at Enchanté Castle. She does small and big jobs, whether it's cleaning rooms, or cooking a feast. Living in the large "Palace", as Belle calls it, is "Prince" Adam Scott, a very attractive eighteen year old with a cold heart and rude attitude. And on top of that, he attends Bête Academy, along with Belle. Belle knows not to get caught up with a guy like Adam, but suddenly he starts paying more and more attention to her. What's a girl to do?
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
Yep, re-telling (: It's been updated-- check it out anyone, please!
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
Yep, re-telling (: It's been updated-- check it out anyone, please!
Emily Wicker has always been secluded from everyone, even the closest of her friends. She's been an outcast and doesn't exactly fit in anywhere. So, Emily just drifts from place to place. She meets new people, old crushes, exes, and experiences very "exciting" adventures. When she thinks she has almost everything figured out (her job, future husband, children's name, etc.) Elijah England is put into the picture. He's gorgeous, funny, and different. Every thing Emily would want in a man. As each minute, day, week, and month passes, Emily slowly realizes she's falling for Elijah. Too bad she's not going to get her happily ever after.
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

My sister died at the beach last summer.
Well, not really.
She almost died.
We’ll never know how she fell, until she wakes up.
If she ever does.
She’s in a coma, lying in a hospital bed three miles away from home.
She’s not dead.
But she’s not alive either.
It's all Angelica's fault, or so she believes, that her sister Carmen fell down from the rocks and into the water. Ani is trapped in a world of fear and guilt, surrounded by people who cannot live without her sister.
Then she meets Martin. He's dangerous, spending eight weeks in a youth detention centre where Ani's dad works. But Martin isn't all that he seems - he's seen trauma like Angelica, and can explain things about life that nobody else can.
But the closer they get, the more complicated things become . . .
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http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
Title: the Days Of Kelsea's

Description:
Demi Costello is heartbroken, frustrated and scared. She is living in a world of grief and horror.
Kelsea Richardson was her best friend. And three weeks ago, she went missing, leaving no trace or information.
Then Demi finds her diary. Of course the police want any evidence they can find, or anyone can find, but that diary is full of Kelsea's life, her hopes, her dreams, her hardships, and secrets.
Demi can't hand it in. Yet. She has to find out what happened first, before anyone else does.
In this story, we take a journey through two best friends' lives, written in two different formats - Kelsea's heart warming, breath taking diary enteries, filled with love, tenderness and sorrow. And Demi's flashbacks, and memories, of her time spent with her best friend.
And every step along the way, the reasons why become clearer . . .
This is a short-story that I'm writing! I basically am just using the lyrics and mood of songs, and incorporating them into my writing! All the chapters are named after the song that it is representing. You may know the songs, and you may not! There's only one way to find out though! :D
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

oh and I know it's entered in the contest but I would like more readers/reviews especially on the darker chapters.
hope this doesn't violate anything to do with the contest.
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
Set in 2182 P.A.E.W
Addonexus takes place on a planet called Xillia, The story follows a man named Addon Axusia, he has just quit his military academy and is now leaving the city to travel and find a place where he belongs, while riding the train smugglers attack forcing Addon to team up with some academy students and fend off the attackers, pulling Addon back into a world he never ever wanted to return to.
Get lost in this gut wrenching gritty Sci-Fi adventure about death, destruction, betrayal, and understanding.
Nope! doesn't violate it at all.
We're pretty lenient with rules here.
I'll have a read right now.
We're pretty lenient with rules here.
I'll have a read right now.
This is a link to The Eye of the Beholder, the story I'm writing for NaNoWriMo! :3 I think it's going really well so far, so if you guys wanna give it a quick check-out, that'd be awesome! Thanks!
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...
I have a story that I'm writing now in a burst of inspiration. In-depth critique, anyone?
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...
Title: The Wing Girl
Genre: YA Romance/Humor
Description: ... you shall see. Click ze link.
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...
Title: The Wing Girl
Genre: YA Romance/Humor
Description: ... you shall see. Click ze link.
Pssst! Anyone mind critiquing my friend Michael's writing? He doesn't want just my critiques, because I'm biased. But he's looking for honest critiques- the good, the bad, and the ugly. So pretty please? :3
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...
He's a poet!
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...
He's a poet!