Gregor and the Code of Claw
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Did the ending totally suck? How would you change it?
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Agreed. Hey I'm actually thinking about starting a huge thing to convince her to make another book. I've done the research and trust me, there are plenty of people who would vote for it!






I saw that it was obvious and I like what meg said to but he should have a few more adventures before that and more romantic moments with Luxa and in the end choose the underland because of her.



1. Move to the family farm in Virginia. I see a pathway that leads from Virginia to the Uncharted Lands. Maybe Hazard is sent to find Gregor, as he will look most like an Overlander. He has Mrs. Cormaci to help him get from NYC to Virginia. Also, Gregor could always move there himself if ya want it to be that far in the future.
2. Stay, knowing that their children can't just forget everything. I wouldn't say Gregor lives there. I would say he goes back and forth. Luxa and him take things slow. She eventually does invite him to her coronation or whatever at 15 and the entire family comes down, including Mrs. Cormaci. This is also Gregor's grandmother's first time down. By this time, Mrs. Cormaci has a whole book of photos she has had Gregor take down in the Underland. Also, Luxa even invites some stingers to the event after the Marks of Secret. There is an obsidian black bat statue in Ares' memory. Hazard is helping Howard in the hospital, still holding up Luxa's promise to never allow him to become a warrior. He wishes to travel and help all creatures in the Underland. With all my thinking on the scenario, this is obviously the one I prefer and I see this as the outcome I imagine when I think of these characters living happily. Luxa will be so happy the first time he comes back down with news that he is staying.

1. Move to the family farm in Virginia. I see a pathway that leads from Virg..."
I like the second idea better too, except I think it would create more of a conflict and better story line if Hazard is sort of a rebel, and tries to find ways to dismiss the promise that he made to Luxa about never becoming a warrior. I also think that 16 is a good age to return to the Underland for Gregor, and Luxa is 15. I also think that if a 6th book is written, the intro should focus on the depression that Gregor and Luxa went through after being separated. Then when they are finally reunited it will be legit amazing/satisfying.
I read these books last summer and I still get depressed when thinking about the ending of the 5th book. The stories will always remain in my soul....unfinished.


Woah thats actually a good idea! Bouncing off your idea: what if Gregor fights with other creatures he finds in the unchartend lands who are being oppressed by an unknown enemy. As the war between the two sides thickens, Gregor finally finds out who the enemies are-Regalians. And what's more, guess who is now the leader of Regalia and the one Gregor must fight against: Luxa!
What do you think?



Gregor's family decide to stay in New York and he asks his mum if he can visit the underland to tell Luxa and his friends the good news. He spends the night with them and boots.
All goes well and next morning, Vikus calls for him to ask him about the broken sword. Gregor told him that he broke the sword to symbolise killing the warrior in himself. But as he put the sword down something catches his eye.
He spots a price of paper poking out of the hilt and pulls it out. Vikus asks what it is. Another prophecy. Luxa walks in with hazard and says if he wants to take boots on a flight. When she sees the paper she says "Gregor, what is that..."
He says "see for yourself,"handing it to her
She reads the title and stops dead.
"Another prophecy...oh Gregor don't tell me it's about you" they all read it. Another quest awaits Gregor. But this time it says go to the place that regalia makes. Gregor is confused. But both Vikus and Luxa look worried. The paths draw out a symbol that mean a dangerous sea and Gregor reds the rest of the prophecy saying he, and each of his friends, must go and find the Cursed Pages (an enchanted book) that someone Has read out of and cursed the rats. Ripred is coughing and breathing hoarsly
Adventure (always asking each other who did it)
Find book and person at it - have to fight but he is a great fighter. Go back to regalia with him. Bring him before council Vikus sees him once and goes pale(r).
Guy says his name and he thought rats and humans were at war that's why he did it.
Luxa says that he was lead under false circumstances and should not be punished. Gregor asks Luxa if she knew him. No. Vikus found them.
"Luxa, I need to tell you something"
Luxa says nothing
"I have told you that you are an only child for so long now.... but no. (Name of book reader) is your brother. He ran away before you were born and never came back we assumed he was dead.
Story fill in
Gregor decides that he wants to live in the underland as he has more friends there. His mum at first says no, and why.
Gregor says "I like it there."
His dad "no it's not that I can tell..."
Lizzie " we won't judge you Gregor..."
Gregor "ok fine. I want to live in regalia because I want to live with Luxa. There. I've said it."
*crying* Mum " but we will never see you again."
Gregor "Yes you will mum. I will keep in regular touch by the grate and you can come and see me any time you like."
Finally agrees say goodbyes. Boots says to say hi to temp. Cut to underland and Gregor telling regalia the news.
someone end the story please. idk i have no ideas




The author was also making a statement- that war is not something restricted to the over lands. The plight of Gregor at the end of the book mirrors soldiers coming home from war- in a lot of ways having to start over, relearn how to live, the strangeness of things that used to be commonplace. She wanted to end the book on a note for a hopeful future- watching Boots grow. I think she succeeded in that, but honestly, it was pretty abrupt (if ever a prologue was needed…) I think it’s a little deep for a kids book, there’s nothing wrong with cushioning the harsh realities of life with a little HEA. Even Hunger Games had that…
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