City of Glass
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what part would you delete and what would you re place it with

what part did you not like and wish you could delete or rewrite?and what would you write?
Ugh, Jace, he is getting annoying. He needs to fix his emotional issues.
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Jan 03, 2012 07:18AM
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You people have to understand he acts like that for a reason. I would take away the part when Max died and instead have someone else either die or get hurt badly.
Sometimes the bad things have to happen in order for the story to move forward (to give other characters motives), so I wouldn't change a thing. If Max hadn't died, Isabelle and Jace would have never gone after Sebastian. I love Jace, and can sympathize with what he endured as a kid and the whole "to love is to destroy" mantra. I wouldn't change anything because in the end pretty much everything tied together nicely.
Probably that really small part where Simon comes into battle and meets that shadowhunter who all of a sudden gets whisked away by this flying demon and ultimately dies...haha...I'm serious I felt for that man!
I LOVED the Mortal Instruments series, but I think it should have stayed that way. So, I would take out the part where Sebastian's body disappears and replace it with them just completely getting rid of his body so that there wasn't a fourth book. (Or else the 5th book needs to really change my opinion.)
I also don't like that Simon got marked with the seven fold mark, I really wanted him to live, I just wish there was someway to keep him alive without marking him.
I also don't like that Simon got marked with the seven fold mark, I really wanted him to live, I just wish there was someway to keep him alive without marking him.
I couldn't change anything..Cassandra Clare is brilliant and thoroughly thinks the plot through before hand. I love it
ABSOLUTELY NOTHING!! I love this series and im almost done with City Of "Fallen Angels", then im reading the two prequels "Clockwork Angel", and "Clockwork Prince".. And I think its almost impossible to get sick of Jace.
NOTHING!!! this is my fav books of all time so i would not dare change anything!!!!But I might have added 1 more Jace scene <33333333333333333333333333
<3333 add more scenes about Alex and Magnus!!! I really like them!!
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