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Authors requesting reviewers > New short story from "On Dark Shores" now live on Amazon - anyone game to review it please?

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message 1: by J.A. (new)

J.A. Clement (jaclement) | 1328 comments Hey peeps!

I'm bringing out a series of short stories set in the world of On Dark Shores: The Lady. The first one is about 1500 words of story and is set ten years before the main story starts.

This is it!
Parallels The Black-Eyed Susan (On Dark Shores) by JA Clement

Anyone want to do me a review? Pretty please with a cherry on the top?

And thanks go to Amy for formatting it!
JAC


message 2: by Katy (new)

Katy (katyas-69) | 603 comments When I went to add this after you sent it, I couldn't find it; then I just followed think link ... did you know you have (at least) two pages with your books on them? This one is on the same page as one of the "The Lady" versions, but the OTHER "The lady" version, which I have added to my shelves, is on a separate author page, and "Parallels" is NOT on that page. Do you know any of the librarians that might help you combine your pages/editions so they are all together?

Am looking forward to reading this - I think I'll be doing KINDLE WEEKEND 9/16-19, which is probably when I'll read it.


message 3: by Cassie (new)

Cassie McCown (cassie629) | 713 comments I will get a review up asap! :-)


message 4: by J.A. (new)

J.A. Clement (jaclement) | 1328 comments Yeah, I imported it and then realised that my name is spelt differently on Amazon (no dots) Argh!
Need to sort that lot out at some point.

JAC


message 5: by Cambria (new)

Cambria (cambria409) | 3305 comments Great luck with the reviews JA!! I am not taking on any new reviews right now but when I am I will make it one of the first! :)
I am sure it is fantastic! Did you design the cover yourself? its great!


message 6: by C.S. Splitter (new)

C.S. Splitter | 979 comments I read that!

Honestly....I want to hear more about that story. It was compelling and ended in a way that left me wanting to hear the rest of the story! Well structured.

Splitter


message 7: by Patricia (new)

Patricia | 170 comments I would like to review for you, but I would not get to it until mid-October (estimate). If that's ok, let me know.

madley (AT) cogeco (DOT) ca


Patricia


message 8: by Amy Eye (new)

Amy Eye | 1841 comments Mod
Patricia wrote: "I would like to review for you, but I would not get to it until mid-October (estimate). If that's ok, let me know.

madley (AT) cogeco (DOT) ca


Patricia"


Patricia - it's flash fiction, only a few pages long, but really leaves you wanting to read more!

And you are very welcome JA for the formatting, I will have to go write my review on it! Thanks for reminding me!


message 9: by Patricia (new)

Patricia | 170 comments OK, I would love to review that - and I will certainly push it ahead in my reading schedule!

J.A. -- Amy , I would appreciate a copy in my email, if you still need another reviewer. And I will get it done.

email: madley (AT) cogeco (DOT) ca

Thank you!
Patricia


message 10: by J.A. (new)

J.A. Clement (jaclement) | 1328 comments Splitter, would you mind leaving me a review to that effect please, on Amazon or Smashwords or here or wherever? Thank you!

Cambria, I did do the cover myself - the spacing isn't quite right, I think, but will have another go. Glad you like it - I did but wasn't sure if it looked a bit home-made... Recognise the tree though?

Thanks Amy!

Patricia, will do - what format?

You lot are SUCH stars you know...
JAC


message 11: by Amy Eye (new)

Amy Eye | 1841 comments Mod
That's cuz u r amazing! hehe!


message 12: by Patricia (new)

Patricia | 170 comments J.A. wrote: "Splitter, would you mind leaving me a review to that effect please, on Amazon or Smashwords or here or wherever? Thank you!

Cambria, I did do the cover myself - the spacing isn't quite right, I ..."



Kindle format for desktops - I read off my laptop, no eReader yet, J.A.!!

Thank you!
Patricia


message 13: by J.A. (new)

J.A. Clement (jaclement) | 1328 comments Cool, mobi coming your way!

JAC


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