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message 1: by Kim (last edited Jan 24, 2011 11:33AM) (new)

Kim Crowley (kimcrow) | 1893 comments The best way to explain is through an example:

Kim: Hey, Kassidy, you still in there?
Cass: Yeah, I am no thanks to you.
Kim: Don't blame me. I love you and all, but I seriously can't help it if I have other stories to work on.
Cass: So you're saying that other characters are more important than me?
Kim: No, that's not what I'm saying. I'm saying that other STORIES are more important than you seeing as they actually kinda exist. Yours only has two chapters.
Cass: That is no fault of mine.
Kim: I know, it is all my fault. You may hate me.
Cass: Fine.
Kim: But you don't really because you love me from the bottom of your heart.
Cass: Yeah yeah whatever.

So, basically just chat to your characters :P


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

Me: What do you think of the new world?
Laurina: New world? Now you tell me! Get me out of this crazy place!! Or are you just gonna say it's not time yet?
Me: It isn't! You still need to do all that stuff!
Laurina: Don't tell me what I need to do! I'll do what I please!


message 3: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Lav: I love this topic! It makes me realize I'm not the only insane one!
Josh: Yay... more weirdos like you. How lucky for me.


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

Me: I want a drink.
Laurina: Live with it.


message 5: by Autumn (new)

Autumn (flwurautumn) | 4987 comments Autumn: HI JOSH. I'M A WEIRDO LIKE LAV!


Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Divya: Woah why is this topic so short?
Shreya: It was just remade. Now I'm trying to do homework. So shush.
Divya: Psh. Your homework is printing out pictures!
Shreya: I usually have more, okay? Now shush.
Rhea: You said you would write at lunch today. Why didn't you?
Shreya: My pencil wasn't working.
Ravi. *snort* Nice excuse.
Anjali: Ravi! Don't be so mean! It's not her fault!
Shreya: That's why Anjali's my favourite.
All characters: HEY!


message 7: by Talia (new)

Talia | 605 comments Talia: hi
Cyan: hello
Talia: What's up?
Cyan: nothing much...
Talia: same here

----Awkward silence----

Talia: ok I need to go do homework
Cyan: Bye

O_o this is not working...my character is just a really nice person


Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 2218 comments Jordan: Ah, The GTKYC topic is all clean and white!
Bonnie: GTKYC. Not a very attractive acronym.
Jordan: Yeah, well it's the best I could do on short notice.
Bonnie: At least you tried.
Jordan: *smiles*
Eddie: Hey! Stop flirting with my girlfriend!
Jordan: I just smiled! How is that flirting!
Bonnie: You're so jealous!
Eddie: It's his fault! *points*
Jordan: Uh-oh.


Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Shreya: :( What happened to Rea and Liz?
Anjali: LIZ? That's my friend's name!
Shreya: Not that Liz. Now be quiet.
Anjali: Psh. What happened to being your favourite?


message 10: by Talia (new)

Talia | 605 comments Rea: OH HELLO!
Talia: Shush Rea I never told you to appear
Rea: I appear subconsciously
Talia: O_o
Cyan: *pat pat* it's ok Talia


message 11: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Who's That Freak Over- Oh That's Just Autumn wrote: "Autumn: HI JOSH. I'M A WEIRDO LIKE LAV!"

Josh: Just shoot me now.


Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 2218 comments Eddie: I can help with that.


Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Ravi: Wowwww.
Rhea: Hi Rea! I have the same name as you except it has an H in it. :)
Divya: Um...thank you for that fact, Rhea....*whispers to Rea* She's only five.
Rhea: What?
Divya: Never mind.
Anjali: Are you writing nowww????
Shreya: Ehh....I'm coming up with ideas.
Anjali: Annddd....what are your ideas?
Shreya: I have a sudden urge to make Ravi do a weird dance on the train to liven things up.
Ravi: *facepalm*


message 14: by Autumn (new)

Autumn (flwurautumn) | 4987 comments Lav Lalie Fompledump (Lavendarlol) wrote: "Who's That Freak Over- Oh That's Just Autumn wrote: "Autumn: HI JOSH. I'M A WEIRDO LIKE LAV!"

Josh: Just shoot me now."


Adam: Don't tempt me.
Jennifer: Be nice.
Samantha: Guns are baaadddd.
Rain: They sure are, Sam, they sure are.


message 15: by Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. (last edited Jan 25, 2011 03:42AM) (new)

Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Rhea: Ooooh! New people! Hi Samantha and Jennifer and Adam and Rain! I'm Rhea and I'm five!
Anjali: I'm Anjali and I'm seven.
Shreya: I read Samantha's story and I have a feeling she will get on well with Rhea ;)
Rhea: She will? YAAAY!!!
Anjali: What about me?
Shreya: Eeeh...you're too quiet.
Anjali: Now you're going to deprive me of friends because I'm quiet?
Shreya: I'm just saying you'll feel out of place!
Anjali: I thought I was your favourite! :(
Shreya: Whoops. You weren't supposed to take that seriously.
Anjali: Meanie. :(


message 16: by tesni (last edited Jan 25, 2011 03:42AM) (new)

tesni (akhmatova) | 5031 comments Tez: Huzzah. A shiny new GTKYC topic. Score.
LaVaughn: It seems so.
Tez: hmm.
LaVaughn [whining] so when are you writing your novel about meeeee?
Tez: Hmm, maybe never. You already have a recently-unearthed short story.
LaVaughn: that's not enough. It's dreadful. Write a good one at least.
Tez: You're a mere plot bunny at the moment. We'll see what becomes of you.
LaVaughn: >.<


message 17: by Talia (new)

Talia | 605 comments Rea: Oh hello Rhea, have you been taken yet?
Talia: *coughcough* Rea, not everyone was trained as thieves
Rea: That explains everything!!! ahhh now I get why I recieve strange looks
Cyan: O_o
Rea: see what I mean Talia?
Talia: Maybe if you shut up ....
Rea: OH EXCUSE ME?!
Talia: nothing, nothing


Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Rhea: What do you mean?
Ravi: Erm...well...she means......*cough*
Divya: She's just talking about....
Shreya: Rhea! Want to go play with your dolls?
Rhea: YEAH!
Shreya: You see? It ALWAYS works with her.
Oh, and Rea, do you pronounce your name REE or REE-A?


message 19: by Molverine (new)

Molverine (deatheateregg) Lucas: Anna, you frighten me....
Anna: Because I can help being insane.
Lucas: Well...
Anna: I will kill you, Lucas Allen Barclay. Don't think I won't.
Lucas: That would kill Emmie, too, you know.
Anna: I hate you so freaking much


message 20: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Lav: Jerk! How dare you use the Emmie card on Anna when she's having troubles.


message 21: by Molverine (new)

Molverine (deatheateregg) Lucas: You heard her in WACC. She doesn't give a crap about me!
Anna: I do, too, you moron!! YOU'RE MY FIRST ROUNDISH CHARACTER I MADE UP TOTALLY ON MY OWN!


Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Shreya: Don't kill Emmie! :(
Ravi: You barely know her.
Shreya: I don't care. Don't kill her!
Rhea: Killing isn't nice!
Rohan: Shh! Rhea, Divya said we're not supposed to talk about that kind of stuff.
Rhea: I'm not! I'm just saying it isn't nice!
Rohan: It's still talking about it!
Rhea: Is not!
Rohan: Is so!
Divya:....And in a few seconds they'll be best friends again.
Shreya: That's Rohan and Rhea. You gotta love them.
Divya: Easy for you to say. You're not stuck with them 24/7.
Shreya: You're not in their class at school! So it's not twenty four seven!
Divya: Oh, shush.


message 23: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Lav: Writers just have to be mean to their characters OR THEY WOULD HAVE NO STORY. It's not our fault.
Alan: You aren't mean to me. I have a wonderful life.
Lav: *twitch*
Alan: What's wrong?
Lav: And sometimes we have to make the bad guy have a good life even when we want to write their death.
Alan: Calm down, Lav.
Lav: *headdesk*


Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Shreya: That is so true. Writers have to be mean to their characters.
Divya: Why'd you make us then?
Shreya: TO WRITE A STORY! DUH!
Divya: Or to have someone to make lame complaints to. *snort*
Shreya: Dude! The only reason my complaints seem lame is because you live in the 1940s! If you lived now, you'd understand!
Divya: If I lived in the 21st century, I would have no story.
Shreya: True dat.


Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Divya: SHREYA. GET OFF THE COMPUTER AND WRITE ALREADY.
Shreya: I'm at a dead end. Now SHUSH.
Divya: Do you want us to leave you?
Shreya: Stop threatening me with that! I've been busy!
Divya: You've been busy writing a one-page long dedication for our story that's NOT EVEN DONE.
Shreya: Very far from being done.
Divya: YOU SEE? I'M RIGHT!
Shreya: *facepalm* Fineee.


message 26: by RedPath (new)

RedPath | 853 comments Rosalia: You wrote last night, Red. Good job.
RP: ^-^ thank you!
Chrysanta: And tonight it'll be my story, right?
Pierce: It's my story too.
Chysanta: Oh, I'm sorry. Who's the main character? Huh? What was that? Oh, right. I am.
RP: >.< Quit arguing. I'll try to get to yours tonight. If I can just find that flashdrive...
Rosalia: You just had it last night! Where did it go?
RP: Funny, when people lose stuff, they generally don't know where it is.
Rosalia: Be quiet.
Maxen: Hey, Red. I heard that you were chaanging Joska's name.
RP: -nodnod- Yep. I don't know what its backround is. People from Crenvincia will have names that have Latin roots while people from Maran, where Joska's from, will have Germanic roots.
Chrysanta: Wow, you put a lot of thought into it.
RP: You bet.


Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Shreya: RP!!!!! IT'S YOU!!!!!
Rhea: We already know that!
Shreya: I know, but still....NOW WE CAN CHEER ABOUT HOW INDIA IS AWESOME!
Divya: Please. No more cheers about how India is awesome.
Shreya: But India is awesome! GO INDIA! *crazy dance*
Divya: *headwall*


message 28: by tesni (last edited Jan 29, 2011 01:43PM) (new)

tesni (akhmatova) | 5031 comments Seondeok: You really ought to be looking for your swimming costume.
Tez: I know, but it's lost anyway.
Seondeok: That's not really the right attitude to take when you're looking for something.
Tez: What else am I supposed to do?
Seondeok: say, you'd better watch out, swimming costume, because I need to take you on holiday with me and I'm not leaving until I find you! You may as well show yourself now!
Tez: You find it then >.<


Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Shreya: I lose a lot of stuff. Once I lost a jacket. o_o
Divya: Irresponsible!
Shreya: I know. You don't have to rub it in.
Anjali: There's only one thing you better not lose.
Shreya: What? My notebook?
Anjali: Your mind.
Shreya: Too late.
Anjali. o.O


message 30: by RedPath (new)

RedPath | 853 comments RP: INDIA! HUZZAH! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Chrysanta: -smacks-
RP: T-T
Rosalia: Yeah, most writers have lost their minds.


Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Shreya: Very true. But anyway.....INDIA!
Rhea: Stop. You're making me homesick!
Shreya: You had better get over your homesickness if you want to survive the rest of the story.
Ravi: What? I smell something fishy here, missy.
Sanjay: Is it shrimp?


message 32: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Lav Lalie Fompledump (Lavendarlol) wrote: "Lav: Writers just have to be mean to their characters OR THEY WOULD HAVE NO STORY. It's not our fault.
Alan: You aren't mean to me. I have a wonderful life.
Lav: *twitch*
Alan: What's wrong?
La..."


Hayden: *hatred*
Emmie: Calm.


message 33: by Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. (last edited Jan 30, 2011 02:21PM) (new)

Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Rhea: Divya, I'm scared. *hides*
Shreya: What happened to the brave little girl you're supposed to be?
Ravi: Stop forcing a five-year old to do something she doesn't want to do.
Shreya: Okay. I'll force a ten-year old to do something he VERY much doesn't want to do.
Ravi: And what would that be?
Shreya: I don't know....develop a major crush on Natalie?
Divya: He already has a crush on Natalie.
Ravi: SHADDUP.


Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Rhea: B-b-b-but killing is bad!
Divya: Rhea! Stop listening to other people's conversations!
Rhea: What does conversations mean?
Divya: Somebody else look after her. Please.


message 35: by Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (last edited Feb 01, 2011 05:18AM) (new)

Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 2218 comments Johnny: *smiles* Sorry. She's your problem.
Eddie: That's rude.
Johnny: So?
Jordan: Will you both just SHUT UP?! I'M TRYING TO WRITE!
Eddie: Oky! Sorry, Mr. Critical.
Jordan: WHAT'D YOU SAY?
Eddie: Nothing. Go write.


Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Rhea: *loudly* Isn't Jordan a girl? Why did you call her Mr?
Divya: Ehh...they were just being silly.
Ravi: Rude!
Divya: I'm rude? What about "she's your problem?"
Ravi: I didn't say that! Don't look at me!
Rhea: Why not? Why do we have to look at something else?
Divya: It's just an expression, Rhea.
Rhea: THERE ARE TOO MANY EXPRESSIONS IN THIS WORLD!


Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 2218 comments Johnny: No, he's a guy.
Eddie: It's a common mistake.
Jordan: *facepalm*


Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Shreya: Stop bothering her, guys.
Anjali: Yeah. But anyway. Good job. You actually got some writing done today!
Ravi: Yeah. In math class. *snort*
Shreya: Just because you're a math freak doesn't mean I am.
Ravi: But you're still a freak.
Shreya: Shaddup.


message 39: by Sam (new)

Sam Celvin | 121 comments Plith: Come on Sam write my story already.
Sam: I just did
Plith: One small paragraph!
Sam: You should be happy I wrote that much! You know I am having the feeling that you might not finish your prenticship.
Plith: Your are just saying that.
Sam: How do you know that?
Plith: BECAUSE I AM IN YOUR HEAD!
Sam: Oh right.
Plith: Idiot.


message 40: by Autumn (new)

Autumn (flwurautumn) | 4987 comments Rain: Autumn. I hate you.
Autumn: B-b-but...
Rain: You shouldnt' be surprised. After all, you made me hate the world.Of which, you are a part. Therefore, I hate you.
Autumn: Oh...well if you put it like that...
Rain: But I hate you the most for doing this to me.
Autumn: I’m sorry D:


message 41: by Sam (new)

Sam Celvin | 121 comments Plith: Why did you make her hate the world?
Sam: Don't evesdrop Plith.
Plith: Why not?
Sam: Because it is impolite.


message 42: by Autumn (new)

Autumn (flwurautumn) | 4987 comments Autumn: Because she's a self-indulgent person that needs to get off of herself and that will come after she...after something. And then she'll become a better person out of it.
Rain: I dont' see why you couldn't do that in the first place.
Autumn: If you weren't depressed, I'd tell you to shut up right now.


message 43: by Autumn (new)

Autumn (flwurautumn) | 4987 comments Sam: What I don't understand is why you can't let me help her.
Autumn: Becuase I don't want you to.
Sam: But I'm her boyfriend.
Autumn: Oh, thanks for telling me, I never would have known.
Rain: Shut up.
Autumn: Rain, go away.
Rain: Make me.
Sam: Rain...
Autumn: Now that she's gone, just know that YOU'RE GOING TO BE A JERK
Sam: Who me?
Autumn: Yeah, you, son. You're going to be the worst guy in the world. You'd best prepare yo'self.
Sam: I'm so confused.


Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 2218 comments Autumn wrote: "Rain: Autumn. I hate you.
Autumn: B-b-but...
Rain: You shouldnt' be surprised. After all, you made me hate the world.Of which, you are a part. Therefore, I hate you.
Autumn: Oh...well if you put it..."


Johnny: Ohh, guilty by association. You lose.
Bonnie: Stay out of that. that's their buisness.
Johnny: You're such a goody-goody.


message 45: by Autumn (new)

Autumn (flwurautumn) | 4987 comments Jordan *Hardcore Rocker* (NCIS Freak) wrote: "Autumn wrote: "Rain: Autumn. I hate you.
Autumn: B-b-but...
Rain: You shouldnt' be surprised. After all, you made me hate the world.Of which, you are a part. Therefore, I hate you.
Autumn: Oh......"


Autumn: I lost...
Sam: DARN IT, AUTUMN, YOU MADE ME LOSE THE GAME.
Autumn: Bwahaha
Rain: Glad to see you two are having fun.
Sam: Rain...
Rain: No, no, don't mind me. I shouldn't have said anything.


Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 2218 comments Johnny: *snickers*
Eddie: *Gibbs-slap*
Johnny: *yelp*


message 47: by Autumn (new)

Autumn (flwurautumn) | 4987 comments Rain: What's a Gibbs-slap?


Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 2218 comments Eddie: This is a Gibbs-slap: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QqMUuO...
Johnny: Painful, but absolutely hilarious.
Eddie: *Gibbs-slap*
Johnny; Ouch!


Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Rhea: Ooooh I want to try that!
Rohan: *inches away slowly* Don't - get - any - closer.


Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 2218 comments Eddie: Do it! Do it! do it!


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