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Mar 29, 2012 04:31PM
That's what is going on in my mind xD
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Ravi: You still watch Disney? o_O
Shreya: Hey, you still have teddy bear wars with Sanjay.
Ravi: >.<
Ally: Or maybe her Teddy Bears come to life and fight each other...
Belle: *facepalm* Idiot.
Belle: *facepalm* Idiot.
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Ravi: *eyeroll* Of COURSE. We just try and hold each other's stuffed animals hostage. It's a man's game.
Divya: AHAHAHA MAN'S GAME? *snort*
Shreya: LOLZ.
Ravi: >.<
Pluvia: Teddy Bear Wars?
Kaya: I have no idea.
Erin: Sounds fun.
Pluvia: uhm...
Erin: Kidding!
Kaya: I don't think he's kidding.
Erin: Yeah, no not really... how did you know?
Kaya: I created you?
Erin: Oh, right.
Kaya: I have no idea.
Erin: Sounds fun.
Pluvia: uhm...
Erin: Kidding!
Kaya: I don't think he's kidding.
Erin: Yeah, no not really... how did you know?
Kaya: I created you?
Erin: Oh, right.
Jane: Lasso, lasso, la la la lasso!
Ally: *shoves* Shutup! Kaya's here!
Ally: *shoves* Shutup! Kaya's here!
Kaya: Shut up.
Pluvia: What is she talking about?
Kaya: NOTHING!
Pluvia: What is she talking about?
Kaya: NOTHING!
Jane: LAAAAAAASSSSSSSSOOOOO!!!
Ally: *tries to shove Jane off cliff*
Ally: *tries to shove Jane off cliff*
Erin: What's this about a lasso?
Kaya: Nothing!
Erin: :(
Kaya: Go away, Erin, girl talk.
Erin: *sigh* fine.
Pluvia: Where's the lasso?
Kaya: Nowhere, nothing...
Pluvia: Well obviously it's NOT nothing...
Kaya: Pluvia go away.
Pluvia: Not happening.
Kaya: When did you become so vocal with your opinions?
Pluvia: Since Erin showed up.
Kaya: Right.
Pluvia: Anyways...
Kaya: No.
Lisa: Lasso?
Kaya: It's NOTHING!
Lark: I think she's lying.
Luna: Me too.
Pluvia: I third that motion.
Lisa: I fourth it.
Kaya: WHY ARE YOU ALL GANGING UP ON ME?
Kaya: Nothing!
Erin: :(
Kaya: Go away, Erin, girl talk.
Erin: *sigh* fine.
Pluvia: Where's the lasso?
Kaya: Nowhere, nothing...
Pluvia: Well obviously it's NOT nothing...
Kaya: Pluvia go away.
Pluvia: Not happening.
Kaya: When did you become so vocal with your opinions?
Pluvia: Since Erin showed up.
Kaya: Right.
Pluvia: Anyways...
Kaya: No.
Lisa: Lasso?
Kaya: It's NOTHING!
Lark: I think she's lying.
Luna: Me too.
Pluvia: I third that motion.
Lisa: I fourth it.
Kaya: WHY ARE YOU ALL GANGING UP ON ME?
Adam: Frankly I'm curious about the subject matter. What do you mean by "lasso"?
Ally: Adam, shutup, girl talk.
Adam: *puts on high pitched voice* I'm a girl...
Ally: ADAM GO AWAY!
Ally: Adam, shutup, girl talk.
Adam: *puts on high pitched voice* I'm a girl...
Ally: ADAM GO AWAY!
Erin: You're not alone in being shunned, kid.
Kaya: Kid?
Erin: Well yeah he's in high school and I'm like 20...
Kaya: Oh yeah...
Erin: So what's the lasso?
Kaya: GO AWAY ERIN! YOU TOO ADAM! AND ALLY STOP TALKING ABOUT HIM!
Erin: So it's a he?
Kaya: Get lost, Sherlock.
Kaya: Kid?
Erin: Well yeah he's in high school and I'm like 20...
Kaya: Oh yeah...
Erin: So what's the lasso?
Kaya: GO AWAY ERIN! YOU TOO ADAM! AND ALLY STOP TALKING ABOUT HIM!
Erin: So it's a he?
Kaya: Get lost, Sherlock.
Elijah: It rhymes! So, boy troubles? *wink wink*
Ally: Eli, you're not a matchmaker.
Elijah: *pouts* You don't know what I do in my spare time.
Ally: Eli, you're not a matchmaker.
Elijah: *pouts* You don't know what I do in my spare time.
Kaya: It most certainly does NOT rhyme.
Pluvia: She's right.
Kaya: Thank you.
Pluvia: She's right.
Kaya: Thank you.
Elijah: NOBODY ASKED YOU!!!!
Ally: Eli, use your manners.
Elijah: *pouts*
Ally: WHY ARE YOU BEING SO MOODY?!?
Elijah: *shrugs*
Ally: Eli, use your manners.
Elijah: *pouts*
Ally: WHY ARE YOU BEING SO MOODY?!?
Elijah: *shrugs*
Kaya: TB
Pluvia: What?
Lark: What?
Luna: What?
Lisa: What?
Erin: What?
Josh: What?
Pluvia: What?
Lark: What?
Luna: What?
Lisa: What?
Erin: What?
Josh: What?
Ally: *glares*
Elijah: TB?
Jane: Totally Bitchy?
Emily: Telephone Book?
Belle: Taco Bucket?
Gaston: Teddy Bear?
Ally: *hides in shadows*
Elijah: TB?
Jane: Totally Bitchy?
Emily: Telephone Book?
Belle: Taco Bucket?
Gaston: Teddy Bear?
Ally: *hides in shadows*
Kaya: Gaston...?
Erin: What about that jerk?
Lien: Don't take it personally Gaston, he thinks I'm a jerk too.
Kaya: Because you are...?
Lien: Why does everyone hate me?
Steve: I don't hate you.
Kaya: You don't hate anyone.
Steve: True.
Kaya: My point is, Gaston is somehow smart.
Erin: Next you'll say Lien's a lawyer.
Kaya: ...
Lien: I am a lawyer.
Erin: ...
Erin: What about that jerk?
Lien: Don't take it personally Gaston, he thinks I'm a jerk too.
Kaya: Because you are...?
Lien: Why does everyone hate me?
Steve: I don't hate you.
Kaya: You don't hate anyone.
Steve: True.
Kaya: My point is, Gaston is somehow smart.
Erin: Next you'll say Lien's a lawyer.
Kaya: ...
Lien: I am a lawyer.
Erin: ...
Gaston: Just because I'm rude, doesn't mean I'm stupid.
Ally: ....
Gaston: *glares*
Ally: Well, you're not really smar-
Gaston: *glares*
Ally: ...........
Ally: ....
Gaston: *glares*
Ally: Well, you're not really smar-
Gaston: *glares*
Ally: ...........
Kaya: Teddy Bear!!!
Erin: I'm confused.
Lien: Me too.
Erin: Shut up Lien.
Lien: No.
Pluvia: Both of you, quit it!
Lien: I love you Pluvia...
Pluvia: Go away Lien.
Lien: I'll be back.
Erin: Good, he's gone.
Kaya: Everyone get along.
Erin: Yes m'am
Kaya: Thank you.
Erin: I'm confused.
Lien: Me too.
Erin: Shut up Lien.
Lien: No.
Pluvia: Both of you, quit it!
Lien: I love you Pluvia...
Pluvia: Go away Lien.
Lien: I'll be back.
Erin: Good, he's gone.
Kaya: Everyone get along.
Erin: Yes m'am
Kaya: Thank you.
Belle: Can I go to bed?
Adam: I'll walk you home. *wink wink*
Gaston: NO! I shall!
Tristan: Back off you guys, I will.
Ally: *facepalm*
Maurice: *points to Gaston* No one likes you Gassy. *turns to Tristan* Stop being such a sissy. *looks at Adam* Stop being a prick.
Belle: DAD?!?!?!
Adam: I'll walk you home. *wink wink*
Gaston: NO! I shall!
Tristan: Back off you guys, I will.
Ally: *facepalm*
Maurice: *points to Gaston* No one likes you Gassy. *turns to Tristan* Stop being such a sissy. *looks at Adam* Stop being a prick.
Belle: DAD?!?!?!
Kaya: It's RUBY!
Pluvia: Who?
Kaya: Never mind.
Pluvia: Who?
Kaya: Never mind.
Ally: RUBY???
Belle: CAN I LEAVE? ANYONE? HELLO?
Belle: CAN I LEAVE? ANYONE? HELLO?
Pluvia: Hey, Elijah? Do you remember me? The girl who gave you advice over milkshakes?
Elijah: *nods slowly* Yeah! The really pretty girl!
Ally: Elijah...
Emily: WHAT??? WHO IS THIS "PLUVIA"???
Ally: Elijah...
Emily: WHAT??? WHO IS THIS "PLUVIA"???
Pluvia: ...
Kaya: Elijah...
Erin: Who is this punk?
Kaya: Erin...
Lien: ...
Steve: Everyone calm down...
Kaya: Elijah...
Erin: Who is this punk?
Kaya: Erin...
Lien: ...
Steve: Everyone calm down...
Elijah: Yep, if I wasn't in love with Emily, I would've definitely given you my number. *wink*
Ally: Elijah...stop...why are you acting so off character?
Emily: *cries in corner*
Ally: *sigh*
Derek: Em, babe, I'm here for you.
Elijah: DON'T YOU LAY A HAND ON MY EMILY.
Ally: Elijah...stop...why are you acting so off character?
Emily: *cries in corner*
Ally: *sigh*
Derek: Em, babe, I'm here for you.
Elijah: DON'T YOU LAY A HAND ON MY EMILY.
Pluvia: Apparently he didn't take my advice.

Divya: Most girls you know do.
Shreya: Because boys like them. If no boys like you, there's no problem.
Divya:...
Kaya: I should write...
Lien: Agreed, and you should have me come and sweep Pluvia off her feet and make Erin all sad and lonely.
Kaya: ...
Erin: Excuse me?
Pluvia: Sorry, but it's not going to happen.
Kaya: Yeah.
Lien: :(
Steve: Could you have me come in?
Kaya: Steve...
Steve: Yeah?
Kaya: I hate to break it to you but... you're a very minor character.
Steve: Whyyyyy?
Kaya: Because you're so simple. There's no complexity to you.
Steve: And that's MY fault?
Kaya: No! I needed a character like you to break Pluvia's shell...
Steve: But that's it? That's all you wanted me for?
Kaya: Uhm...
Pluvia: It'll be okay Steve.
Steve: I know.
Erin: How come this guy is so... accepting?
Kaya: That's how I wrote him?
Erin: Then how come I have to be so complected and shit?
Kaya: No swearing!
Erin: Sorry, jeez.
Pluvia: Erin...
Erin: Yes, Pluvia? :)
Pluvia: Please don't swear.
Erin: Okay.
Kaya: What the...?
Lien: Go away Erin!
Pluvia: Go away, Lien!
Erin: Yeah, go away, Lien!
Steve: ...
Kaya: Everybody out!!!
Lien: Agreed, and you should have me come and sweep Pluvia off her feet and make Erin all sad and lonely.
Kaya: ...
Erin: Excuse me?
Pluvia: Sorry, but it's not going to happen.
Kaya: Yeah.
Lien: :(
Steve: Could you have me come in?
Kaya: Steve...
Steve: Yeah?
Kaya: I hate to break it to you but... you're a very minor character.
Steve: Whyyyyy?
Kaya: Because you're so simple. There's no complexity to you.
Steve: And that's MY fault?
Kaya: No! I needed a character like you to break Pluvia's shell...
Steve: But that's it? That's all you wanted me for?
Kaya: Uhm...
Pluvia: It'll be okay Steve.
Steve: I know.
Erin: How come this guy is so... accepting?
Kaya: That's how I wrote him?
Erin: Then how come I have to be so complected and shit?
Kaya: No swearing!
Erin: Sorry, jeez.
Pluvia: Erin...
Erin: Yes, Pluvia? :)
Pluvia: Please don't swear.
Erin: Okay.
Kaya: What the...?
Lien: Go away Erin!
Pluvia: Go away, Lien!
Erin: Yeah, go away, Lien!
Steve: ...
Kaya: Everybody out!!!

Me: Umm...I didn't want to talk to you....I wanted your sister Violet.
Dawn: Yeah, well, I'm the protective older sis, so you have to go through me to get her!
Me: Get her?
Dawn: Oh, yeah, pretend like she wasn't going to DIE of LEUKEMIA in part 2!
Violet: What? I'm going to die?
Dawn: It's okay, sweetie, go put your face over there. Okay?
Me: Dawnie, chillax -
Dawn: DON'T TALK TO ME, MONSTER!
Me: Dawn, don't make me bring in Destiny!
Dawn: NO! I can't resist her cute little kindergarten face! NOOOOOOOOO!
Me: Can you think rationally now?
Dawn: Yes. *bows head meekly* I'm sorry.
Me: Okay, now, I had to kill your parents and Jeff because it hooks the readers in. They want to know more about you.
Dawn: BUT WHY VI?
Me: Because it makes a good story line.
Dawn: Is that all you care about? Writing?
Me: Umm...well....I like my pony!
Dawn: I'm leaving! I quit!
Me: What? You can't quit! I, like, CREATED you!
Dawn:
Me: Dawn?
Dawn: *passes note*
Me: You're giving me the silent treatment?
Dawn:
Me: FINE.
Dawn:
Me:
Dawn:
Me:
Dawn:
Me: THIS IS A WASTE OF TIME, DAWN. BYE.
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(last edited Apr 04, 2012 05:18PM)
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Ravi: Don't worry, Rhea. If she tries to kill me OR Rohan, we'll fight.
Shreya: You can't fight. You're my characters.
Rhea: *starts crying*
Shreya: RHEA NO DON'T CRY I wasn't planning to kill them off anyway. *hug*
Rhea: Oh...okay. *sob* *hiccup*
Shreya: But your parents...
Divya: NO! YOU CAN'T KILL THEM AFTER SO MUCH HOPE!
Shreya:...Your mom I can promise you. Your dad....
Divya: NO!!!!!!!
Shreya:...will come in part two!
Divya:...you sadistic dramatic person.
Shreya: SADISTIC? I'M GIVING YOU YOUR DAD BACK!
Belle: You killed off my mom...
Ally: Belle...it kinda just helped with the plot...
Belle: HOW DID KILLING OFF MY MOM HELP THE FREAKING FRACKING PLOT? WE ALL KNOW WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN IN THE END, SO GIVE IT A REST.
Ally: D:
Gaston: Heyyyyy ladies.
Ally: *grabs chair* Leave. Now.
Gaston: *backs out slowly*
Belle: And I thought I was the only girl that hated him...
Ally: (O_O) You're joking, right? All the fans of my story hate Gaston. It's either Team Adam or Team Tristan.
Tristan: TEAM TRISTAN!!!!
Ally: Belle...it kinda just helped with the plot...
Belle: HOW DID KILLING OFF MY MOM HELP THE FREAKING FRACKING PLOT? WE ALL KNOW WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN IN THE END, SO GIVE IT A REST.
Ally: D:
Gaston: Heyyyyy ladies.
Ally: *grabs chair* Leave. Now.
Gaston: *backs out slowly*
Belle: And I thought I was the only girl that hated him...
Ally: (O_O) You're joking, right? All the fans of my story hate Gaston. It's either Team Adam or Team Tristan.
Tristan: TEAM TRISTAN!!!!

Me: I needed an assassin who wasn't evil. A conflicted one was the easiest route to go. And you were one of the most organic characters I've created. I didn't force your existence. Be glad you're one person instead of two, which I changed.
Adylyn: You get a happy ending in a sort of abstract and different way than what you wanted. But, nonetheless, your life starts working out.
Sangaro: You tried to commit suicide and your life is easy. I had my eye taken out when I was not even...
Cedric: Hey, have you seen Ember. I need to get her to forgive me.
Adylyn: You're messing with us when we're in a different storyline.
Cedric: We're still in the same world.
Adylyn: Different time periods though.
Cedric: Following your logic, you're dead.
Sangaro: I have an idea for you Cedric. You only use words and your side. You need to give her something she can't deny. Kiss her and use however she reacts. But go now, you're not a part of this story. We can hang out later in the Actionless world where all of us go when our writer is not thinking of us.
Me: I'm here. So then who are you friends with in that world?
Sangaro: I teach Spirit her fire bending so she's able to do what you call of her whenever she's with the resistance.
Adylyn: Your wierd fairy queen character who you haven't even named. Seriously, she does not know physical pain. Some random tirsuairy character punches her in the face and she thinks she's being tickled.
Me: Well, her illusions are the point of the story.
Sangaro and Adylyn: Your wierd.

Ravi: Only if you're a Disney nerd.
Shreya: Shush.

Maria:...
Me: Maria?
Maria: I'm thinking about Jonas. Why did he cheated on me?
Daniel: Maria I love you. Let's leave Jonas.
Maria: He's your brother.
Daniel: Yeah and he hurt you. And Ana hurt me. So I love you, we're best friends. Let's go.
Maria: Are you sick? You're so weird, never tell me things and now you say you love me? The other day you didn't say that.
Daniel: I know what I want, but I'm too afraid to tell it.
Maria: I remember when you said you hated me.
Daniel. I'm sorry.. I was... afraid.
Maria: It's too late Daniel. I need to be alone. You hurt me, too many times.
Daniel: Is that what you really want? You never say what you want when you're possessed by those things you call emotions.
Maria: I'm emotional . So? Let me ask you a question. Would you still like me if I wasn't always asking questions and being emotional?
Daniel: Ah...
Maria: I thought so. When you know the answer, answer me. Bye Daniel.
Daniel: Crazy girl.
Me: But you love her.
Daniel: Whatever.
Rebekka (ἈΝΆΓΚΗ) wrote: "Ally wrote: "Belle: You killed off my mom...
Ally: Belle...it kinda just helped with the plot...
Belle: HOW DID KILLING OFF MY MOM HELP THE FREAKING FRACKING PLOT? WE ALL KNOW WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPE..."
I'd prefer to call it re-telling.
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
(Yes, I'm spamming you all.)
Ally: Belle...it kinda just helped with the plot...
Belle: HOW DID KILLING OFF MY MOM HELP THE FREAKING FRACKING PLOT? WE ALL KNOW WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPE..."
I'd prefer to call it re-telling.
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
(Yes, I'm spamming you all.)
Kaya: lalalaaaaaaaaaa
Erin: what the...?
Kaya: I'm bored okay?!?
Erin: what the...?
Kaya: I'm bored okay?!?

Kevin: Um... sure. Why?
Emily: *sets papers down on table* I so want to interview a serial killer. 8D
Kevin: Okay... then.
Emily: ...Um. I have to think up some questions to ask you.
Kevin: But you write everything about me. Why don't you already know?
Emily: I guess you're right. =(
Kevin: You're going to edit sometime, right?
Emily: Yeah....
Kevin: Can you change my name? "Kevin" doesn't sound... fearsome.
Emily: Do Theodore, Jeffery, John, and so on sound "fearsome"?
Kevin: But Kevin just sounds stupid.
Emily: Another reason for your motives to kill?
Kevin: If that's all it was, wouldn't I just kill my parents?
Emily: ...Good point, Kevin. Good point.

Ally: Belle...it kinda just helped with the plot...
Belle: HOW DID KILLING OFF MY MOM HELP THE FREAKING FRACKING PLOT? WE ALL KNOW WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN IN THE END,..."
YOU USED THE WORD FRAKKING. 8D

Etienne: Shut up.

Emily: I want to but I don't know what to write next. DX
Kevin: WRITE. IT.
Emily: Nobody reads it anyways....
Kevin: ...Maybe they'll read this chapter.
Emily: Who are you kidding?
Kevin: ...Nobody?
Emily: Since when have you been an optimist?
Kevin: Sheesh, try to be a better person and get criticized....
Emily: No, Kevin--
Kevin: Too late.

Sam: Sup.
Autumn: You're not gangster.
Sam: I know.
Autumn: Do you want to help me write?
Sam: Yeah, write something.
Autumn: I can't get into your head.
Sam: I'm not a very complex person.
Autumn: Yeah, that's the sad part.

RP: What?
Rosalia: You worry too much about how you writing sounds instead of trying to finish it. Man up.
RP: T-T But-
Rosalia: AND you're scared to make changes.
RP: But I-
Rosalia: If you can't just sit down and write and make drastic changes, you'll never be happy with your stories.
RP: ...When did you become so smart?
Rosalia: >:O I've always been smart!
RP: Huh.

Etienne: Really? You haven't written in forever, and you tell her to write?
Hannah: I have been writing. Well, kind of. I've been thinking about my story. Same thing, right?
Etienne: *sighs*

Rosalia: And you probably also agree that thinking about the story counts as working on it, even though it clearly isn't.
RP: ...Heh.
Rosalia: You weak, weak fool.
Erin: how come you haven't written anything in months?!?!
Kaya: I'm sorry...
Erin: Shut up and write!
Kaya: But... Erin...
Erin: Kaya...
Kaya: *mutters*
Kaya: I'm sorry...
Erin: Shut up and write!
Kaya: But... Erin...
Erin: Kaya...
Kaya: *mutters*

Kevin: What?!
Emily: ...So you heard about the ending.
Kevin: Thanks.
Emily: I'm... going to walk away now.

Me: I thought that it would really show your emotional side. Plus, it made a nice climax! I wanted to add more depth to the story, too.
Basil: But...why?
Me: I...uh...main character deaths are AWESOME; THAT'S why!!!
Basil: It was a cheesy idea. Even your younger sister said so.
Me: Oh...Shut up.
Stacey: Hey, guys. What's going on?
Me: STACEY!!! You're here to save me from this creep!
Basil: Creep? CREEP?! I saved your butt when it came to thinking up a climax! If it weren't for me, you'd still be trying to come up with a decent high-tension scene!
Me: So you're willing to admit that that scene was important to the rest of the story? :)
Basil: Umm...*sighs* I guess it really brought me closer to Stacey and the rest of my friends, plus it helped me to forgive my past. Yeah. I guess I'll admit it.
Stacey: Aww...I love you so much, Basil, my friend....
Me: We both do. :)
Basil: Just don't ever put me within two feet of zombies again.
Me: I probably won't. I don't usually like to harm my MCs. :D
Basil: Does that mean that you'll take out the climax where I get injured at the beginning of the trilogy?
Me: *sighs*
*looks at Stacey*
Here we go again.

Sam: What?
Autumn: I wrote things about you!
Sam: Oh, that.
Autumn: That is not an appropriate response.
Sam: Well, it wasn't really anything you can use. It's just a random blurb.
Autumn: But it's still about you!
Sam: It has nothing to do with the plot.
Autumn: ...I hate you.
Sam: Everybody's a critic
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