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Rain: Awww, I'm sorry. That's a lot worse than what I have to go through. Now I feel kind of stupid... *glares at arm* Well Shreya's nice so I'm sure you'll have a happy ending. Just keep going, you'll be fine.
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Shreya: You seeeeeee, Divya? Rain is nice! You have found a FRIEND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Divya: *glares* Stop acting like Rhea and be quiet.
Anyway, thanks, Rain. Whatever you're going through, I'm sure you can make it.
Shreya: OMG. I swear, two different people said the first and second part of Divya's speech.
Divya: AAAAAAAAAAH SHREYA DON'T KILL RHEA OR ROHAN. WHATEVER YOU DO, DO. NOT. KILL. RHEA. OR. ROHAN. *sobs*
Shreya: Woah, woah, woah. This ship is doing things to you.
Rain: ...I hear I'm going to. But I'm not sure.
Divya: You can do it. Autumn would never be mean to you like that. You two have been through so much...Shreya; *sob* This conversation is so sad.
Shades: Well, let's make it happy, bro!Hart: You're such a dork.
Shades: that hurts, bro.
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Divya: Why would you call him a dork? That's mean.Ravi: Trust me. You don't know Shades.
Divya: And I suppose you do?
Ravi: Well...no. But something tells me that Hart had a reason.
Divya: Shades seems pretty awesome to me.
Ravi: DIVYA AND SHADES SITTING IN A TREE, K-I-S-S-I-N-G....
Divya: Why do I even bother...
Hitomi: That's how I feel sometimes.Jordan: Hitomi! Get back here! I need you to almost kill a guard to make things more interesting!
Hitomi: No! *runs away*
Jordan: *chases*
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Me: Hey, Caroline. What's up?
Caroline: Nothing, I'm just fantasizing about the infinite paradise that is nothingness.
Me:Alright... I actually think nothingness is a pretty scary thought.
Caroline: If, by scary, you mean, an awesome thought. Then yes, its a scary thought.
Me: Ok...
Caroline: ^_^
Me: Why don't you find yourself a boyfriend....
Caroline: O_O
Me: Girlfriend?
Caroline: o.o
Me: Hermaphrodite?
Caroline: ^_^
Me: I'm just going to walk away now.
Okay... didn't really inspire me to write.
It was worth a shot.
Tez: So Julie.Julie: Yeah?
Tez: Am I now talking directly to you?
Julie: You're...talking to me...
Tez: Oh. Is there not in fact some imaginary being in posession of your subconscious?
Julie...uh...not...not right now...
Tez: Maybe you're just not aware of him right now.
Julie: O_o
Tez: But we can change that.
Ravi: I didn't fall, I attacked the floor.Divya: I didn't fall, I wanted to observe the ground.
Rhea: I didn't fall, I was trying to try out a new dance move that Arina taught me.
Arina: o_0 Thanks....
Rosalia: I didn't fall, I was trying to see the world from a bug's point of view.Crysanta: I didn't fall, I thought this was a hold-up.
Maxen: I didn't fall, I was giving the ground a well-deserved bear hug
RP: I didn't fall, Pierce tripped me T-T
Pierce: >:)
Rhea: Tripping people isn't nice, Pierce! You need to stop doing that to RP!Divya: It's okay, Rhea. He won't do it again.
Ravi: I think he will.
Divya: Shush. She's five years old.
RP: You should listen to Rhea!Pierce: But she's five years old.
RP: Age is but a number.
Pierce:...
Chrysanta: You know why he's mad. Why I'm mad.
RP: We are not talking about this in public.
Pierce: Why?
RP: Because Rhea's here >.>
Chrysanta: So?
RP: She's only five years old!
Pierce: Age is but a number.
RP: -glare- Please excuse my characters. They seem to forget who writes their stories.
Pierce: -seriously irritated- I'd remember if said person actually wrote anything.
RP: Pardon?
Pierce: You heard me. YOU. DON'T. WRITE.
RP: For your information, I DO write. I'm just really busy write now and I can't focus on anything else.
Pierce: Too busy? You mean, you're too busy on Goodreads and Facebook and Youtube and all that other sh- crap to actually sit down and write? That you're too stubborn to give up, but too lazy to try? That you lose focus and can't work on anything?
RP: ...I'm done with this.
Pierce: I bet you are.
Chrysanta: -Frustrated- Can you guys not go at each other right now? -at Pierce- Please?
Pierce: ...I'm sorry.
RP: Same...
Chrysanta: Sorry Shreya. They've been at each others' throat lately.
Shreya: I can tell. It's okay. Seems kinda like Ravi and me.Rhea: WHAT?
Shreya: Oh...I mean....Pierce is a guy....and he's RP's character...and Ravi's a guy....and...
Divya: o_0
Shreya: You're not helping.
Rhea: *sniff* I don't like this.
Shreya: Gimme a hug.
Rhea: NO.
Shreya: Meanie! Why not?
Rhea: Because I'm going to give Divya a hug. *gives Divya a hug*
Shreya: And meee?
Rhea: Fine. *gives me a hug* But that was only because I don't want you to start talking about people going at other people's throats again. Whatever that means...
Shreya: *phew* Saved. You don't know about such things YET.....
Rhea: What?
Shreya: >.<
Shreya: Aaaaah.
RP: Can I have a hug?Rosalia: No.
RP: Hush, you weren't even here.
Shreya: Rosalia, are you in the same story as Chrysantha and Pierce?Ravi: She would have been there if she was, wouldn't she?
Shreya: No.....not necessarily.
Rhea: What does 'cessenarily' mean?
Divya: *laughs* RHEA YOU ARE ADORABLE.
Anjali: NOW COME HERE SO I CAN SQUEEZE YOU.
Shreya: NOOO COME HERE SO I CAN GIVE YOU A HUG!
Rhea: o_0 Is life always like this for five year olds.....?
Rosalia: No, I'm in another story. It's an urban-fantasy-ish type thing.Maxen: With me.
Rosalia: :)
RP: Yes, Rhea it is. Now come here so I can squeeze the heck out of you! :3
Maxen: Now she'll definitely want to hug you.
Divya: Oh. Okay. I will not pry.Shreya: o_0 stating the obvious.
Rhea: I...don't want to be squeezed. *sniffle*
*pause* I'll do it for initial buddies! *hugs RP*
Shreya: AAAAH I WANT TO CHANGE MY INITIALS TO RP.
Ravi: Hahaha. Sucka.
Shreya: Oh come on. My initials match San Juan! BURNNN!
Ravi: Hey, your friend Haleigh matches Harry Potter.
Shreya: >.<
Jordan: my initials spell JEFF.Michael: Epic.
Hart: My initials spell...RMJH.
Hitomi: nice to meet you, rmjh.
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Divya: DRP.Ravi: Haha! Hi DURRRP!
Divya: You can't talk. Your initials spell RRP.
Ravi: >.<
THAT'S COOL JORDAN.Oh wait...I mean.
Mandy: THAT'S COOL JORDAN.
Avaline: Natasha, why are you re-wrting Chapter One? I was totally awesome in that Chapter.Me: Because it wasn't good enough for me.
Avaline: When are you going to post Chapter One?
Me: When I feel like it.
Avaline: Why do I have to go to Tierken?
Me: 'Cause I said so.
Avaline: When-
Me: Enough with the questions, I'm going to go write.
Avaline: Finally.
Me: What was that?
Avaline: *mutters* Nothing.
Me: Thought so.
Shreya: AAAAH CHAPTER NINE IS GOING ON FOREVER!!! *headdesk*Divya: And whose fault is that?
Shreya: YOU! With all your little affections for the twins, you're making the chapter to on and on and on and on and on and on...
Divya: SHUSH. You have only yourself to blame.
Shreya: Okay! *starts hitting self* BAD SHREYA! BAD SHREYA! WHY DID YOU DO THAT! YOU BAD GIRL! BAD!
Divya: O_________________________O
Chrysanta: O.oRP: HEY CHRYS, GUESS WHAT!
Chrysanta: -jumps- Dear God, you scared me. Quit yelling!
RP: Teehee, my bad. :)
Chrysanta: -.- Anyway, what?
RP: I outlined your story! ^0^
Chrysanta: :D YAY! I'M SO HAPPY!
RP: O_O
Rhea: What do you mean, outlined?Divya: Actually, I was kinda wondering too. =P
Rhea: Does that mean you took a marker and ran it around the story? I wanna help! *jumps up and down*
Divya: DON'T GIVE HER MARKERS. She goes crazy. I still can't get the stains out of my sweater.
Shreya: XD Perfect payback!
Divya: *headdesk*
RP: XD I basically just wrote down how I wanted her story to go, you know, so that I have a plan to go by. And lets not draw on people's clothes anymore, okay?Rosalia: Did you do that for my story too?
RP: I did. But then I decided to start over.
Rosalia: >.<'
Rhea: I wanted to decorate her sweater because it was all gray! It's boring like that!Divya: Rhea...I liked it all gray.
Rhea: Aww. I'm sorryyyyy *sniffle*.
Shreya: AW, COME HERE AND GIVE ME A HUG.
Rhea: >.<
Rhea: DON'T DIE!!!Divya: She's just kidding...I hope.
Ravi: Very reassuring.
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Izzy: Who are you?
Dom: Hi?
Me: I'm pretty much your mother.
Dom: Ah. That's cool.
Izzy: Yeah, my mom left us a year ago. Who are you?
Me: Quite cynical, huh?
Dom: She enjoys interrogations.
Me: AWESOME. I love interrogations.
Dom: Ohhh greeaaat. Just ignore her if she gets annoying.
Izzy: Excuse me?
Dom: Just kidding. She's an angel. *mutters* Devil in disguise...
Izzy: Answer my question, please?
Me: I'm your writer. So pretty much instead of you coming out of my body, you came out of my head. It's a pretty fun place to be, out here with me in the land of my stories.
Iola and Demi and Sam and Danny: NO. SHE LIES.
Me: They're lying. I'm nice.:)
Dom: I guess we'll just have to see
Izzy: Sleep, word mother.
Me: It's only 2.
Izzy: Go away.
Me: When did you get so sassy?
Izzy: You're tired. GO.
Me: You could help me, you know.Isi: Where would the fun be in that? Besides, you made me up, you ought to know everything about me.
Me: Well, guess what? I DON'T.
Eric: And that is our fault?
Me: *Mumbling and grumbling* You could be a little more grateful. I did bring you into existence.
Stefan: You breathe life into us and then kill us. We are supposed to fall on our knees in thanks?
Me:....
Me: I'm stuck.Divya: Me too.
Me: Aw, shush. My problems are worse than yours. I don't know where to take the story now.
Divya: AAAAAH!
Me: Burrrn.
Me: I'm not sure how my story should go.Sage: Where are you at?
Me: Ummm...
Jay: She hasn't even started yet. She's just LEAVING US!
Me: That's not true! I have methods.
Snow: *gasp* YOU'RE ABANDONING US???!!!
Me: You're not even IN this story!
Snow: I-I'm not?
Me: No.
Snow: Really?
Me: NO!
*silence*
Snow: But... *cries*
Me: AGH!
Snow: *runs away crying*
Skylar: Great job, genuis.
Me: *headdesk*
Ivy: I'll go get her.
Sage: Me too.
*pause*
Ivy: AAAAAHHHH!!!
Me: What?!
Ivy: She threw a vase at me!
Sage: *runs back and pants*
Hattie: *pokes*
Me: WHAT?!
Hattie: .....Hi.
Me: *sigh*
( hi im new :P)Jess: Hi jamie... sorry I had to kill you off and all...
Jamie: It's ok, it had to be done *looks sad* how B.J?
jess: He's good, got a family he happy.
Jamie: Oh. and my parents?
Jess: moved on. you have an adopted brother now!
Jamie: I've always wanted a sibling :)
Me: Hayden. *tries to breathe*Hayden: Emmiebreathe. Isn't it loud enough?
Me: No. I still can't hear you well. And I can hear Nelly still.
Hayden: I'm sorry.
Me: It's fine. Can I write today?
Hayden: Haha, I dunno, can you?
Me: Hush.
Hayden: You okay?
Me: I don't know. Hayden, I need you.
Hayden: I'm sorry.
Me: *sobs*
me; Mandy, if you could be anything what would you be?mandy: a writer.
Me: same. are you as tired as I feel?
mandy: yeah. couldn't sleep last night, dad came home late from the pub.
me: oh... how is he?
mandy: not so good. I'm thinking of leaving him.
me: good on you.
*one week later*
me: hows it mandy?
mandy: i did it! i left him and i'm staying with this cute boy *blushes*
me: OMFG WHAT'S HE LOOK LIKE :D
mandy: bronze hair, pale green eyes and really vulnerable. His name is Symon :)
me: thats so great!
mandy: who are you going to write me with, him or ash?
me: I don't know. I think Symon. Ash can end up with Rosetta.
mandy: Who's that?
me: nevermind, you'll meet her soon.
(im gonna go on this for a while)me: hey mandy you there?
mandy: yeah
me: good. you liking symon?
mandy: I dont really know much about him. Angel'as nice though.
Me: im glad you like it.
Mandy: THERE IS ANOTHER MANDY WHO THE HECK IS THIS?
mandy: this is mandy brighton.... who are you??
me: mandy what should I do with you now?mandy: I don't know. it's a new year, school doesn't start for another two months. Icould get a job?
me: *snap* aha! you cpould work in a book store!
mandy; meh never really liked books. Got anything more well paid?
me; Not really
mandy: ok.
me: Shall I make it that Ash works with you in the bookstore, or is in your class?
mandy: why not both?
me: idk.
mandy: i gtg bye
me: bye
Chrysanta: :O I LOVE THEM!RP: ...what?
Rosy: She's talking about those clay figures you made of both of us while you worked at that art camp.
RP: Oh yeah! I'm glad you like them!
Rosy: They're very cute...^-^
Maxen: She's acting like a girl...
Rosy: >:/ What do you mean by that?
Maxen: O.O It's just that you never call anything "Cute".
Rosy:...but they are! ^///^
Maxen: O.o
Pierce: You didn't make one of me and Maxen.
RP: I know, I didn't have much time between helping the teachers and helping the campers >.>'
Chrysanta: But I suppose it's for the best. The didn't have any shiny, brown glaze. Only regular, brown glaze.
RP: -nods- She's right.
Rosy: -hums cheerfully to herself- -plays with clay figurine-
RP: XD And watch out Rosy, they're fragile-ish.
Maxen: You know, I think I like her like this.
me: um hey nate... or nathalia....nat: just call me nate ffs I'm still a guy.
me:... ok? you talked to fang's aunt yet about reversing the curse?
nate: wait... you can do that??
me: yeah there has to be a resolution.
paulie, brenda, trina: Hey guys!
Nate *oh sh!t* um hi bffs.... I MEAN girls..
all three girls: *sigh* hi nate
Caleb: Hey, bro, you sure you're a dude? your kinda girly...
Nate: YES IM SURE!.....
All girls: Shut up caleb!
Me: *psst nate.... you like caleb ay'?"
nate: the girl in me does. the rest of me... well...
me: Ok I get the picture. I'll ask fang's aunt to turn you back into a girl soon.
Nate: Thanks!
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Shreya: *sigh* She has to take four younger siblings on a ship in second class, all the way from India to Italy. Two of these siblings have to go in hiding because they don't have the money to pay for their tickets. And she's only twelve.
Divya: You left out a lot.
Shreya: What part?
Divya: The part about a living nightmare.
Shreya: The whole thing is a living nightmare.
Divya: True.
Shreya: What about you, Rain?
Divya: Don't pry!
Shreya: Why are you so grumpy?
Divya: Why do you THINK, genius?
Shreya: The sooner they get off the ship, the better. *sigh*