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message 101: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Bye! Love you, Mandy!))


message 102: by You wish You knew (new)

You wish You knew (luv2write) Juliet sat at a table near the window


message 103: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"I'm not lying," Josh said, trying to swallow, but eventually he realized he needed to spit it out. So he did.


message 104: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((Love you, Mandy! Byes!))


Spazzy Maz Brit [the insane one] (cally215) Baaaiiii Mandy!))


message 106: by You wish You knew (new)

You wish You knew (luv2write) ((bye Mandy))


message 107: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Lav Lalie Fompledump (Lavendarlol) wrote: ""I'm not lying," Josh said, trying to swallow, but eventually he realized he needed to spit it out. So he did."

Marie looked at him smugly. "Speaker of untruths, thou trousers have combusted."


message 108: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Josh laughed. A real laugh.


message 109: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Marie smiled back, there was no exasperation in it this time.


message 110: by [deleted user] (new)

Gina noticed the blonde kid spitting out his wasabi. She chuckled inwardly.


message 111: by You wish You knew (new)

You wish You knew (luv2write) Juliet ordered some sushi. She mindlessly stared out the window


message 112: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"But I don't really have time to order something else," Josh frowned. "I'll just eat it I guess."


message 113: by [deleted user] (new)

Mandy wrote: "((How old is Gina?))"

((15.))


message 114: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments "If you don't mind going to a different place, we could get fast food. Key word is fast."


message 115: by [deleted user] (new)

((Why?))


message 116: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments ((Just wondering. I like to know peoples ages. =P))


message 117: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"I don't want to make you leave your... um... awesome food, here," Josh grinned. "But I guess my taste buds are more important... so, we should."


Spazzy Maz Brit [the insane one] (cally215) Brin sighed and put the money on the table with a good tip. She got up to leave. As she went, she forgot to watch where she was going. She bumped into a table with 2 people on it, probably on a date. "Oh, god, I'm so sorry!" she blinked, startled at her clumsiness. "I'm usually not so...not observant," she mumbled.


message 119: by [deleted user] (new)

Mandy wrote: "((Just wondering. I like to know peoples ages. =P))"

((No, Mandy. There must be some pressing reason. There is no such thing as random curiosity. Ehe.))


message 120: by You wish You knew (new)

You wish You knew (luv2write) Juliet asked for her order to go. She felt so awkward being there alone


Spazzy Maz Brit [the insane one] (cally215) There's a such thing as random curiosity for me haha))


message 122: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Obviously not," Josh muttered.


message 123: by [deleted user] (last edited Jan 11, 2011 05:56PM) (new)

Pammy wrote: "Juliet asked for her order to go. She felt so awkward being there alone"

Gina noticed a girl at a table by the window. Her spirit was very difficult to see. She looked lonely.

She thought about talking to the girl, but making a conversation with a stranger out of thin air wasn't her thing. Not today, at least.


message 124: by You wish You knew (new)

You wish You knew (luv2write) Juliet took out money for her food so when it got there she could just leave


Spazzy Maz Brit [the insane one] (cally215) Lav Lalie Fompledump (Lavendarlol) wrote: ""Obviously not," Josh muttered."

Brin flushed as anger rose. She set her mouth in a tight line and walked off, her feelings hurt. How rude these people were.


message 126: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Just try to be more careful next time," Josh snapped, wiping his shirt with the cloth napkin.


message 127: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) (May I join? Lol. I don't want to just intrude in what you guys got going on here. Lol.)


message 128: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
(Of course you may! The more people the better. Generally. :)


Spazzy Maz Brit [the insane one] (cally215) Brin stopped, her temper flaring more. She clenched her hands into fists at her sides, tempted to turn and snap back at him. Narrowing her eyes, she shook her head and walked on.


message 130: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
I'm sorry, Josh thought, but on the outside he just rolled his eyes.


Spazzy Maz Brit [the insane one] (cally215) She doesn't read minds haha. But she'd appreciate the apology anyway ^^)


message 132: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((I know she doesn't. I was just posting what he was thinking so all the authors would know.))


Spazzy Maz Brit [the insane one] (cally215) good to know haha :). He'll hafta apologize later ^^))


message 134: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) Holli walks into her room with her bandana over her head. She drops off her bags and quickly goes to the bathroom.

I need this, Holli thought as she looked at herself in the mirror. I need this, she repeated 2 more times.

Holli examined herself in the mirror. A habit she had developed over the last 4 months. She had bags under her eyes. Her skin was pale like the moon. Her lips were chapped. And her nose was bright red like rudoph the red nose reindeer. The only color spot on her face. Her blue eyes shined, that was Holli's best feature, she thought. She took off her bandana and touched her head. Her fingers warmed the top of her bald head. With that one touch, Holli thought about the past months. About everything.

I need this, Holli thought. I need this.


message 135: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) (Oh, and my character is 17 years old by the way. Just saying, incase if you guys wondered.)


message 136: by RedPath (new)

RedPath | 853 comments Chrysanta bused a nearby table, trying to keep the dirty plates from touching her crisp, white uniform shirt. She wondered for the billionth time why she decied to work on a cruise boat for the summer.

Money, that's why. She hated how important money was, especially to teenagers like her. chrysanta liked money, but didn't have enough of it. Not nearly enough. And she figured it would be fun to be in the Caribbean, evn if she wasn't allowed to lounge around like a passenger.

She dropped a plate and nearly cursed. Her hands were too full for her to bend down and pick it up.


message 137: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) Holli goes out of the bathroom and gets some of her medicine. She takes down the pills without water. She had gotten good at that. A habit she wasn't very proud of.

She looked around her room and spotted a window above her bed. Holli stands on her bed and looks out on the people, cruise, sea, everything. She stares for a good 10 minutes till her phone rings.

"Dun, dun, dun! Dun, dun, dun!" Her ringtone plays.

Oh god. She thinks.


message 138: by You wish You knew (new)

You wish You knew (luv2write) Juliet left the restaurant and started to walk to her new home


message 139: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) Holli jumps off the bed. And answers.

"What the eff do you want?" She said into the phone.
"Sheesh. I was just checking up on you." Jenner's voice rang through the phone.

Jenner was Holli's ex boyfriend. She couldn't stand him. He was probably the worst mistake of her life. Sadly though, she couldn't get away from him because Jenner worked across the street from her job at the opposing newspaper. Which made things highly difficult for Holli. Because when she was writing a article, he would most likely be writing the same article. Because that was Jenner. Because that was just Holli's 'wonderful' life.

"Well, I don't care if your checking up on me, Jenner. This is MY vacation so leave me the hell alone. I'm sick and tired of you always calling me for --"

There was a knock on the door.

"Goodbye Jenner."
"Wait --"
"GOODBYE."

Holli hung up. And opened the door. It was more of her bags.

"Thank you."

The guy laid down the bags, she gave him a good tip, and he left. Holli stared out of the open door looking at everything.

She started walking towards the railing and breathing in the air.


message 140: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"You coming?" Josh turned to Marie.


message 141: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Lav Lalie Fompledump (Lavendarlol) wrote: ""I don't want to make you leave your... um... awesome food, here," Josh grinned. "But I guess my taste buds are more important... so, we should.""

"I'll get a take-out carton." Marie said, as she motioned the waiter and asked for one.


message 142: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Marie packed up her food and waited for Josh.


message 143: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) Holli looks out. She can hear her phone ringing back in her room.

Probably Jenner, she thinks.

She decides she wants to walk around the boat. She gets the key and then closes the door. And starts heading towards anything that could possibly intrest her.


message 144: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Marie sighed. "Come on, Josh."


message 145: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) Holli finds a small chinese restaurant on the ship. She peers in and see's crowds of people. A girl, packing up food, waiting on her boyfriend impatiently. A few other couples eating and having nice conversations.

Eh, Holli thinks. She wasn't in the mood for food, and she wasn't in the mood to be stared at by other couples while she ate her food alone either.

Holli started to walk again.


message 146: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Josh followed Marie out the door.


message 147: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Lav Lalie Fompledump (Lavendarlol) wrote: "Josh followed Marie out the door."

((LAV!!))

Marie pulled a brochure of a map of the ship before she went out. "This will be better."


message 148: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"It better be," Josh teased.


message 149: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments "Hey, that was your fault for ordering that yourself." Marie responded.


message 150: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"You let me order it."


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