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message 151: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Marie gave him a look. "Seriously? You could have done whatever you wanted. But your ego got in the way." She poked him in the shoulder.


message 152: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"What ego?" Josh said, putting on an innocent face.


message 153: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) Holli goes to a McDonalds that is on the cruise, suprsingly.

"Welcome to McDonalds. What would you like?" The kind lady behind the counter asked.

"Chicken Nuggets and some fries." Holli says. Holli can feel her eyes on the top of my head. Oh god, Holli thinks.

"Alright. It will be a few minutes." And she turns.


message 154: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Lav Lalie Fompledump (Lavendarlol) wrote: ""What ego?" Josh said, putting on an innocent face."

Marie just shook her brown curly hair.


message 155: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
A horn on the ship blew and he felt the ground lurch under him.


message 156: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Marie steadied herself and looked at Josh. "Don't get all seasick on me, okay?" She said, smiling a little.


message 157: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Me?" Josh scoffed. "Seasick? I've never been seasick before and I don't plan on it now."


message 158: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments "Good." Marie nodded and looked at the map. "Ah, Wendy's should be down this next hallway.


message 159: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Josh made a face. "Is there a McDonalds here? Wendy's makes me sick."


message 160: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments "McDonalds makes me sick...We should look for a Burger King."


message 161: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Burger King sounds like a nice truce."


message 162: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Marie grinned. "That's on the other side of the ship, though....I think." She spun the map around. "Ugh. I cannot read map directions."


message 163: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Obviously."


message 164: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) The ship lurched, and Holli fell back. A girl came rushing to her side, "Are you ok?"

"Yes, Yes. I'm fine." She said. She felt a draft on her head. Her bandana flew off.

Oh no. Oh no. Oh no. Holli thought. She looked for it, but she couldn't find it.

"Your, uhm, bandana. I think it went overboard." The women said.

Without thinking, Holli ran. She left McDonalds. Left her money. Left her food. And ran. People were starring at her as they saw her going with tears in her eyes.

Holli was beyond embarassed of whole situation.


message 165: by Ingrid (new)

Ingrid | 10 comments (( ok so i've skipped araound this story a bit but i get it i also just saw in the rules to wait so I will please let me know when I can add thx :)))


message 166: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments She scowled at him and shoved the map in his arms. "Come on, your turn."


message 167: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
A girl was running past them. She looked upset. And she was... bald. "Are you okay?" Josh asked her.


message 168: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Marie looked over, concerned.


message 169: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((Just post whenever you want, Bella. Nothing much has happened.))


message 170: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((It doesn't.))


message 171: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((*waits for Megan*))


message 172: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((Bye! I should probably start cleaning now. Meeeh.))


message 173: by Ingrid (new)

Ingrid | 10 comments "Is everything all right?" Josh called. Marie followed him and the girl to find out what was wrong


message 174: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) (Sorry! I was busy!)

Holli runs past the same couple from the restaurant but she doesn't stop. She runs to her room and locks the door. She kneels on the ground crying.


message 175: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments ((Uhhh. Bella, that's not how Roleplay works.))


message 176: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Do you think we should... go after her?" Josh said, feeling uncomfortable.


message 177: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((Bella, you can't control our characters. You gotta make your OWN and you control them.))


message 178: by Ingrid (new)

Ingrid | 10 comments (( ok sorry i got it now :-/))


message 179: by Ingrid (new)

Ingrid | 10 comments Alex was finally alone. She had saved up all her money to go on a cruise to get away from home. She had just come back from lunch at a very satisfying Japanese restaraunt and was enjoying the veiw out to sea.


message 180: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) Holli laid against the door. Things going rolling past her mind.

I'm so embarassed, she thought, I hate this. I hate this so much. Why did God do this to me? Why did he give me cancer. Why. WHY.

She sits there for a few minutes, trying to collect herself but she can't. She crawls over to her bag and opens it. She finds her lucky charm... a dolphin key chain she got in 2nd grade.

She sits by the door again and trys to breathe.

Breathe in, breathe out.

But she can't focus. Not at all. All she can think about is how much she hates her life.


message 181: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((I'll post Matt's profile in a bit. I'm lazy.))

Matt grabbed his room key from the front desk and headed to his room, his small backpack the only thing he was carrying. He slid the room key into the door and opened it. But there was a girl sitting in the room. "Excuse me?" he asked.


message 182: by [deleted user] (new)

((I'm probably never going to actually roleplay, but I'm going to stalk this topic.))


message 183: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((Nice, Cassie. XD))


message 184: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) (Wait. Is this girl sitting in Matt's room, Holli? Lol. Sorry, I'm slow on certain things.)


message 185: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((He just got the wrong key or something. Just trying to get them to interact so it'll be more fun.))


message 186: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) (Lol, I understand. I'm just slow. :P)

Holli sniffled and looked up at him.

"Yes?" She wiped at her eyes. And then she realized... no bandana.

"Damn." She grabbed at one of her bags and ran to the bathroom.

Minutes later, she came back out with a new bandana on.


message 187: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Are you... staying in this room?" Matt said, feeling awkward, trying not to stare at her head.


message 188: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) "Yeah." Holli said. Trying to act normal, although normal had been long gone for months.


message 189: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Are you... okay?"


Spazzy Maz Brit [the insane one] (cally215) Nice, haha))

Brin leaned against the rail, watching the shoreline disappear rapidly.


message 191: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) "Yes."

Liar, she thought. Liar, liar... Pants on fire. She thought.

"Everything is..." She breathed in. She felt like she was gonna cry again. "...Fine."


message 192: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Are you sure? Because you look horrible!" Matt blurted out and then slapped his hand to his mouth.

((Gotta go. Bye!))


message 193: by Megan (last edited Jan 12, 2011 05:44PM) (new)

Megan (itsmegan) "I look... Horrible? Horrible? Yeah. Well, you don't look so hot yourself buddy. You should probably take back that aweful costume you bought for halloween. Oh waaaait, that's your face. My mistake. I get confused easy." Holli said, pissed off.

She looked horrible. Great, way to make a person's day.

(Byee!)


message 194: by [deleted user] (new)

Lav Lalie Fompledump (Lavendarlol) wrote: "((Nice, Cassie. XD))"

((Yup. I'm real naaaas.))


Spazzy Maz Brit [the insane one] (cally215) That's cool. I love stalkers lol)


message 196: by [deleted user] (new)

((I am a stalker. You should love me.))


message 197: by [deleted user] (last edited Jan 12, 2011 05:50PM) (new)

It seemed like most people had left the restaurant, so Gina decided she might as well leave, too. She stood and made her way to the deck a ways down the ship.

The wind blew harshly at her face--Another reason I'm glad my hair is so short, Gina thought. She could see other girls whose long hair seemed practically stuck in front of their faces.


Spazzy Maz Brit [the insane one] (cally215) I lurrvvv you Cassie ;) haha. Not in that weird kinda way..but kinda like a vegetarian likes broccoli...))


message 199: by Ingrid (last edited Jan 12, 2011 05:59PM) (new)

Ingrid | 10 comments Alex was walking down to her cabin when she bumped into a really annoyed but cute looking boy.
"Excuse me!" she said and quickly ran off.
(( I think this should be matt but i don't decide so... :P))


message 200: by [deleted user] (new)

Gina sighed. She didn't quite know what to do with herself. At home, there was always so much to be done. Despite this, she was still glad to have a break.

She eventually pulled out a chair and decided to start a round of her favorite sport: people-watching. Or spirit-watching, depending on your perspective.


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