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Jul 17, 2008 11:14AM
He felt the odd primal senses taking over.
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(sorry... kinda stuck... can't think of an idea.)
((mind if i join in???? XD)
For a brief moment, Rencor's face surged with overwhelming fury, but he quickly composed himself and forced a plastered on smile. "Of course, of course, I understand. And so does little Carolyn here!" He gestured to a dead tree trunk behind him, upon which Carolyn now sat, bound and gagged.
"But! You... What did you DO?" wailed Chase. What kind of powers did this man have, to bind, gag, and move a skillful teenage nymph without moving a muscle?
For a brief moment, Rencor's face surged with overwhelming fury, but he quickly composed himself and forced a plastered on smile. "Of course, of course, I understand. And so does little Carolyn here!" He gestured to a dead tree trunk behind him, upon which Carolyn now sat, bound and gagged.
"But! You... What did you DO?" wailed Chase. What kind of powers did this man have, to bind, gag, and move a skillful teenage nymph without moving a muscle?
(but isn't she 76, which for a nymph is about teenage?)
(wait, i think i missed something.... what are the Krisaldi???)
He realized then, how little he actually knew about this... war. Was it one race of being (headed by Nareida) versus another race of being (headed by Rencor)? Well, no, it couldn't be, because Nareida and Carolyn were two different creatures, working together. So what then? It seemed that Nareida and Rencor each had armies of various beings. So who, then, was on Rencor's side?
(wait, i think i missed something.... what are the Krisaldi???)
He realized then, how little he actually knew about this... war. Was it one race of being (headed by Nareida) versus another race of being (headed by Rencor)? Well, no, it couldn't be, because Nareida and Carolyn were two different creatures, working together. So what then? It seemed that Nareida and Rencor each had armies of various beings. So who, then, was on Rencor's side?
((well... nymphs only live to be at least 2000 she's closer to a very young child.))
((oh.... well we haven'tspecified her age in the actual story yet, i guess..... should we keep it at 76, or change it? what would be closer to teenage innymph years????))
"Who's the Voltman?" he thought to himself. As if he had spoken the words out loud, the voice spoke in his head.
((at least.... 760, maybe...whoa! voice in his head? keep going! I don't know what to write.))
The Vomaltan!the voice hissed. Chase struggled to keep his face from revealing the strange thoughts racing through his head-- he decided to trust the voice, and he assumed the Vomaltan was some sort of weapon, so the last thing he needed was to make Rencor suspicious.
Then another thought crossed his mind.'If Rencor was on the human side how was he commanding my Krisalidi? does this mean he isn't human?'
Chase wasn't too sure... He gave Rencor a more identifying look but couldn't find anything.
Before he had time to dwell further on the thought, a hand whipped out to grab his and began pulling him away at a terrifying speed. I'm sorry Carolyn, he's got me now! thought Chase miserably. Then he looked up and saw, of all people, or of all nymphs, CAROLYN! SHE was his savior!
"Carolyn!" He exclaimed in surprise.
"hush, he can't see me. I left a spell shadow in my place." Chase heard the words, but he had a feeling that Rencor couldn't. "I'm sorry Carolyn!" he called behind him hoping it would throw Rencor off the hint he had just dropped.
she pulled him all the faster weaving through trees then suddenly she pulled him inside one, sat down and started panting from the run.
"Thanks!" He said. She nodded out of breath. "I hope Rencor doesn't follow us." He said. "Did you have to jynx us?" Carolyn asked. She pointed behind her where thrashing sounds were being made.
"What are you talking about? Hey do you know what the Voltamon is?" he added as an after thought.
"The Vol- oh you've got to be kidding me! Yes, I know what it is. Why do you want to know? Wait, no, let's get out of here first, shall we? I guess I forgot to mention that I left a spell shadow in your place too, but he can sense our presence, so it's not long before-"
A roar of fury came from where Rencor was waiting with the spell shadows.
Carolyn yelped. "Run!"
A roar of fury came from where Rencor was waiting with the spell shadows.
Carolyn yelped. "Run!"
"I'll explain later. We aren't safe yet!"
they left the protection of the tree Carolyn had hidden them in and continued to run. as their breath became ragged again they stopped short at a river."CArolyn what way do we go, upstream or down?"
"We have to go downstream... it's the only way to a safe haven."
"A town. I'd rather not head towards the enemies territory anyway. We were close enough as it was."
"Well, of course. It's not far is it? I'm awfully tired."
Carolyn scoffed. "And that's the least of our problems. It's not too far- probably a day or so away."
"A day!" cried Chase.
Carolyn scoffed. "And that's the least of our problems. It's not too far- probably a day or so away."
"A day!" cried Chase.
Chase waded into the river and noticed it got very deep right away. "What r u doing?" carolyn asked.Suddenly Chase started changing shape. "A dolphin?" Carolyn asked again.
"Well it'll be faster than walking." she heard chase say. "Come on grab on I'll do the swimming."
Carolyn waded in after him. She grabbed on to his back. "So how long will it take for us to get there now?" Chase asked.
carolyn laughed and said "just swim & we'll see"
"I can't say. To be honest, I've never taken a ride on a dolphin before!" Carolyn exclaimed with a smile.
"Well then, let's go!" cried Chase as they took off down the stream.
"Well then, let's go!" cried Chase as they took off down the stream.
Chase nodded and started to flow downstream with the river. He found it a lot easier to be able to move his fins and give them a burst of speed. In only an hour they reached the village.
Carolyn stepped carefully off of Chase's back and he transformed back into his usual form.
"Now we just need to get to a tavern and get dried. There's a person that can help us here anyway."
"i take it you've been here before?" asked Chase.
"thousands of times! Come on, I know a great place right nearby."
"thousands of times! Come on, I know a great place right nearby."
"A tavern hey I'm only 16. WAY to young to be going to taverns." chase told Carolyn."it's different here than in u'r world, chase u have to remember that. the 2nd floor on the tavern we're going to has bedrooms we can rent. It is beginning to get dark now."
"oh... right." He muttered. They headed for the town.
((what's happening to Nerida and Cosa & what exactly are Carolyn and Chase looking for on their journey anyway/))
(the book, right? idk what that is though...)
(as for nareida and cosa... i guess we'll get back to them at some point though.... :D:D:D:D:D)
(as for nareida and cosa... i guess we'll get back to them at some point though.... :D:D:D:D:D)
they found the tavern and rented a room with 2 beds. then Carolyn left to find her contact.
chase sighed and laid in his bed, exhausted from the day.
'when carolyn gets back i'll ask her about what happened this morning. I don't know what happened with my krisalidi... wait a minuet, they were saying something about the voltomon maybe he was controling them with that. *sigh* I hope carolyn gets back soon I want to know more about this war I was stupid enough to get into.'
He soon fell asleep in his bed.
He didn't wake when Carolyn came into the room and fell asleep in her own bed, but once again he woke as the sun was coming up.
He sighed and laid back down.
he laid there thinking about his krisalidi why did Carolyn say he had an orb around him? would he loose control of his morphing if he called them up again? chase knew he had to call his krisalidi up again or he wouldn't be able to change. they gave him that power in return for him giving them his energy. so essentially they were magical spirits that were parasites? o well he3 couldn't morph without their gift.
He could feel them coming towards him now...
Well I hope Carolyn doesn't wake up on me like she did yesterday. it freaked her out. Chase stood up and spread his arms out the krisalidi had arrived.
He felt the same sensation when he had first felt them.
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