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Jun 23, 2008 12:17PM
(shapeshifting?! that's cool! ok. let's go on...)
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((IDK what to write.))
The next thing Cosa knew, there was a small swift fox sitting patiently where Chase was just standing.
Then Carolyn went to stand by Cosa and asked, "Is that Chase?"
The small fox twisted his head toward Carolyn and Cosa, grinned and said, "Yep it's me, the one and only shapeshifting Chase!"
Then Carolyn went to stand by Cosa and asked, "Is that Chase?"
The small fox twisted his head toward Carolyn and Cosa, grinned and said, "Yep it's me, the one and only shapeshifting Chase!"
He shifted again, into his usual form.
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"don't worry, you won't need it where we're going." Carolyn assured.
"Really?" She asked turning around.
"Nothing is needed on this quest."
"But it will be long, we have to have something!"
"We aren't taking anything, no questions asked."
"Nothing is needed on this quest."
"But it will be long, we have to have something!"
"We aren't taking anything, no questions asked."
((just one quick question: how old are Carolyn & Chase?I might want to start posting some stuff, just wanted some background info.))
(yeah, I guess it never occured, how old should they be?)
(well . . . carolyn's a nymph, so she should be a bit older . . . but in like a teenager form.)
(Nymphs can usually live to about 500 years for a teenager she would be... about 76)
(oh I see! that's where we left off!)
(so... uh... how to start is quite a problem...)
(hee hee, guys, we left off at 95, 76 is how old Carolyn should be. And Elise, you came up with that!)
(oh! heh heh. Well, I feel smart!)
Neraida (i hope that's right,) was scouring the forest for the enemy. They had been invading the tree lately, and she wanted to get rid of them.
She continued to search the thick foliage surrounding her.
She heard a snap of a branch and immediately whirled. "Who goes there?!" She hissed. No one answered.
Then it went black as Neraida fell to the ground.
He thought about waking Carolyn but thought against it.
Carolyn rest quietly, breathing slowly, and tossing and turning once every while.
He looked at her long thick hair. And saw her eyes closed peacefully.
Chase turned onto his back, and stared up at the stars. They were beautiful tonight, but fading. It was getting lighter.
Chase felt himself gettin lighter.
They caressed his skin, spreading the feeling to his entire being as his skin absorbed their power.
((Wow . . . that part is really good.))
As the sun moved over his head, he felt the energy seep through his fingers.
As the sun moved over his head, he felt the energy seep through his fingers.
Suddenly, Carolyn stirred, and the magic stopped abruptly.
Chase was up and staring at her with vivid blue eyes.
Chase looked at her puzzled. "What do you mean?" He asked.
Chase looked around. "I don't see any orb." He said.
"But, it's right there!" She inisisted, "Around You!"
Chase looked at his hand. "Are you okay Carolyn? I don't see anything."
Chase felt pain and rage coursing through him in waves.
Carolyn knew it wasn't smart to leave Chase, but he had just made a full transformation, it may be safer to run.
She darted for a tree and ran up its trunk to the safety of the high branches.
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