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Well, my Inciting Incident is over with. Now I'm on to the boring parts of Rising Action. *yawn*

They're covers to my books. :D




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Psst - you didn't break 1k. You broke 10k. k= 1,000.
Your covers are really cool. :)

We need your help deciding. Thanks!
http://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/2...

I have noticed around that writers are posting all of the titles that they're working on, and I thought I'd do the same just to keep organized. ;)
Simply Ideas
-A Country Tale (Working Title)
-Failure High
-The Classic Tales of "What If"
-The Secret Hideout
-Prequel(s) to the Dreamer Saga (Unknown title(s))
To Be Written
-Embyrx (3rd book in Dreamer Saga)
-Ashes (4th book in Dreamer Saga)
Works in Progress
-W.R.K.R. (Haha, I remember this one!)
-The World of Matame (Working Title)
-Storm or The Piano and the Storm (Working Title)
-The Unknown Heroes (Working Title) (My NaNo novel I've rewritten for the 3rd time. So far, it's working out great!)
-Sparx (2nd novel in the Dreamer Saga)
Finished Novels (Unedited)
-The Black Shadows (NaNo novel draft #1)
-Black Shadows (NaNo novel draft #2)
Finished, Edited, Hopes to Be Published
-Fyre (1st book in the Dreamer Saga)
Total: 15
I've got a lot on my hands ;) Hopefully I'll be able to finish The Unknown Heroes quickly so that I can work on that novel with hopes to publish it in the near future, while Fyre tends to be tossed around from agent to agent.

So today, I talked to people about how they were "someday going to write a novel". *sigh*. Of course, I understand the fact that adults are busy and don't really have a whole lot of time to write. But all the same, if you want to write a novel now, then write it now! Dude, I'm fifteen, and I started writing a novel at eleven years old. Of course, it wasn't as great, but as I progressed in life I really learned how to make it better! And my writing is still getting better.
So as I vent, if you want to write a freaking novel, write it now. You'll be a better writer if you're writing as much as you can.
That's at least what I think.
haha.
Okay.
I'm done now.
;)

here's my vent:
http://christinebryant.blogspot.com/2...?

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I did read the first two chapters of Unlocked and it looks really good. I'll see what I can to enter your contest. :)

I hate it when I suddenly get a crave for doing more roleplays. It just clogs everything up in my schedule, and then I get addicted to the computer, and then my parents get mad at me because I'm online 24/7..... *sigh*
I have AP US History homework to do still....crap.
I wrote more of Sparx today...that is uber, uber slow right now. I can't seem to figure out what my next approach is on that story, and yet I've got every important part of the plot planned out in my head....It's just not working out so well.
haha
Plus I started getting into depth on US history stuff so I'm reading A Patriot's History....It is by far the longest and most boring book I've ever read. I'm | | this close to giving up! | | THIS CLOSE!!!!!
Anyways, that's my writing rant for the month.
I hope you enjoyed my slowness and boringness of it all.
Tee hee
;)
-Anilynn (Annie)

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Side note: For those of you who haven't heard of Tyler Ward or Julia Sheer, please YouTube him. This guys needs to be famous.
Side note 2: Hopefully I can keep up writing with school starting.
Side note 3: It's weird how whenever fall comes along, I fall in love with country music. I'm weirded out over it.
haha

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If you want to see what I'm writing about this November, check out this link!

I have 4 books that I want to write or have written in a series, and I have an idea for what I want them to be.
The only problem is, is that the first book is written in a journal-like form with people reading the journal. The journal mostly takes place with a character who is the antagonist of the series in first person, while the people who read it take place in third person.
The rest of the three books are (bascially) about one person: the protagonist. The rest of the 3 books take place practically 100 years after the journal was written, and in third person. (But the antagonist and the majority of the characters in the 1st book are used.)
What I'm trying to decide here, is whether I shouldn't use the "journal" book as the first book, and instead use the following 3 books as the series, and then go back and basically....pull a Lord of the Rings type deal ("The Hobbit" kind of thing).
If I go with that idea, I have chapters that I would have liked to include in the series, but they wouldn't make much sense because the people don't know exactly what I'm talking about because they haven't read the "journal" book.
*sigh*
This has been eating at me for four/five years.
If any of that makes sense to you guys, please post your feedback. I really, really want to solve this problem so that I can write my story without having all of these problems.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

I really liked the part about the tigers. I've never read a story started that way before.
Some of the ellipses seemed unnecessary. Perhaps rephrase the sentences so they aren't needed. It's especially noticeable when they are used in two paragraphs in a row.
A few tense issues: "One young man wishes... Mercy, however would never come...He is quickly forced to face...He moaned and he's pulled up
Some unclear sentences:
...the bag ripped off of his head and was shoved onto a hard table (what's shoved: the bag or his head?)
I pray that we never will. (who is the "I"?)
edit: I never thought I’d see the day when the great trickster became a broken man...
edit: He would rather explore this forest than get a bath.
edit: By the time the doctor began to rub clean the area of his chest above his heart, he knew something dangerous was about to happen to him.
I would end the chapter with "darkness overcame him." It is really suspenseful and the next bit is kind of disjointed from the rest of the chapter.
I really like your idea, and I am waiting to read more!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
Thanks!

I'm going to guesstimate I've written about 10,000 words.
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I've kind of stopped writing it... I feel bad for leaving it because I know how I want to write the end, but I'm annoyed with how I'm getting there. It's getting super plot-driven (my specialty: flat characters with fast-paced plots), and I know I'm doing it but I don't know how to fix it.
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