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Non-Linear Draft – 26 Chapters Seeking Alpha/CP for Dark/Psychological Fantasy
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Tye wrote: "Seeking: Alpha Readers & Critique Partners Title: Realm of Shadows: A Dark One’s Curse Genre: Dark Fantasy / Psychological Fantasy Length: ~85k words | 26 chapters (non-linear draft) Status: 1st Dr..."Hi Tye,
If you’re looking for alpha readers, I’d be willing to help you as your blurb sounds interesting. Fantasy and magic is right up my alley.
I offer:
- Feedback on characters, pacing, plot, tension, and suspense.
- Honest in-line comments and reactions in your manuscript.
- A detailed report summarizing your story’s strengths and areas to improve.
- Typos corrected (if you’re okay with it!).
- Actionable suggestions to enhance your work.
- Ongoing support—I’m always here to answer your questions.
My rate is $1.00 per 1,000 words with a 7-day turnaround. You can view testimonials and detailed service information on my website: https://thebookconn.wordpress.com/
If you're interested, please contact me at ikthebeardman@gmail.com
I'm excited about the possibility of working with you to bring your vision to life.
Best regards,
Ik
Helen wrote: "I'm interested, feel free to drop me a mail on helenyzmary@gmail.com"Email Sent
Julie wrote: "Hi Tyeam interested in doing a deep critique of your story kindly send me a mail damseyjulie@gmail.com"
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Hi Tye, if you’d be interested in a swap for an an 70k environmental thriller, I’d be happy to connect and see if we can help each other. Please feel free to message me directly through Good Reads if you’re interested. Thanks! Susan
Tye wrote: "Seeking: Alpha Readers & Critique Partners Title: Realm of Shadows: A Dark One’s Curse Genre: Dark Fantasy / Psychological Fantasy Length: ~85k words | 26 chapters (non-linear draft) Status: 1st Dr..."Hi Tye
Congratulations on completing your book. I'm Bassey and I offer experienced alpha and beta reading services. I am really intrigued by your blurb and would love to read your manuscript. I am running a free first chapter read and $0.0008 per word for the remaining chapters. I have a fast turnaround time of 2 weeks.
My deliverables includes;
- Chapterly review
- feedback on your characters, pace, plot, tension, and suspense
- Honest in-line comments and reactions in the manuscript
- Full and detailed report of the full story
- I'll always answer any questions you have.
- I'll make corrections on any typos if you won't be offended by it
- I'll give opinions on how to improve your work if needed.
You can check the link below for my testimonials
https://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/...
You can reach me at basseyblessing118@gmail.com
Content Warnings: PTSD, trauma, necromancy, strong language, identity loss, psychological horror, nudity, sexual content, mental illness, dissociation, emotional manipulation, body horror, and scenes of violence and death.
Special Note to My Readers: This working manuscript is rooted in my own experience with PTSD. The Dark One represents trauma personified—fragmented identity, suppressed pain, and the ongoing fight to reclaim agency. Trin’s journey is one of reluctant growth, grief, and resilience.
Krios is the name I’ve given my PTSD, and naming that darkness has been a powerful step in my healing. If you’re fighting your own battles, I hope this story offers a reminder: you’re not alone—and you can live alongside the shadows without letting them consume you.
Blurb: In a world where reality blurs and ancient secrets beckon, Trin Reginald Effict grapples with an enigmatic force known as The Dark One. As visions and whispers threaten his sanity, he’s drawn into a web of manipulation and chaos. With allies at his side, Trin must confront both external foes and the shadows within. Can he rewrite his destiny—or will he be consumed by the storm within his mind?
I am looking for: Alpha readers open to character-driven, non-linear narratives And/or critique partners who enjoy dark, emotionally layered fantasy with internal conflict and psychological stakes
Areas seeking feedback: Flow & pacing, worldbuilding, character development (all major characters), tone, emotional clarity, and narrative continuity
Happy to swap chapters and connect with thoughtful readers. If you’re interested, feel free to message me or comment below!
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