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* FEBRUARY 2024 SCIENCE FICTION MICROSTORY CONTEST (Comments only)

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message 1: by Thaddeus (last edited Feb 05, 2024 12:43PM) (new)

Thaddeus Howze | 88 comments A FAMILY CURSE PASSED DOWN

Genre Requirement: Any, with the caveat that you write a genre you normally avoid.

Period: Any time, past, present or future.

Setup: A relative has died, the circumstances unknown, you are attending the reading of a will with the possibility of a vast inheritance.

What bizarre secret/curse has your relative kept hidden from their family and why? The artifact and curse may be manifest in any way the writer sees fit.


message 2: by J.F. (new)

J.F. Williams | 371 comments Isn't this supposed to be a science-fiction group? Good luck to the others. See you all next month.


message 3: by Thaddeus (new)

Thaddeus Howze | 88 comments I was under the impression it was a speculative fiction group. If you WANT to still write science fiction, it is still your choice to do so. I just though we would try to expand our creative fields of endeavor.

If science fiction is your preference, then go nuts. A cursed family member can pass down generational, economic, genetic, alien or technological misfortunes just as easily.


message 4: by J.F. (new)

J.F. Williams | 371 comments The spec-fic group is a different one, Thaddeus. And before Jot moves this to the main page, "passed down", not "past". :)


message 5: by Jot (new)

Jot Russell | 1709 comments Mod
Magical ink definitely sounds sci-fi to me. love the theme, I just need to put together an abbreviated version of the elements.


message 6: by Jot (new)

Jot Russell | 1709 comments Mod
I think adding a fantasy twist is definitely within the rules


message 7: by Tom (new)

Tom Olbert | 1445 comments I have no problem with fantasy elements - we've done that before - but, I think too much of the plot has been laid out in the requirements.

I believe I'll pass on this one.


message 8: by Paula (last edited Feb 05, 2024 06:07PM) (new)

Paula | 1088 comments Mine's up. Tried to write a couple of genres new to me, but I'm afraid it's also got (a) genre(s) and (b) theme I've used before.
And, oh hey, these elements were fun. --Strange sort of "fun," if you followed what I was writing about, but hey. --
Jot, now you must please not abbreviate the requisites too much, for I (and perhaps others) have already spent a couple hours writing a story to accord with the rules as posted tonight.
And J.F., I want to read your story this month, so please write it.
And Tom, twice I've skipped doing stories here because they had so many parameters as to over-limit the plot--and guess who had developed/put up those parameters. (Hint: not Thaddeus.)


message 9: by Tom (new)

Tom Olbert | 1445 comments Paula wrote: "Mine's up. Tried to write a couple of genres new to me, but I'm afraid it's also got (a) genre(s) and theme I've used before.
And, oh hey, these elements were fun. --Strange sort of "fun," if you..."


I can't recall any of my themes or elements filling half a page, Paula.


message 10: by Paula (last edited Feb 04, 2024 01:04PM) (new)

Paula | 1088 comments Oh, I meant it gently, Tom!
I just found/find it ironic that we--every one of us--most readily find such problems as we ourselves may have done.


message 11: by Tom (last edited Feb 04, 2024 02:18PM) (new)

Tom Olbert | 1445 comments I wasn't aware of it, Paula. I've tried to leave themes open-ended, requiring only 1 concept and 2 elements. If I've been too specific in the past, I apologize.

(And, BTW - my compliments on your story - It was a good one.)


message 12: by Paula (last edited Feb 09, 2024 05:18PM) (new)

Paula | 1088 comments No problemo, Tom.
And thank you for the compliment! You've brought in some super themes too!!


message 13: by Jeremy (new)

Jeremy Lichtman | 410 comments I got one in.

Not 100% on-theme, but there's a powerful inheritance.


message 14: by Justin (new)

Justin Sewall | 1244 comments Jeremy and Paula, great stories both!!


message 15: by Jeremy (new)

Jeremy Lichtman | 410 comments Thanks Justin!


message 16: by Tom (new)

Tom Olbert | 1445 comments Jeremy wrote: "I got one in.

Not 100% on-theme, but there's a powerful inheritance."


Lovely and haunting poetic finish.


message 17: by Paula (new)

Paula | 1088 comments Thank you so much, Justin!


message 18: by Paula (new)

Paula | 1088 comments Jeremy, beautifully written, as ever, and crackling lines.


message 19: by Jeremy (new)

Jeremy Lichtman | 410 comments Gracias, Tom, Paula.


message 20: by Carrie (new)

Carrie Zylka (carriezylka) | 286 comments @paula
I have skipped them for that very reason as well. Sometimes too many requirements or making it overly complicated in 750 runs people off.

I like this theme, sometimes I think this group is a little too siloed, or a little too strict. A personal sneaking suspicion as to why the participation has dropped off.
I know it's my reason lol

Working on a submission for this month now, I haven't written anything in a long time, I am feeling rusty!


message 21: by Chris (last edited Feb 14, 2024 11:09AM) (new)

Chris Nance | 536 comments Mine's up. Tried to go a bit western with a little hint of fantasy. Not all that exciting or mind-bending, and its probably not really a curse, per se, but I think it could be the start of a longer story. Hope you guys like it anyway.


message 22: by Tom (new)

Tom Olbert | 1445 comments Chris wrote: "Mine's up. Tried to go a bit western with a little hint of fantasy. Not all that exciting or mind-bending, and its probably not really a curse, per se, but I think it could be the start of a longer..."

I liked it very much, Chris. Fantastic imagery. The perfect set-up for an American period mystery.


message 23: by Paula (new)

Paula | 1088 comments Carrie, I utterly agree that "a little too siloed or...strict" [and sometimes too literal in interpreing theme requirements] has, over the years, "put people off"
--Carrie wrote: "@paula
I have skipped them for that very reason as well. Sometimes too many requirements or making it overly complicated in 750 runs people off.

I like this theme, sometimes I think this group is..."



message 24: by Marianne (new)

Marianne (mariannegpetrino) | 436 comments Hi, all. Kind of my last 2 cents for what it is worth: A little variety is good; go with the flow.

On another note, I will be deleting my goodreads account at some point in time this year. I am kind of done with the whole writing thing. Life, and my brain, have not been cooperating with so many things. It has been a good time here, however. I have learned much and was glad to have participated.

So, "Smoke me a kipper....."


message 25: by Jeremy (new)

Jeremy Lichtman | 410 comments Sorry to hear that Marianne. I've enjoyed reading your work over the years. Hope all is and will be well.


message 26: by Justin (new)

Justin Sewall | 1244 comments Oh Marianne! So sorry to hear that. I hope you can recharge after some time and rediscover any joy it brought you. I really liked your stories. The sentient houses story stands out in my mind right now. Best wishes!


message 27: by Paula (new)

Paula | 1088 comments Ah, Marianne, I shall miss your stories, and your online presence, here. I will echo Jeremy's and Justin's feelings in saying your stories have been a boon and a joy to read, and I hope things will go well for you in future. My best wishes to you!
And please pop back in here, or even rejoin, when/if you wish and it seems a good choice to you.


message 28: by Thaddeus (new)

Thaddeus Howze | 88 comments Not criticizing your choice, but I wonder why delete your account?

Your stories are wonderful and are likely linked to your account. When you leave, they leave. They offer great opportunities to new writers to learn from your craft.

Whatever you choose, I hope you will be happy and fulfilled in your endeavors.

It has been a pleasure.


message 29: by Jot (new)

Jot Russell | 1709 comments Mod
Sorry to have you go Marianne. As far as I'm concerned, you will always be a member of this club. Stop back any time. Otherwise, success, health, wealth, but most important, happiness to you!


message 30: by Marianne (new)

Marianne (mariannegpetrino) | 436 comments Thanks all for your kind words. I do love my sentient buildings. What a fraxious bunch.

There is still so much this group can do. I hope you continue to succeed :)


Most days I feel like I am screaming into the void. I am very much in walk away mode. I think handling 2 estates was a real trigger for impermanence and doing Swedish death cleaning. I vowed when I turned seventy to take all the work offline, as I figured it had all the exposure it ever needed. Nothing much was going on with my archive on Wattpad. So I got a year to work on that. Everything will get backed up, of course. As someone once said in a special about Elvis fandom: It is like counting backward from Infinity.

Last summer, after 4 years, a copyright issue arose from my dead friend's estate, and that just really drove my anxiety into the stratosphere. Suffice it to say, it cost me money to extricate myself from living another person's life, but it was well worth it.

I have thought about us all as writers: How can our work survive life changes? The truth is, in the very long run, it really can't. To quote the song from, god help us, The Bridges of Madison County, the Musical: It all fades away.

Thad, I think all the stuff we did on LinkedIn is gone, so again, impermanence, but since you have brought it up, I will inquire about what happens to my posts on Goodreads upon deletion of the account. You make a good point.

I want to cast off all chains, however. I am trying to disentangle myself from the web so no one else will ever have to worry about it for me after I die, like I had to do with my friend. As far as I am concerned, everything I scribbled could go into the public domain upon my demise. (Copyright, because of Disney is totally messed up.) That being said, I will probably last to almost 95 like my mom, Bronx cockroach that I am.

I am open to changing my mind, but as in the Indian epics, I feel the time has come to meditate in the forest, and leave very active creativity behind. Or at least settle into a new routine that does not involve a crisis a minute. I am just exhausted on all levels. I need quiet and isolation to write. With my husband retired, it is hard to carve out the space I need for that. But the truth is, if I had the desire to write, I would do it, no matter what. But the muse has gone so far down the road, she is no longer in view. And that is really ok. That is just Life.

Thanks for listening.


message 31: by Justin (new)

Justin Sewall | 1244 comments Great story Thaddeus! As a tabletop war gamer (Axis & Allies and every iteration since 1984), I could totally relate!


message 32: by Jot (new)

Jot Russell | 1709 comments Mod
Thanks for sharing, Marianne. God bless


message 33: by Tom (new)

Tom Olbert | 1445 comments Marianne wrote: "Thanks all for your kind words. I do love my sentient buildings. What a fraxious bunch.

There is still so much this group can do. I hope you continue to succeed :)


Most days I feel like I am sc..."


I'm very sorry to see you go, Marianne.

Thank you for the time you spent with us and the wonderful musings you shared. I echo the feelings of others in the group who have also clearly appreciated the magic and beauty you brought here.

I hope you find peace and anything else you're looking for. Here's hoping your muse isn't dead. But, I think she lives on in all of us, thanks to you.


message 34: by Tom (new)

Tom Olbert | 1445 comments Excellent story, Justin. The imagery and character visualization were beautiful. It flowed with a power.


message 35: by Tom (last edited Feb 23, 2024 05:15PM) (new)

Tom Olbert | 1445 comments Justin wrote: "Great story Thaddeus! As a tabletop war gamer (Axis & Allies and every iteration since 1984), I could totally relate!"

I liked it too, even though I couldn't relate to the war games part so much. It had a strong linear flow and a nice apocalyptic feel intermingled with elegance and mystery, and an interesting lead character. I liked the way the action exploded at the end, though I couldn't help feeling it left me hanging and wanting a bit more.


message 36: by Jeremy (new)

Jeremy Lichtman | 410 comments It's a good crop this month. Tough theme! Sometimes a hard winter freeze produces eiswein.


message 37: by Jeremy McLain (new)

Jeremy McLain | 51 comments got mine in at last hour.

was kicking a few ideas around but was watching the moon landing earlier today and got some inspiration.


message 38: by Jot (new)

Jot Russell | 1709 comments Mod
Still need votes from Paula, Thaddeus, Greg and Jeremy McLain. Anyone's game.


message 39: by Thaddeus (new)

Thaddeus Howze | 88 comments I sent you mine, sir.


message 40: by Jot (new)

Jot Russell | 1709 comments Mod
Thank you, sir. Still Waiting on Paula and Mr. McLain


message 41: by Paula (new)

Paula | 1088 comments Just sent mine in a couple of hours ago. Sorry for the nick-of-time vote; (I read each piece through carefully twice, as one should, so at least there's 1/Nth of an excuse).


message 42: by Paula (new)

Paula | 1088 comments Paula wrote: "Just sent mine in a couple of hours ago. Sorry for the nick-of-time vote; (I read each piece through carefully twice, as one should, so at least there's 1/Nth of an excuse)."

And here--on Monday afternoon--is my final-round vote--rather a close one, as the two remaining stories were precisely my 4th- and 5th-choice stories!


message 43: by Jot (new)

Jot Russell | 1709 comments Mod
Thaddeus graciously provided a nicer contest banner. What do you guys think?


message 44: by Jeremy (new)

Jeremy Lichtman | 410 comments Perfect!


message 45: by Jot (new)

Jot Russell | 1709 comments Mod
Thaddeus, is the third part from Ad-Asta? Not sure if we can include it if it is.


message 46: by Paula (new)

Paula | 1088 comments I like it. Lots of tough men and foreboding lighting, lol. Yes, it's both interesting and appropriate. I'd agree with Jot's point that permission's needed for use of any part from Ad Asta (or other copyrighted source).


message 47: by Tom (new)

Tom Olbert | 1445 comments Jot wrote: "Thaddeus graciously provided a nicer contest banner. What do you guys think?"

Striking. Effective.


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