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Ashley
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Mar 18, 2015 11:40AM



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Michelle(Chelle) aka Nightshade - Cake Whisperer
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I usually avoid them too Shari Kay but I had a certain someone recommend strongly that I read the Riley Jensen series and I have to admit it is one of my favorites.



Her most recent offering in the series, Playing With Monsters, is edited pretty well. She, like so many others, has trouble with the "Sally and me, Sally and I, She and I" thing. It's annoying because there's such an easy way to tell which phrasing is correct (drop the first part of Sally and I, Sally and me, and whichever makes sense is the correct one).
Example, Sally and I went to the store. Remove the "Sally and", then read the sentence. "I" is the correct pronoun to use. You wouldn't say Sally and me went to the store, because dropping Sally, the sentence reads "me went to the store". That make sense?
Anyway, excellent series, in spite of the foibles, and I'm not usually one to forgive writing foibles.
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