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Let’s write a story!
Jillian wrote: "alice仙境 wrote: "*but doesn't he have a girlfriend and like didnt this dude just kidnap her a few hours ago-*"
Go with the feels, girl. I felt like this ship needed to happen."
Agreed.
Go with the feels, girl. I felt like this ship needed to happen."
Agreed.
(okay ill just edit the wife out???? idk ill make sure it fits the narrative)
Alya stumbled back, her hands on her lips, and she felt the tears running over them. Without even thinking, she wrapped her arms around his neck and squeezed as he held her shuddering body.
“I can’t-“ she started, but Conifeir put a finger to her lips, shaking his head softly.
“You can.”
“I can’t-“ she started, but Conifeir put a finger to her lips, shaking his head softly.
“You can.”
(Thank you Alice, our new and amazing editor 🙂☺️)
(im just thinking about how much revising im going to have to do to make this pacing work...but as Gandhi once said, "Spice first, plot later.")
Writer.Reader.Dreamer wrote: "He helped her up, grasping her hand in his. “Alya, they track you. The Auivi track you, don’t you remember?”Alya nodded vaguely, her mind a vortex of worry. Only meant to be used, to be controlle..."
oh wait goodreads glitched and i commented too late but i meant to comment this right after the paragraph above:
The subtle air suddenly got colder, blowing harder on the lush trees. Conifeir raised a limp Alya into standing position. Her face was no longer alert. Beside him, faries began fluttering, shifting into smaller fairies or merely disappearing.
Conifier decided to take Ayla to the one place he saw fit. The wind between the two of them suddenly began to pick up pace, in an instant they were gone. And despite there being bigger things to worry about, all Conifier was thinking about was how he'd explain Ayla to Nox and the rest of them
also isn't the relationship between conifier and ayla going a bit fast? i'm fine with whatever but they barely know each other.
alice仙境 wrote: "(im just thinking about how much revising im going to have to do to make this pacing work...but as Gandhi once said, "Spice first, plot later.")"
Aha, love that quote!
Aha, love that quote!
It is... maybe we should just make it a hug instead?
sure. we can always move the spice to different parts, yknow? its just a rough draft
Can you edit that, Alice? I don’t want to be negative towards Jillian, but we need to make it tortuously slow, you know what I mean?
alice仙境 wrote: "sure. we can always move the spice to different parts, yknow? its just a rough draft"
Writer.Reader.Dreamer wrote: "Can you edit that, Alice? I don’t want to be negative towards Jillian, but we need to make it tortuously slow, you know what I mean?"
Okay!
Writer.Reader.Dreamer wrote: "Can you edit that, Alice? I don’t want to be negative towards Jillian, but we need to make it tortuously slow, you know what I mean?"
Okay!
i bet conifeir looks crusty irl because HE LITERALLY HAS LIKE FULLY WHITE SKIN. not pale. FULLY WHITE. but in book form hes yes
I agree, I just wanted this ship to happen.
sure guys! we can move stuff around. to later parts. i think we should stall the beginning because it kind of reads as a strange info dump rn but we'll get it fixed
Alice, we have to be driving you crazy. You are an amazing editor.
i feel like its partially my fault for saying i shipped them because then it became fast burn real quick
alice仙境 wrote: "sure. we can always move the spice to different parts, yknow? its just a rough draft"of course! i'm happy with whatever. i just think it would be better for ayla to faint right after finding out about the auivi and then conifier brings her somewhere (a friends place i assume) so that we can introduce more characters. just a suggestion though.
ive barely edited yet-
but i have to do it before 10 and im procrastinated so i should start multitasking now uwu
but i have to do it before 10 and im procrastinated so i should start multitasking now uwu
sarah. wrote: "alice仙境 wrote: "sure. we can always move the spice to different parts, yknow? its just a rough draft"
of course! i'm happy with whatever. i just think it would be better for ayla to faint right af..."
love that idea!
of course! i'm happy with whatever. i just think it would be better for ayla to faint right af..."
love that idea!
Oooh, you’re right, I think he convince her to a potion that makes her unconscious instead. Don’t want her to seem to weak.
Jillian wrote: "Alice, we have to be driving you crazy. You are an amazing editor."yeah, thank you for putting everything together, it's annoying glitchreads isn't cooperating.
Wait- what's happening? XD Wait so isn't the romance a bit rushed
And he should bring her to his grandmother’s, so Alya can learn more about his past.
i dont wanna write too much so that it doesnt become mainly me who wrote it so i'll try to do small edits while still keeping what everyone wrote
Writer.Reader.Dreamer wrote: "And he should bring her to his grandmother’s, so Alya can learn more about his past."
CONIFEIR BABY PHOTOS
CONIFEIR BABY PHOTOS
(We edited to a hug)If I rewrite the scene I make just make it a very emotional hug that results in Alya leaving.
im just imagining the grandma like "and this was when he was a wittle boy!" and conifeirs like stfu grandma i WILL snap your neck
yes and then we could add in conifeir's friends (if we do that i think we should add the name nox bc it sounds cool).
Sorry if I’m being bossy! I just feel like it might spice things up a bit OMG AND THERE COULD BE AN AUIVI RAID ON HIS GRANDMOTHER’S HOUSE :O
I’m not helping am I?
I’m not helping am I?
alice仙境 wrote: "im just imagining the grandma like "and this was when he was a wittle boy!" and conifeirs like stfu grandma i WILL snap your neck"
YASSSS GIRL
YASSSS GIRL
sarah. wrote: "yes and then we could add in conifeir's friends (if we do that i think we should add the name nox bc it sounds cool)."
Ohhh you know what, Nox should be the sweet little cousin who Conifeir has a soft spot for
Ohhh you know what, Nox should be the sweet little cousin who Conifeir has a soft spot for
Lol yes! Continuing from the previous scene with Conifier taking her to the cabin:Alya leaned into Conifier, relaxing herself. She felt the daggers in her pocket and remembered the bone fairies.
She frantically rolled out of Conifier's arms.
yess btw we're ditching her ptsd moment because the memory loss thing is too confusing.
BONE FAIRIES
idk wtf those are but that sounds so disgusting and horrifying
i want one as a pet
idk wtf those are but that sounds so disgusting and horrifying
i want one as a pet
This is getting confusing. Where do we want to pick up the writing?
Yeahhhh
Can I just say, I have never found more kind people online, YOU GUYS ARE AMAZING! Group hug! (Conifeir would not enjoy that, I imagine)
Can I just say, I have never found more kind people online, YOU GUYS ARE AMAZING! Group hug! (Conifeir would not enjoy that, I imagine)
Hugz all around!!!But seriously where do we want to pick up the writing you guys and who should start?
(Continuing after Jillian)
Suddenly her eyelids fluttered shut. “What’s going on?” she mumbled sleepily.
Conifeir tossed an empty glass vial aside into the grass. “Don’t worry, Alya. We’re going somewhere safe.”
Suddenly her eyelids fluttered shut. “What’s going on?” she mumbled sleepily.
Conifeir tossed an empty glass vial aside into the grass. “Don’t worry, Alya. We’re going somewhere safe.”
wait, instead of editing comments why doesn't everyone edit on the this link where the completed chapters will be. i think that would be easier for alice to put it all together considering that we're all just commenting suggestions right now.
XD awww same to you!But yeah where should we pick it up?
sarah. wrote: "wait, instead of editing comments why doesn't everyone edit on the this link where the completed chapters will be. i think that would be easier for alice to put it all together considering that we'..."Wait I don't know how this works. How do you edit?
Mango wrote: "sarah. wrote: "wait, instead of editing comments why doesn't everyone edit on the this link where the completed chapters will be. i think that would be easier for alice to put it all together consi..."just comment on the bottom your complete edited paragraph so alice can add them in.
hmmm. idk cuz im still editing things but yall can do whatever tbh
Writer.Reader.Dreamer wrote: "(Continuing after Jillian)
Suddenly her eyelids fluttered shut. “What’s going on?” she mumbled sleepily.
Conifeir tossed an empty glass vial aside into the grass. “Don’t worry, Alya. We’re goin..."
conifeir <3
Suddenly her eyelids fluttered shut. “What’s going on?” she mumbled sleepily.
Conifeir tossed an empty glass vial aside into the grass. “Don’t worry, Alya. We’re goin..."
conifeir <3
Ooh yay! I honestly love this story so much I could explode
Not us falling in love with our own characters😅😂
Go with the feels, girl. I felt like this ship needed to happen.