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Bhavya is sort of back online
BookDuck | Maddie wrote: "Hello"helllllooooo
BookDuck | Maddie wrote: "Hello"MADDIEEEEEEEEE
BookDuck | Maddie wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "BookDuck | Maddie wrote: "Hello"MADDIEEEEEEEEE"
BHAVYYYYYAAAAAAAA
HOW ARE YOU??"
I AM DOING OK
YOU??
Bhavya wrote: "Shay ☆ wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "I was reading through my writing and I realised it’s very bad"i highly doubt ittt"
It is quite bad. The problem is that I’m not describing the places much. I need t..."
worldbuilding? I struggled a lot with that before I mentally slapped myself. The trick I discovered is to have the worldbuilding details and reveal it slowly and only when it's relevent.
Niharika✩ wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Shay ☆ wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "I was reading through my writing and I realised it’s very bad"i highly doubt ittt"
It is quite bad. The problem is that I’m not describing the places..."
Yes I don’t have problem with the info-dumping element. I have more of an issue with literally describing the world so readers can vision it.
BookDuck | Maddie wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "BookDuck | Maddie wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "BookDuck | Maddie wrote: "Hello"MADDIEEEEEEEEE"
BHAVYYYYYAAAAAAAA
HOW ARE YOU??"
I AM DOING OK
YOU??"
I'M GOOD! I HEARD YOU ARE TALKING..."
YESSS I LOVE GOOD WORLD BUILDING.
I WAS TALKING ABOUT THE BOOK I AM WORKING ON. DO YOU HAVE ANY TIPS FOR GOOD WORLD BUILDING?
BookDuck | Maddie wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "BookDuck | Maddie wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "BookDuck | Maddie wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "BookDuck | Maddie wrote: "Hello"MADDIEEEEEEEEE"
BHAVYYYYYAAAAAAAA
HOW ARE YOU??"
I AM DOING OK
..."
OOOH OK THANKS
I WILL TRY TO DO THAT
HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
Same, but i'm gonna eat dinner in a few minutes
Blobbie! wrote: "Same, but i'm gonna eat dinner in a few minutes"Me too.
Aashi wrote: "I have to sleep in half an hour"Good night! :)
Aashi wrote: "I have to sleep in half an hour"what time is it for u?
Bhavya wrote: "Navya wrote: "BHAVYAAAAAAAA"
NAVYAAAAAAA"
HOW ARE YOUU
NAVYAAAAAAA"
HOW ARE YOUU
Blobbie! wrote: "Aashi wrote: "I have to sleep in half an hour"what time is it for u?"
Currently 9:41 pm
Aashi wrote: "Blobbie! wrote: "Aashi wrote: "I have to sleep in half an hour"what time is it for u?"
Currently 9:41 pm"
oh ok, u sleep kinda early... in my opinion
Navya wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Navya wrote: "BHAVYAAAAAAAA"NAVYAAAAAAA"
HOW ARE YOUU"
I AM OK. STILL SAD ABOUT NOT LIKING KOS 💔
YOU?
ALSO WE HAVE NOT TALKED SINCE LONG :(
Bhavya wrote: "Navya wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Navya wrote: "BHAVYAAAAAAAA"
NAVYAAAAAAA"
HOW ARE YOUU"
I AM OK. STILL SAD ABOUT NOT LIKING KOS 💔
YOU?
ALSO WE HAVE NOT TALKED SINCE LONG :("
RUHFVCNJ I'M SCARED I WONT LIKE IT NOW
TO BE HONEST I AM NOT FEELING FANTASTIC
YES WE REALLY SHOULD IERJGFDVKCM :)
NAVYAAAAAAA"
HOW ARE YOUU"
I AM OK. STILL SAD ABOUT NOT LIKING KOS 💔
YOU?
ALSO WE HAVE NOT TALKED SINCE LONG :("
RUHFVCNJ I'M SCARED I WONT LIKE IT NOW
TO BE HONEST I AM NOT FEELING FANTASTIC
YES WE REALLY SHOULD IERJGFDVKCM :)
Blobbie! wrote: "Aashi wrote: "Blobbie! wrote: "Aashi wrote: "I have to sleep in half an hour"what time is it for u?"
Currently 9:41 pm"
oh ok, u sleep kinda early... in my opinion"
I don’t sleep early. I just have to go to bed. My parents assume I am sleeping. I just lay there till late hours overthinking and creating situations and having mild panic attacks and remembering old embarrassing things and- u get the idea?
Navya wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Navya wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Navya wrote: "BHAVYAAAAAAAA"NAVYAAAAAAA"
HOW ARE YOUU"
I AM OK. STILL SAD ABOUT NOT LIKING KOS 💔
YOU?
ALSO WE HAVE NOT TALKED SINCE LONG :("
RUHFVCN..."
I HOPE YOU LIKE IT
OH NO. WHAT HAPPENED?
YESSS
Bhavya wrote: "Navya wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Navya wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Navya wrote: "BHAVYAAAAAAAA"
NAVYAAAAAAA"
HOW ARE YOUU"
I AM OK. STILL SAD ABOUT NOT LIKING KOS 💔
YOU?
ALSO WE HAVE NOT TALKED SINCE LON..."
I HOPE SO TOO
I'LL PM YOU?
INDEED
NAVYAAAAAAA"
HOW ARE YOUU"
I AM OK. STILL SAD ABOUT NOT LIKING KOS 💔
YOU?
ALSO WE HAVE NOT TALKED SINCE LON..."
I HOPE SO TOO
I'LL PM YOU?
INDEED
Navya wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Navya wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Navya wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Navya wrote: "BHAVYAAAAAAAA"NAVYAAAAAAA"
HOW ARE YOUU"
I AM OK. STILL SAD ABOUT NOT LIKING KOS 💔
YOU?
ALSO WE HAVE NOT T..."
SURE PM ME
Aashi wrote: "Blobbie! wrote: "Aashi wrote: "Blobbie! wrote: "Aashi wrote: "I have to sleep in half an hour"what time is it for u?"
Currently 9:41 pm"
oh ok, u sleep kinda early... in my opinion"
I don’t sl..."
Yup!, i do that too, but my parents sleep early so after they sleep i just read!
I like how there are currently two conversations going on right now. One without disturbing the other
Blobbie! wrote: "Aashi wrote: "Blobbie! wrote: "Aashi wrote: "Blobbie! wrote: "Aashi wrote: "I have to sleep in half an hour"what time is it for u?"
Currently 9:41 pm"
oh ok, u sleep kinda early... in my opinio..."
Ok I am jealous... how do they allow u??
Aashi wrote: "Blobbie! wrote: "Aashi wrote: "Blobbie! wrote: "Aashi wrote: "Blobbie! wrote: "Aashi wrote: "I have to sleep in half an hour"what time is it for u?"
Currently 9:41 pm"
oh ok, u sleep kinda earl..."
ummmmm... they kinda don't know...! :)))
Aashi wrote: "I like how there are currently two conversations going on right now. One without disturbing the other"HEHE
Blobbie! wrote: "Aashi wrote: "Blobbie! wrote: "Aashi wrote: "Blobbie! wrote: "Aashi wrote: "Blobbie! wrote: "Aashi wrote: "I have to sleep in half an hour"what time is it for u?"
Currently 9:41 pm"
👁👄👁 omg this comment just made my day😂😂😂😂
oh ok, u sl..."
Aashi wrote: "Blobbie! wrote: "Aashi wrote: "Blobbie! wrote: "Aashi wrote: "Blobbie! wrote: "Aashi wrote: "Blobbie! wrote: "Aashi wrote: "I have to sleep in half an hour"what time is it for u?"
Currently 9:41..."
lol
I somehow need to finish fbaa by June and I’m dreading it 😭
Also I’m currently reading 3 e-copies and I just suck at reading copies bec I’ve become so dependent on audiobooks 👀
Also it is right that Amazon has cancelled the subscription fee till schools are re-opened for audiobooks?
Bhavya wrote: "I somehow need to finish fbaa by June and I’m dreading it 😭"omgggg *whispers* DNF?
Gourica wrote: "Lol go get reading Bhavya!"Thanks ❤️
Gourica wrote: "Also it is right that Amazon has cancelled the subscription fee till schools are re-opened for audiobooks?"I didn’t know about this!
Bhavya wrote: "Also I’m currently reading 3 e-copies and I just suck at reading copies bec I’ve become so dependent on audiobooks 👀"omg this is why im scared to get into audiobooks, my reading speed is gonna plummet!!
btw i read the threads in Navya's nook and omg is everything okay?? im not in the group so i cannot comment but things do seem to be getting intense
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i highly doubt ittt"
It is quite bad. The problem is that I’m not describing the places much. I need to make the world building stronger. And it’s a lot more character focused, which isn’t necessarily bad but maybe the plot is boring...
Plus I’ve repeated words a lot, but I highlighted it every time I’ve done that. I guess that’s not surprising 👀
But I know the errors. I will definitely fix them soon. I guess this is one advantage of being a critical reader. I know that it’s not good, so I know what to work on.