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      Jul 09, 2020 11:42AM
    
     I've haven't read anything by this author before and as the book is in KU I thought I would give it a go. Reaching 43% my first impressions are that it needs to be proof read. The author refers to a car being a Saab xc-90, but Saab doesn't make this model Volvo do.I am going to finish the book but am undecided as to whether I would read the next one.
      I've haven't read anything by this author before and as the book is in KU I thought I would give it a go. Reaching 43% my first impressions are that it needs to be proof read. The author refers to a car being a Saab xc-90, but Saab doesn't make this model Volvo do.I am going to finish the book but am undecided as to whether I would read the next one.
    
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      If confusing a Volvo model with Saab is the worst mistake, and it doesn’t affect the plot, it’s nothing to bother about. When you write a book, you discover such errors are almost impossible to catch. I’m still finding stuff like this in a book I published two years ago. You’re thinking of the name of a make of Swedish car, and you are that’s it.
    
  
  
   The abscence of words in sentences disrupts the flow of the book if you have to stop and work out what the sentence should say. This author is not a novice,having written for t.v and film,silly mistakes shouldn't be made. On the same page as the car mistake they describe a house as having 5 bedrooms,yet 2 pages later it has 4 bedrooms. I suspect if he had made mistakes when writing for Silent Witness he wouldn't have been asked back.
      The abscence of words in sentences disrupts the flow of the book if you have to stop and work out what the sentence should say. This author is not a novice,having written for t.v and film,silly mistakes shouldn't be made. On the same page as the car mistake they describe a house as having 5 bedrooms,yet 2 pages later it has 4 bedrooms. I suspect if he had made mistakes when writing for Silent Witness he wouldn't have been asked back.
    


