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onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Ruby didn't tell him a thing. She kept her silence to herself. She wasn't upset because of that. She was hurt because he hurt her. She knew it didn't seem like a big deal but she never thought he would hurt her.


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments (Sorry. I'm was just busy with other things and I was going to go to sleep)


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((Oh no worries same here I realized I didn't post yet and they did a double thingy where it post twice it been happening a lot to me this past few hours))


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments (It's okay)


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((Yep I just saw this stupid notifications))


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex sighed to himself and he smelled the air but didn't smell the scent of blood anymore and he looked down at the floor for a while then he looked back at her


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She felt curling into a ball and dying things couldn't get any worse well they could. Ruby didn't like this feeling of hurting.


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex walked over to her and he softly kissed her neck where he bite her, lightly licking the holes so that they closed/healed instantly before taking an few steps back


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "You hurt me." She whispered. "I didn't think you could hurt me or would." Ruby's voice was quite.


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments "I didn't want to." Alex said softly and he looked away from her at the ground


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She nodded her head slowly. "I believe you." Ruby whispered.


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments "But you don't trust me right now." Alex said and he raised his head to look back at her


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "I trust you." She whispered. She didn't look at him.


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex looked at her and he walked towards her until he was an few inches in front of her and he gently raised up her chin so she was looking at him and said "Look me in the eyes and tell me that without looking away."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Since Ruby was used to lying she could lie to anyone or at least she thought she could. "I trust you." She said looking at him. She was lying. She felt her life was over now. Her one to true love and her husband to be actually hurt her.


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex studied her face sadly then he said "Your lying." and he let go off her face then he looked at her again sadly before he turned around and walked out of the room


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Ruby didn't know what to do. She looked down some. She walked to a corner with a blanket and curled into a ball. She let some tears run down her cheeks thats all she could do.


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex walked downstairs and he leaned against the wall, staring down at the wall and he grabbed his head as his eyes glowed an faint blue then he walked out the front door and he looked around to make sure no one was around then his eyes glowed yellow and he shifted into his wolf form, running off into the woods behind the house to try and clear his head, snarling and growling as he ran


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Ruby heard the him shut the front door. That was enough for her to break down. She thought the worse automatically that he left her. She was probably right though. She knew when guys left they don't come back. Not for her at least.


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex kept on walking until he got far enough then he came to an slow walk panting as it started to sprinkle a little but he didn't mind or care as he continued walking, water sprinkling on his black fur.

(Any idea for an plot twist or fight?)


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Ruby was nervous inside. She didn't know if he really did leave her or if he needed space.

((Hmmm maybe he calls if off with her or the other way around?))


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments (That would suck. No offense)

After a while Alex stopped and he tilted his head as he sniffed the air, his nostrils flaring then he shook his head and continued walking again, looking around as he walked


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((Non taking thats the best I got my brain is fried from government))

She hoped he would come back soon. She didn't know if she could live without him. She lost him once. She most likely will go back to her old ways.


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments (Lol, it's okay)

An hour later, Alex came back inside the house back in his human form with his cloths ripped and his shoes gone a long with some scratches on his body that bled. He shut the door behind him softly and he stopped, his teeth gritted in pain then he turned around and walked over to the couch, slowly sitting down on it


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((Thanks I learned lesson not to double up on history))

She heard a door shut. She ran downstairs in a flash. "Alex are you okay." She whispered. "I'm so sorry for hurting your feelings." She said. She kneeled down beside him. "What happened?" She asked. Ruby was nervous.


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments "Got in a little fight with an pack." Alex said and he clenched his hands into fists as he started hurting again and his teeth gritted in pain


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Ruby nodded her head. "What can I do for you?" She asked softly. "Do you need anything for the pain." She looked at him. "Why were you fighting? You could of gotten killed" she said.


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments "No I don't need anything and remember I'm an werewolf so I'm stronger and faster." Alex murmured and he breathed in and out, trying to ignore the pain


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "That doesn't mean you can't get hurt or killed."She said softly. "You sure I can get you something." She whispered.


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments "I said no." Alex growled and his eyes glowed blue as an growl/snarl came from him and he clutched his head and his teeth, now fangs, gritted and he breathed in and out deeply as he struggled to control himself then after a while, he slowly changed back


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "I'm sorry I didn't know what I was thinking." Ruby whispered. "Please just let me help you." She said. She really wanted to help him. "I can't lose you Alex."


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex growled lightly but he controlled himself as he said "I've actually been thirsty for... blood." and he looked at her. He didn't know why but after biting her so many times, he was starting to want her blood now despite what he thought.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Okay I'll let you have anything you need." Ruby would do anything to make me happy to keep him. Not to lose him. That was the last thing she ever wanted.


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments "Okay." Alex said and he looked away from her, fangs replacing his teeth. He clutched the couch again to try and ignore the pain.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She walked to him giving him access to her neck. "Go ahead." Ruby whispered. She was desperate to keep him with her.


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments "I rather do the wrist." Alex said softly and he slowly looked at her


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Okay anything for you." She said handing him her wrist. Ruby was trying to make him happy.


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex gently grabbed her arm then he hesitated when he noticed some blood on her wrist and he licked the blood then he growled before he gently bite her wrist, his fangs sinking into her flesh


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She winced at the pain as she was used it being at her neck. She didn't know what to do. Ruby smiled she had to please him.


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex's eyes were closed as he groaned, Ruby's blood going into his mouth and he drank for a few more minutes before he pulled back with blood going down his fangs and covered his chin with him breathing heavy


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Are you happy now?" She asked softly looking up at him. Ruby smiled some. "Did I make you happy." She asked. She didn't want to lose him. "You are not going to leave me?"


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments "Of course I'm not going to leave you." Alex murmured and he looked at her with an faint smile but then his head turned back to her wrist that was still bleeding and with another growl he bite her wrist again though this time he seemed to be more gentler about. He couldn't help himself as her blood was teasing him but though he couldn't help it he tried not to make it hurt.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Ruby nodded her head slowly. "Okay." She whispered. Her faced began to pale some. She didn't say anything in fear of making him angry or upset. She just let him take her blood. It wasn't like anyone cared about her. "Alex can't you take it from the neck its better for me there because I can feel it."


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex didn't answer then after a few seconds he realized he was hurting her and he quickly pulled away, moving her wrist from him so he couldn't bite her again. He didn't mean to hurt her or bite her but of course he couldn't control himself and he did it anyways. "No. If I ever try to bite you again don't let me."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Why Alex? Its fine its just that I'm weak." She whispered. She looked up at him some and smiled a little bit. "I'm sorry Alex I really am." She whispered.


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex didn't answer as he looked around then he grabbed an knife from the table and he moved his head to the side so his neck was exposed and he touched the blade of the knife to his neck and he made a small cut on his neck then he put it back down on the couch. "Take some."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "No I'm fine." She whispered. "I'm going to be perfectly fine." She whispered. She backed away. "Alex are you okay?" She asked.


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments "Yes I'm okay but I took to much blood from you. If you want me to be happy then take some." Alex said as he looked at her. He didn't want her to force her to do anything but he was worried about her.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "I want human blood." She said. "Other than that I'm fine what happened in those woods? What's wrong with you Alex." She asked


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex growled lightly but his cut healed as he looked at her then he sighed and said "Nothing happened. Just needed to clear my head."


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