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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Hey


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments I'm really sorry but I can't be on here right now since I'm in class and I'll get in major trouble if I'm caught


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments okay thats fine no worries :)


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Back


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Plot: (I got the idea from an group I am in)

In Los Angeles there is an high school for that is hidden from humans where vampires go to attend and learn about their history or whatever they need to know about where everyone is an vampire except for the human subjugates that vampires have where the vampire can use to drink blood from or do whatever they want and the subjugates have to do whatever the vampire they are appointed to say and the subjugates are certain humans who have run away from their families or they have no families and have been told about the vampire and volunteered to be a subjugate or who have been captured and forced to be a subjugate.

Guy A is an 18 year old human who lost his parents due to an accident when he was younger and has volunteered to be an subjugate for an vampire though he is reluctant to be bitten and used for his blood though he knows he has no choice and has nothing to lose anyways

Girl A is an thousand year old rich and hot vampire who attends at the high school and has asked for an subjugate though problem is that she is the "bad and slutty (sorry for the word) girl" type of female vampire and when she gets her subjugate, she decides to have fun with him and teases him whenever possible and whenever she has the chance


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments That sounds amazing so do you want charries or do you want to just start?


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments I like to make the charries first if that's alright


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Thats fine simple or detail?


message 10: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Doesn't matter though I would like an picture for the appearance


message 11: by Carlos (last edited Nov 20, 2014 07:43AM) (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Name: Alex Garcia
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Appearance: http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/img-thing...
History: TBRP'D

(Sorry that the charrie sheet isn't very good. I'm almost at 10 percent and I'm at school so I don't have my charger with me)


message 12: by onceuponatimeareview (last edited Nov 10, 2014 01:18PM) (new)

onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Okay :)

Name: Ruby
Nick Name: Strawberry
Appearance:



Is that good?


message 13: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Not trying to mess up your charrie and like I'm that kind of guy but I would kind of prefer if you used an picture of an girl that looked like she was his age and had a little of an emo look to her


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Is this picture okay?




message 15: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Yeah


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Okay who shall go first?


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments (I will and I'm sorry if it sucks)

In the forest of Los Angeles, it was an cloudy but warm day with an slight breeze that blew through the air making the trees and the grass in the forest sway to the side as if someone was pushing them to the side and an glint of sunlight shined through the clouds and the light hit the lake that was in the forest, the dark blue clean water in the river glinting from the sunlight with the water transparent so that the small rocks in the shallow of the lake was showing though the deep part of the lake couldn't be seen. Everything seemed peaceful until ripples appeared along the lake as an guy of 18 rose from the river and he swam over to the shore then he walked out of the water once he had got to the shore, showing that he only had an pair of black shorts underneath with his hair plastered down to his forehead due to the water and drops of water running down his upper body. The guy walked over to an nearby boulder that had an towel on it and he looked around wondering where the person that he was suppose to meet was at. The principle at the vampire school told him to meet the female vampire at the lake inside of the forest though he didn't know where she was at.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((Okay and it doesn't suck))

Ruby pouted as she took her time walking through the woods. She had a mini skirt on and a pick see through shirt showing people her black laced bra. She had sky high leather boots on. "Ugh this mud is going to ruin my boots." She hissed as she walked to the lake where she is suppose to meet her subjugate or like she likes to call it her new boy toy. She soon came to the lake where the sunlight beamed off it. It looked really nice. She smiled some. She was really happy they finally found someone for her. It took them long enough. Then she eyed him. "Perfect." She said with a smile. "So are you the human? Nice to meet you I suppose you know what your going to do and stuff." She said. Her eyes widen and at the thoughts she could do with him. She pushed him on a rock and sat down on his lap. "Their now we can talk my name is Ruby?" She asked running her hand up and down his chest. "Yours is?" She didn't really care. She wanted to shake his world up a lot. She was going to have fun with this one. "So here is what is going to happen every weekend I go shopping and I need you to come to carry my things. Then I party all night you can come if you want but once I start kissing its time for you to get out of there." She said. Deep down inside she was insecure, but she stopped caring what people think."What you ever think your here for me I'm not here for you. All you are is pathetic human will be food bank." She said. "Now do you have any questions about anything?" She didn't care if he had questions but she was going to try to be nice to this one.


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments (I think your post just hurt my brain xd)

A few minutes later the guy was facing towards the lake and was about to dry himself off wen he heard the sound of someone walking towards him and he turned around with an silver knife in his hand as he thought someone was going to attack him when he saw that it was just an girl around his age though he knew she was far from being an human and he put the knife back down next to the rock. He stood where he was at as he watched the female vampire walk to where he was at and he was about to answer her question when she pushed him back so that he was sitting on the rock and he grew slightly more surprised when she sat down on his lap and started moving her hand up and down his chest but he guessed that she was just trying to tease him though he did his best not to show that his face was red as well as not try stare at her as he listened to what she was saying with an calm look in his eyes and on his face then after she finished he thought about the question then said "No. I understand everything."


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments (Hello?)


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((sorry I'm brain dead and that was what is came to me XD))

"Good." She smiled softly. She moved her head softly. "You know for a human you don't look half bad." She said. "Now since I'm thirsty you going to have to stay still well I bite you." She said. She straightened her back a little bit pressing her chest in his face on purpose of course. She then kissed his neck softly then he bit his neck hard. She felt the blood splash in her mouth. She stopped when she was done. She smiled softly at him. "See was that so bad." She asked. She didn't yet want to go back. She want to make him beg for more kisses thats what all guys did begged for more. She kissed him softly teasing him. Then backed away. She smiled. "Its a shame you must have so many girlfriends it must be hard to keep track of them all." She pouted. "I mean my kiss must been the same as all the other people you dated. I mean you need to have fun I can show you the fun you need for your a human and you don't live long." She was ready to use this boy to the fullest she could. She smiled softly. She was about to make her mark on him like she did with so many boys. This time won't be any different. She would eventually get bored with him like she did all boys, but they were fun while they last.


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments (XD it's okay)

"Um.... thank you I think." Alex muttered when he got caught off guard when he felt her kiss his neck then he stiffened a little when she bite him but he relaxed and he didn't show no signs of pain as he waited until she was done biting him then he lightly touched his neck and moved his hand back seeing that his fingertips had his blood on them but he didn't seem to mind besides the fact that some of his blood was going down his neck but he didn't seem to care when she kissed him and he froze a little until she pulled back. He tried to control his thoughts and clear his head and his face turned slightly red as he heard what she said and he muttered "Never had an girlfriend. Didn't seem to find them necessary." looking back at her with an calm look in his eyes and on his face


message 23: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments (Hi)


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((hi sorry I don't know if you saw my status update but I'm going to get my glasses for sure today so I will reply as soon as I get back))


message 25: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments (Um.... I was just going to say hi and good morning but okay xd)


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((oh sorry hi and good morning to you to well.... its now afternoon))


Ruby gasped a little. "You never had a girlfriend?" She asked. "Oh please you don't have to spare my feelings?" She said. She looked at him a little. "You want to know how to tell if someone wants them to kiss you?" She asked. "Its really simple." She said. She looked up at him and kissed him softly. Waiting for him to kiss back. She ran her hand up and down his chest a little bit. She didn't break the kiss at all. She started it out slowly building it up. Her kisses were disconnected with no real emotional value in it. She didn't care either. She would never like anyone because why have one when you can have them all?


message 27: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments (So it's good afternoon instead)

Alex listened patiently to what she said and he opened his mouth to reply back to what she said, going to ask her if she could stop trying to bait him when he felt her kiss him along with her hand going up and down his chest a little. When she kissed him, he kissed her back slowly though it was only an instinct to him and after a few minutes passed, he realized what he was doing and he stopped then he pulled back and said "What are you doing?"


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((yep good afternoon))

Ruby looked at him. "Kissing you." She said. "You do as I say and you liked it anyways. Everyone likes my kisses." She said. She smiled some and started to kiss him again. She didn't care what he thinks. She owned him until she got bored of him. Until that day she will do whatever she wanted to do with him. He couldn't object. No one did. She wasn't going to lose control over a person. She knew he liked it. Or at least she thought he did. No one ever denied her.

((Question are they going to end up together eventually?))


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments (xd and I was planning on it)

"Some people don't like being kissed when they first meet the other person." Alex muttered when he felt her kiss him again then he sighed mentally while thinking to himself "I hate it when girls do that to me though Ruby's different. Can't tell her to stop or argue with her to stop even though I want to without her trying to kill me or get me killed." After hesitating, he kissed her back slowly and softly, keeping any emotion from him going into the kiss as well as keeping his hands facing down on the rock on either side of him. He wasn't going to show her any romance emotion since he knew she was just teasing him and kissing him without any emotion as well though he kind if did like her kisses but he wasn't about to show or admit to her that he did like her kisses.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((XD I was just going to make sure I have ideas that are secret))

She backed away and looked at him. "Well some people like the person they own not to talk back to them." She said. She got up. "Come on...." She looked up at him. "I don't know your name." She said. She twirled her hair around some. "Its time to go shopping I have a hot dates lined up for everyday this week." She said. She looked up at him. "Come on its not like we have all day." She shouted. "I want you to carry me my boots must stay clean they were so expensive." She said. "It would cost a fortune for me to replace them." She waited for him.


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments (Lol. Okay)

Alex mentally sighed with relief when she stopped and pulled away though there was an small part of him that wished she hadn't stopped it but he quickly pushed away that small wish and he got up then he put on his shirt, an dark grey muscle shirt that pressed against his upper body so that it showed his muscles and muscular and strong body build, along with his socks and black leather combat boots then he stood up and picked her up bridal style as he began walking towards the front of the forest with his gaze focused in front of him, the leaves crunching underneath his feet as well as rocks that laid on the ground breaking into dust underneath his feet


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((yep))

Ruby smiled a little bit but let it change into a frown. "Can't you go any faster?" She said. She looked up at him. "The mall will close and will be left with nothing to wear but a black tight mini dress with fish nets. I mean its a nice choice but doesn't show enough." She said. She kept her deepest thoughts to herself. It was the same thing over and over again. No matter what nothing would be the same. At first she hated acting like this for her sire. She was deathly scared of him but over time she grew to this life style. Once her sire died she didn't bother to change because it was always too late for change. Thats what her sire said at least. And her only being 17 when she got caught and changed she didn't know much and was easily persuaded. She forgot everything how it was to be a normal person and what love was. She gave up on everything including love.


message 33: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments (Even though it's not in the plot, I'm going to have Alex be some kind of creature but he lost his memory so he can't fully or partially change into his other form besides having some of the abilities)

Alex rolled his eyes slightly and said "You want fast? Okay then." and he started off with jogging which slowly became into an fast run, the trees and everything around them both becoming an blur. Even though he had the appearance of one Alex wasn't fully human either but he wasn't an vampire but neither did he know what he truly was ever since he lost his memory that apparently happened before his family's death and if other people as in the vampire knew what he was, they sure as he** weren't telling him or going to tell him anytime soon


message 34: by onceuponatimeareview (last edited Nov 11, 2014 05:15PM) (new)

onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((okay))

Ruby looked up at him confused. No human should be going this fast. She then looked down. "Thank you now take me to my car." She said. She looked at her sports car. It was purple with a white streak on it. She smiled softly as she came to it. "I know most boys want to drive it but yeah no this baby is fast it has 5 speed automatic transmission with the added hemi in it." She sighed a little bit. "It has 370 horsepower V8 enginge." She smiled and jumped down from his hand. "This baby of mine is the best." She looked at him. "Of course they didn't have my favorite year which is a 1969." She notice she was talking like someone who is smart she looked down a little. "This car cost so much money no else could afford this." She said snotty changing the subject entirely.

(view spoiler)


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex kept on running until he got to an sports car that he assumed was Ruby's so he slowed down until he stopped next to the car and he listened to her brag with patience until she got down. After she got down, he glanced at her when she looked down and he said "I don't drive cars. Never knew an female could know a lot about cars or any car for that fact."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "You don't drive? I mean you must have you favorite model of a car. This one of favorites but I really want a red mustang convertible with white interior. It will look really nice." She said. "The really cool thing about the cars is that each year has a different type of engine they run on for example the 2010 mustang has 412 horsepower and 390 ft of torque its fast. Made for racing." She whispered. She looked down. "What are you talking about I don't know anything about cars your just hearing things." She said as she got in. "Oh and by the way you better not scratch this car or dent or you will be dead." She said. She didn't think he would notice that she was smart. No one could find out or everything would go bad.


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Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments "I don't drive cars. I drive motorcycles." Alex replied and he listened to what she said though he didn't say anything about what he had heard from her as he looked at the car. He took his hand from his from his pocket and he ran an hand over the front hood of the car and the passenger door then he murmured "Looks like your car is already dented." as he felt several small dents on both the passenger door and the front hood.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Her eyes widen and her faced paled some. "Your kidding right?" She asked. She got up and walked over and looked at her car. He wasn't kidding. She bit her lip some. "Well looks like we are going to have to post shopping. I have to go back home and get this baby of mine fixed." She whispered. She got back in. "Oh you might want to buckle up." She said. She looked up at him. "Motorcycles there nice to I like choppers but they hurt your arms after awhile I don't like crochet rockets either." She replied simply. She buckled up and started the car. She stepped on the gas and they were off like a race car.


message 39: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments "No. I'm not kidding." Alex replied as he watched her look at the dents then he replied "I can fix it." and he listened again when she talked again and before he could say anything, she told him to buckle up and he raised an eyebrow when she sped off then he sighed and ran an hand over his face before he ran after the car and he appeared in the back seat though he made sure he wasn't siting on anything that belonged to Ruby with his belt on.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She realized he wasn't in the car and felt bad. She was then slammed the breaks when appeared in the back of car. "How did you do that?" She asked looking up. "I told you to get in the car instead you stood out there." She shook her head some. She wanted to say sorry but she wasn't going to say sorry. She looked up at him. "I don't need you to fix my car." She said. "I can do it myself." She muttered under her breath. "Get in the front seat now." She demanned him.


message 41: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex had his arms crossed as he gazed out the back seat window when he felt her slam down on the brakes but he didn't move an inch when the car stopped and he said "Nice to see that you noticed I wasn't here." then he opened the back door and unbuckled his belt before getting out and closed the door. He walked to the front passenger door and opened then he sat down after making sure he didn't end up sitting on anything and he sat down then closed the door and buckled his seat belt again as he gazed out the window with an calm look.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Ruby rolled her eyes a little bit. She wasn't going to take crap from him. "Listen you talk when I want you to talk. You do what I say. Next time your going to be in the car when I say you will." She said. She was making it look like she did it on purpose when she didn't. She didn't want anyone thinking she was a softy. She turn on the car and sped of again arriving to her house. She smiled some when she got home and pulled into her garage. "Close your eyes." She said. She didn't want him to see the car parts laying around and the cars plus the other machines to fix cars with in here. She didn't want anyone to know. "I will lead you in the house with my hand." She said.


message 43: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex didn't reply to what she said as he kept his gaze on what they were passing while making sure he didn't look at her and he waited silently until they got to her house. He sighed when they got into her garage and he listened to her without saying anything and he closed his eyes when she told him to and he replied "Whatever you say." as he unbuckled his belt and he opened the door then got out and closed the door again though he didn't move and his eyes were still closed.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She smiled and nodded walking out of the car taking his hand and dragging him to the door and opening it. "Open your eyes now." She snapped at him some. Ruby heard herself phone rang. "Hi." She said. "Yes I got the human today Ryan." She said twirling her hair a little. "Our date is still on tonight yeah I'll meet you there." She said and giggled. She hung up the phone and smiled. "So you will have to drive me home tonight if I get too drunk get me out before I start acting like myself." She said. She walked over to him and dragged him to his bedroom. "This is your room you will have to wear a nice t-shirt and a pair of jeans tonight. I trust you not to drink while we are there." She said.


message 45: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex followed her as she led him to inside the house then he opened his eyes and looked around when he heard her phone run and looked as she answered it, doing his best not to listen to whoever she was talking to. He waited until she was finished and he was about to say something when she started talking again and he became quiet as he listened to her then he followed her to the room that was his bedroom and he looked around then muttered "Sure thing."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Look be happy a lot more worse things could come out of this." She said. "I expect you to be at least kind to me." She looked at him. "Will it help if I let you vent now tell me what you think of me." She said. "I really want to know I want to see if I'm right what people think about me." She said. She looked at him. "Now please." She said rolling her eyes a bit.


message 47: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments "Being an human blood bank is exactly on my list if things I should be happy about even though I volunteered." Alex muttered when he heard her question and he was silent for a while as he looked for the right words to say then he looked back at her, looking at her in her eyes and he said "I think your goal is to tease and mess with other guys minds because you want then to want you so that they will do anything you want though what I really think is that your hiding your real personality with an different one because you don't want others to see you as an softy so that they can't take you for granted but I can be mistaken since you are a vampire and vampires do deceive others into thinking the opposite. Especially vampires as hot and sexy as you." He spoke the truth on what he thought since she told him to tell her what he though about her but his face turned red when he had realized what he said on the last part and he looked away with his hands in his pockets.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Ruby looked up at him. He was right but not only that she forgot who she really was. Through the years of lies she built up she didn't know who she was. She stopped caring. She didn't get mad. She heard his last comment. He didn't mean guys said that to her all the time and they never meant. "Look your not going to find out anything about me. You can think what you want but I'm just another girl who likes to have." She said. "Now get read and be down there in five we have the club to go to." She walked on and put on the mini black dress with fish nets on. She slipped on her boots and rocked down to where the door was waiting for him.


message 49: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex looked at her once she started talking then after she was done he said "Okay." and he watched her walk away before looking back in the room and closed the door. An few minutes later, Alex walked back out wearing http://fashionbombdaily.com/wp-conten... though the watch had been the one he was wearing before along with the sunglasses and the shirt from the new outfit still pressed against his upper body though not as much as the other shirt but enough where as people would notice, his cloths from before put nearly on the bed. He looked around before closing the room door behind him and he walked to where Ruby was at when he stopped and kind of stared at her when he saw what she was wearing but he quickly caught himself and looked away again.

(Just the shirt, pants, shoes, sunglasses and watch)


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Ruby didn't notice him staring. She dragged him out to the car. She had the lights off so he couldn't see anything. She pushed him the car. She started the car and didn't tell him to put his seat belt on. She sped off to the bar. She was early and waited for her date to come. He never did come. She was upset because only she played around with people. She walked into the bar anyways and started to order drink after drink. She was drunk pretty badly. She didn't like losing. She didn't have the control she needed over her date. She wanted to go ruin someone's life. She wanted to inflict the pain. Thats all she knew how to do. She walked on the dance floor swaying on her feet.


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