My Lea (A Broken Love Story, #1) by E. Mellyberry - Starting November 7th 2014

[Sarah Elizabeth]

chapter 21 (view spoiler)[ He RAPED her! The b*stard RAPED her! She needs to get as far away from him as possible. I am so mad right now! (hide spoiler)]

[Abi]

Sarah wrote: "chapter 21 [spoilers removed]"

(view spoiler)[ OMG, That is freaking awful! That poor girl! (hide spoiler)]

[Sarah Elizabeth]

chapter 25 (view spoiler)[ he asks if he can still see her? he sends her flowers? He f*cking RAPED her and took her virginity from her! He attacked her, he hurt her, he bit her, and he forced himself on her, and he sends f*cking flowers?! cupcakes? fruit? I hate this guy. i really hate him.

It's 6 weeks - has she took a pregnancy test yet? she hasn't mentioned having a period. (hide spoiler)]

[Sarah Elizabeth]

chapter 33 (view spoiler)[ so yumi killed herself. (hide spoiler)]

[Sarah Elizabeth]

the end (view spoiler)["They have to kill me first before they can touch you. And I will not let anyone touch you."

Other than you! you f*cking b*stard. How dare you say that to her?! how dare you?!

Forgive my language but I am so incredibl angry right now. he has ruined her life, and she's staying with him and having his baby?! I can't say I'm happyabout that. I want to murder the ********************** (hide spoiler)]

excerpt from book 2 (view spoiler)[ 7 ******** years later?! 7 years later?! are you kidding me?! (hide spoiler)]

[Abi]

Sarah wrote: "chapter 25."

(view spoiler)[ I couldn't believe that! He rapes her then sends her flowers and sends her loads.of texts saying he missed her? Bloody cheek!! (hide spoiler)]

[Sarah Elizabeth]

Abbie wrote: "Sarah wrote: "chapter 25."

[spoilers removed]"

(view spoiler)[ he makes me so mad! (hide spoiler)]

[Abi]

Sarah wrote: "the end "."

(view spoiler)[ I'm shocked she wanted to stay with him too!

Not sure i could read book two, Andrew pisses me off way to much! (hide spoiler)]

[Sarah Elizabeth]

Abbie wrote: "Sarah wrote: "the end "."

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(view spoiler)[ it's not like she even knew him all that well before it happened! I'm glad I'm not the only one pissed off by him. (hide spoiler)]

[Hadiqa]

Hmm, I received the PDF version (updated) instead of the EPUB version :)

[Abi]

Sarah wrote: "Abbie wrote: "Sarah wrote: "the end "."

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[spoilers removed]"

(view spoiler)[ I went through the second half of the book thinking this every time Andrew popped up;



And this;


(hide spoiler)]

[Sarah Elizabeth]

Abbie wrote: "Sarah wrote: "Abbie wrote: "Sarah wrote: "the end "."

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[spoilers removed]"

I went through the second half of the book thinking this every time Andrew popped up;



And this;


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Definitely.

[Sarah Elizabeth]

Hadiqa wrote: "Hmm, I received the PDF version (updated) instead of the EPUB version :)"

The pdf is only for chapter 20. You should have the epub of the full book sent on November 2nd ☺

[[deleted user]]

Im not even finished this book yet and sarah and abbie already have reviews =(

[Rachmi]

Ah...don't worry, Crazy Beautiful, I don't think there is anyone who can beat Sarah and Abbi's reading speed, lol. I've finished it but haven't written my review yet. Other participants haven't read it yet either, I think and we can still discuss it even if we have finished it.

[Hadiqa]

I have yet to start as well :D

[Sarah Elizabeth]

I actually went quite slow for me ☺ we'll still discuss it with you, how far into it are you? ☺

[Rachmi]

Sarah, your slow is still fast for me, lol. Seriously you have an amazing reading speed :)

[Abi]

Crazy Butterflies (Marlleyy) wrote: "Im not even finished this book yet and sarah and abbie already have reviews =("

Don't worry, a few people haven't started it yet. :)

[rachel, x]

chapter five - (view spoiler)[I cannot say I am a fan of any of these characters. I agree that its pretty slow going and I don't like the descriptive language. The metaphors are really heavy and awkward and what does "this girl could shit, he gave her that." even mean!? (hide spoiler)]

[rachel, x]

Rachmi wrote: "13% - [spoilers removed]

Yeah, I am not a fan of the writing either.

[rachel, x]

Sarah wrote: "chapter 4 [spoilers removed]"

(view spoiler)[They are all a little weird it seems! (hide spoiler)]

[Sarah Elizabeth]

Rachel wrote: "chapter five - [spoilers removed]"

I noticed things like that in a couple of places. I don't think English is the author's first language though, so I think she did incredibly well considering that. I would never in a million years be able to not only write a book, but write it in a different language!

[rachel, x]

Sarah wrote: "Rachel wrote: "chapter five - [spoilers removed]"

I noticed things like that in a couple of places. I don't think English is the author's first language though, so I think she did incredibly well ..."

Woah! Really!? And she wrote this? She didn't get it translated? If that's the case then I applaud her! I still find it a little difficult to read though.

[Abi]

Rachel wrote: "chapter five - [spoilers removed]"

(view spoiler)[ I wasn't a fan in the first half either. I liked one of them in the end though. :) (hide spoiler)]

[[deleted user]]

im only on chapter 7 because im getting interupted by everyone in my house and its frustrating like hell. but Im getting there. and yeah besides the writing the book is rather slow.

[Sarah Elizabeth]

It did feel really slow. it changes a bit at the half-way mark though ☺ I kept getting interruped yesterday. darn kids.

[Sarah Elizabeth]

Rachel wrote: "Sarah wrote: "Rachel wrote: "chapter five - [spoilers removed]"

I noticed things like that in a couple of places. I don't think English is the author's first language though, so I think she did in..."

Yes, she wrote it. amazing huh?!

[rachel, x]

Abbie wrote: "Rachel wrote: "chapter five - [spoilers removed]"

[spoilers removed]"

I am eager to get to the end then. :)

[rachel, x]

Crazy Butterflies (Marlleyy) wrote: "im only on chapter 7 because im getting interupted by everyone in my house and its frustrating like hell. but Im getting there. and yeah besides the writing the book is rather slow."

I cannot say much is convincing me to read. She's the Man is on TV tonight and I'll probably just end up watching that. :)

[rachel, x]

Sarah wrote: "Rachel wrote: "Sarah wrote: "Rachel wrote: "chapter five - [spoilers removed]"

I noticed things like that in a couple of places. I don't think English is the author's first language though, so I t..."

Yeah, that is pretty amazing!

[[deleted user]]

I know I have tv programs to catch up on, on foxtel but I want to get this book finished is well. Lols. If that movie was on here in brisbane I would watch it.

[rachel, x]

Crazy Butterflies (Marlleyy) wrote: "I know I have tv programs to catch up on, on foxtel but I want to get this book finished is well. Lols. If that movie was on here in brisbane I would watch it."

Do you guys get different channels to us then? Oh that sucks! :/

[[deleted user]]

I think they show different shows for every state. lols. but i'll just check my channels. Yeah we have different shows but same channels

[rachel, x]

Crazy Butterflies (Marlleyy) wrote: "I think they show different shows for every state. lols. but i'll just check my channels."

Its on Go! if we have the same channels. I think they are similar. :)

[[deleted user]]

Rachel wrote: "Crazy Butterflies (Marlleyy) wrote: "I think they show different shows for every state. lols. but i'll just check my channels."

Its on Go! if we have the same channels. I think they are similar. :)"

yeah shes the man is on GO

[[deleted user]]

Chapter seven - (view spoiler)[I want to know what destroyed Andrew's life. Why is it his last time to see Yumi? Did something bad happen? Tell me please I cant (No I DONT) want to wait. (hide spoiler)]

[Sarah Elizabeth]

Crazy Butterflies (Marlleyy) wrote: "Chapter seven - [spoilers removed]"

(view spoiler)[ I know what you mean, it drove me freaking nuts how long we had to wait for answers. You find out what happened with Yumi in chapter 33.

If you really, really, really want to know, click here (view spoiler)[ Andrew was dating Yumi, and he was being blackmailed by some bad people. They came to get money from him one day, and Yumi was there. They beat her and raped her. Yumi then later commited suicide ☹ (hide spoiler)] (hide spoiler)]

[[deleted user]]

Hehe no I'll wait

[rachel, x]

chapter eight - (view spoiler)[Trying but I am nto enjoying this. I really don't like either of the characters and the writing is frustrating. Was the whole tour God thing a purpose joke or a spelling error (instead of "guide")?? (hide spoiler)]

[[deleted user]]

The writing is frustrating me to. But I so give her props for giving it try but.

[rachel, x]

chapter fourteen - (view spoiler)[Ugh! This is taking forever. Its really, really slow. I don't like Andrew at all and what was with his little mood swing thing at the kitchen table. Now he is buying her flowers as "friends"? What!?

Also so many stereotypes it hurts... (hide spoiler)]

[rachel, x]

Crazy Butterflies (Marlleyy) wrote: "The writing is frustrating me to. But I so give her props for giving it try but."

I give her props for writing it in a second language but I still don't like it. :(

[rachel, x]

chapter sixteen - (view spoiler)[Andrew's mood swings are infuriating. I am struggling though this. (hide spoiler)]

[[deleted user]]

Aww was going to say something about that too. But you beat me to it. And i want to know what hapen with yumi still

[rachel, x]

Crazy Butterflies (Marlleyy) wrote: "Aww was going to say something about that too. But you beat me to it. And i want to know what hapen with yumi still"

(view spoiler)[Probably something to do with her death + the drugs they were on. He probably did something that lead to her death. well, I am guessing so! We will have to find out. (hide spoiler)]

[rachel, x]

chapter nineteen - (view spoiler)[He goes over to make nice with her and ends up storming out!? What is with this guy!? (hide spoiler)]

[rachel, x]

chapter twenty - (view spoiler)[They both got pregnant!? Did they die in childbirth then I wonder? (hide spoiler)]

[rachel, x]

chapter twenty-three - (view spoiler)[Nope. I am done. I am not reading any more of this. He bloody hugged her after he raped her. What the bloody hell is wrong with him!? I cannot deal with any more of this. Sorry girls. (hide spoiler)]

[[deleted user]]

Chapter nineteen - (view spoiler)[Serious what is this guys problem? Can I jump in the book and serious give him punch in the face he is pissing me of (hide spoiler)]