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Kay. . . .I think Kora just signed her own death sentence. She grafitti-ed the Council Skyscraper with an image of all the Council Members being hanged.
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Yep, sure. Groaza has a kill list too, it seems. Devon Nyx does as well. So, yeah, she's pretty much dead.
So, what about chapter 3?
So, what about chapter 3?
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2 is the one with the Gaol.
3 is the one with Richard, Marcus, and Isolde.
Also, I almost just called Marcus "Margaret".
3 is the one with Richard, Marcus, and Isolde.
Also, I almost just called Marcus "Margaret".
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Elvina wrote: "Could you add something about how many of those people actually arrive? Like have them list who they invite maybe?"
Could you I don't fully understand
Could you I don't fully understand
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So, for chapter four, should it be about the resistance trying to finish up their plans on attacking the council? Cuz they got two weeks...
I thought Cinder was lying about that. . . .
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Anyway, are you all done in the Gaol?
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Okay.
Also, what did you do to your ankle?
Also, what did you do to your ankle?
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Well, in PE we play hockey on the blacktop for a unit. My friend and I were at the puck, she swung her hockey stick as hard as she could, and she missed the puck... It almost drew blood though my sock, I'm serious... So yeah, the rest of the day was just sooooo fun!
Eek....trust me, having the terrible feet and ankles I do, I've had to spend more than a summer off my feet for the most part and hobble around, trying not to step on certain parts of my feet when I do walk around. And my feet just act up sometimes. Thanks for my feet, Dad. Thanks. Feet problems and injuries are horrid.
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I totally agree. It seems besides my fractured wrist two years ago and a sprained finger, every one of my injustices is on my feet!!! Usually my ankles... And ouch about the not being able to walk thing! What happened?
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Eek
Er, growth plates in my feet were open and really sore, so my heels hurt (and I put most of my weight on my heels). I got tendinitis in my left ankle (which sometimes acts up again). And my left arch was really hurting because of my flat feet. I spent most of the summer on the couch with ice on my feet.
Also, I have to go. Goodnight!
Er, growth plates in my feet were open and really sore, so my heels hurt (and I put most of my weight on my heels). I got tendinitis in my left ankle (which sometimes acts up again). And my left arch was really hurting because of my flat feet. I spent most of the summer on the couch with ice on my feet.
Also, I have to go. Goodnight!
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That was about when I started becoming a proper couch potato. Getting a brace for my crooked spine the next year made going outside miserable in the summer.
Good morning!
Good morning!
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My friends are gonna type out their criticism
Mills:OH MY GODS this book is amazing! It has such a great story and I can't wait to read more! The only problem with it is I think you need more character development. You shouldn't just waste time on the character but you should explain them more. BUT IT'S AMAZING!
Cha Cha: It was ok. I would prefer it not become back to back dialogue. I also think the sentence variety needs to improve and there are lots of repetition. Lastly, I believe you should describe the setting more. All in all, a great path to a best-selling novel!:)
Mills:OH MY GODS this book is amazing! It has such a great story and I can't wait to read more! The only problem with it is I think you need more character development. You shouldn't just waste time on the character but you should explain them more. BUT IT'S AMAZING!
Cha Cha: It was ok. I would prefer it not become back to back dialogue. I also think the sentence variety needs to improve and there are lots of repetition. Lastly, I believe you should describe the setting more. All in all, a great path to a best-selling novel!:)
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Okay. And those are kind of the things we'll need to work on in the translation between roleplay and book (or movie or whatever medium it ends up in). I agree with the criticisms, pretty much. And we already have our own wiki!
Hey. I just checked out your group, City of Fear. I decided I was bored sooo I made you a masthead. Surprise!
Mention me, in the description, that's it. :) If you use the masthead that is.
http://i1252.photobucket.com/albums/h...
What do you guys think?
Thanks to Tinath
Mention me, in the description, that's it. :) If you use the masthead that is.
http://i1252.photobucket.com/albums/h...
What do you guys think?
Thanks to Tinath
Thanks! I keep being told that the Url doesn't exist though. I'm sure it's amazing though!
Hey, so, now that the Council Meeting is pretty much over, should we be thinking about a Resistance Meeting?
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I see! So, I think we need a Resistance Meeting, so I think we need to figure out how to organize it. Any thoughts?
Not sure, but yes, a resistance meeting would be nice.
Perhaps members' attendance is optional as opposed to mandatory?
Okay! And hold it in the Barn?
I suppose we need to get to a place where we may hold it in that RP then!
So, we have a deleted user, Athen, who had a character. What should we do?
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So, do you think we should have a celebration of sorts when we get to 50 members?
It's fine. Any ideas on what to do?
Maybe some sort of a contest? Also what is the current status of the resistance vrs. Council? Any major victories
No, the war has not officially started. We're calling a Resistance Meeting in the Barn, but that isn't working well.
(and to be honest, I've been secretly stalking the Mod threads)