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message 1: by Phoenix (Online Elf), Moderator (new)

Phoenix (Online Elf) | 4358 comments


The Loneliest Alpha by T.A. Grey


One look will change their lives forever.

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Buddy read with Gisela and ShoSho .

Please feel free to join us. As always expect spoilers .



message 2: by Phoenix (Online Elf), Moderator (new)

Phoenix (Online Elf) | 4358 comments Reserved.


message 3: by ShoSho , Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments I'm in!


message 4: by Gisela, Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

Gisela (chicadorlando) | 4022 comments Me too!


message 5: by ShoSho , Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments I can't decide where to buy it from ! Amazon , Smashwords or Allromancebooks !!!


message 6: by Gisela, Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

Gisela (chicadorlando) | 4022 comments Do you have a preferred format? Btw it doesn't show up in All romance ebooks for me...


message 7: by ShoSho , Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments Not really ! I like having the epub file (smashwords) and I also like the way I can keep track of my progress on different devices(Amazon).
Most of the time I don't have a choice ,there is only one website to buy or the pricing helps me decide . What do they say about having too many choices?


message 8: by ShoSho , Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments I did the one click :D


message 9: by Gisela, Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

Gisela (chicadorlando) | 4022 comments yay we're ready!


message 10: by ShoSho , Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments G, I'll start this in the morning !


message 11: by Gisela, Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

Gisela (chicadorlando) | 4022 comments ok, how do you want to do this? Set Q's every couple of Ch. or comment and Q as we go?


message 12: by ShoSho , Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments Qs every few chapters?


message 13: by ShoSho , Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments It's about 400 pages, do you want to divide it to 3 parts? We can both do Qs, a few each to make it easier.


message 14: by Gisela, Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

Gisela (chicadorlando) | 4022 comments How about this
Ch. 1-7
Ch. 8-14
Ch. 15-21
Ch. 22-28


message 15: by Gisela, Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

Gisela (chicadorlando) | 4022 comments I really like Alicia!


message 16: by ShoSho , Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments Gisela wrote: "How about this
Ch. 1-7
Ch. 8-14
Ch. 15-21
Ch. 22-28"


I'm happy with that.
I'll start after I check the threads on GR.


message 17: by Gisela, Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

Gisela (chicadorlando) | 4022 comments I think I'll finish this tonight! I'm enjoying it that much!


message 18: by ShoSho , Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments :D I haven't started yet! I was sorting out something for the group.


message 19: by ShoSho , Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments This book was published on my birthday!


message 20: by ShoSho , Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments I'm starting chapter 7 .
I'm liking it so far. One of the things I like about it is that the POV changes from chapter to chapter and not from paragraph to paragraph .
I like Alicia too , she is not acting like a typical romance heroine . I specially like it when she jumped on Gavin back . It was funny.


message 21: by Gisela, Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

Gisela (chicadorlando) | 4022 comments I thought so too!


message 22: by Gisela, Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

Gisela (chicadorlando) | 4022 comments I'm doing the first set of Qs


message 23: by ShoSho , Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments Thanks. How far are you?


message 24: by Gisela, Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

Gisela (chicadorlando) | 4022 comments Almost done....


message 25: by ShoSho , Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments That was fast!


message 26: by Gisela, Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

Gisela (chicadorlando) | 4022 comments Questions for Chapters 1-7

1.Josiah's an asshat, why does he call Alicia a tramp?

2. What happened to Gavin's and will he show her willingly?

3. Who murdered those kids and why? Will there be more?

4. Thoughts on Marcus?

5. I love Alicia! I don't think I've read about a lingerie designer before.

6. I think it's sweet how Gavin is fretting about the state of his house.


message 27: by Gisela, Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

Gisela (chicadorlando) | 4022 comments This book needs some editing. The teacher in me goes wild every time I come across a grammatical error. Luckily the book is good enough that those mistakes haven't ruined it for me.


message 28: by ShoSho , Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments Questions for Chapters 1-7

1.Josiah's an asshat, why does he call Alicia a tramp?
I thought of that too. I don't think we get to know the reason .

2. What happened to Gavin's and will he show her willingly?
What I got was that Marcus had caught his face when he was already injured or unconscious .The Marcus guy was creepy

3. Who murdered those kids and why? Will there be more?
I'm thinking Marcus but that would be too obvious . I hope there isn't more

4. Thoughts on Marcus?
Creepy

5. I love Alicia! I don't think I've read about a lingerie designer before.
Me neither . I like her because she is different

6. I think it's sweet how Gavin is fretting about the state of his house.
Yes .
He is a bit crazy but it's cute.I'm big fan of beauty and beast story like .



message 29: by ShoSho , Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments Gisela wrote: "This book needs some editing. The teacher in me goes wild every time I come across a grammatical error. Luckily the book is good enough that those mistakes haven't ruined it for me."
Other than grammatical error there are some other errors. Like when Alicia thought she's going to report the kidnapping to their authority and then next chapter , she thought nobody would do anything he was the alpha and could do anything.


message 30: by Gisela, Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

Gisela (chicadorlando) | 4022 comments @

4- I also think Marcus is creepy and something's definitely wrong with him.

6- Me too!


message 31: by ShoSho , Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments I finished chapter 14 ,that's intense.


message 32: by ShoSho , Moderator (last edited Sep 30, 2014 10:13PM) (new) - rated it 4 stars

ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments Questions for chapter 8-14

7. Huh I didn't think that we get to know more about Alicia's past but it seems that we would . I can guess her ex spread gossip about her and now everyone think she is a tramp.Not really a question!

8.I liked their first kiss , it was weird but good . Did you like it? I even liked that he was peeping :D

9. I'm guesting there will be book with Hanna and Alex. Will you read it?

10.What do you think about Jo?

11.I loved that scene in the bar with Jo .I was all happy and grinning then the accident happened .Who did it? Marcus?

12.Oh wow I didn't expect Gavin to react that way but I guess he had the right to be pissed. Although to be honest if I were Alicia I would have snooped too. what do you think?


message 33: by Gisela, Moderator (last edited Sep 30, 2014 11:48PM) (new) - rated it 4 stars

Gisela (chicadorlando) | 4022 comments 7- I was really annoyed by how she was treated by her pack.

8- I liked it, frankly I expected something of the sort. And can't blame the guy for peeping.

9- Definitely, already checked but it isn't out yet. :(

10- I think he doesn't want to like Alicia because he's afraid that she'll hurt Gavin.

11- I was shocked by the accident! Didn't expect it at all. I thought Marcus or onw of his brothera did it. Loved the bar scenes too.

12- I would have snooped too! But what tugged on my heartstrings were his reasons.


message 34: by ShoSho , Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments #12 Yes his reasons were heartachy!
#10.good point about Jo


message 35: by Gisela, Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

Gisela (chicadorlando) | 4022 comments Qs for Chs.15-21

13- I was surprised nobody mentioned Alicia's comment about being Gavin's woman. Would've loved to see Gavin's reaction to her public announcement.

14- Dinner! I'm not a fan of D/S but since it was very light and playful it worked for me. You?

15- Poisoned steaks! Marcus again? Why doesn't he challenge Gavin and be done with it?

16- OMG! Hannah's going to take Tom back!

17- They finally did it, other than not liking the constant use of "tits", I've no comments. What did you think of their fight?

18- Will kidnapped Alicia! Is he working alone? Were you surprised? I was!


message 36: by ShoSho , Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments Qs for Chs.15-21

13- I was surprised nobody mentioned Alicia's comment about being Gavin's woman. Would've loved to see Gavin's reaction to her public announcement.
Yes me too ! Gavin would have been ecstatic if he knew about it

14- Dinner! I'm not a fan of D/S but since it was very light and playful it worked for me. You?
Yes it was playful and fun and sexy. I liked it

15- Poisoned steaks! Marcus again? Why doesn't he challenge Gavin and be done with it?
I was thinking Marcus when I was reading it but I think it was Will

16- OMG! Hannah's going to take Tom back!
That was a stupid thing to do ! I know she'll regret it in a very bad way!!How can she forgive a serial cheater?

17- They finally did it, other than not liking the constant use of "tits", I've no comments. What did you think of their fight?
LOL , yes tits !He was thinking earlier that they weren't boobs ,they were tits !!So there you go with all the tits :D
The fight didn't make sense , why did she got angry ?! Why did he got angry?! But I guess it was necessary for what happened afterwards


18- Will kidnapped Alicia! Is he working alone? Were you surprised? I was!
No I wasn't , I started suspecting him when Gavin told Hart the story of that night and then it turned out that he works at the butchers too . Here is my theory Will did that to Gavin's face , those 2 teens saw him ,he killed them and now he wants to hurt Gavin by killing or hurting Alicia. I really hope I'm wrong , I want Marcus and his brothers be the bad guys !


message 37: by ShoSho , Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments Are you done?


message 38: by Gisela, Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

Gisela (chicadorlando) | 4022 comments yep


message 39: by ShoSho , Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments I'm starting chapter 24! EEppp!


message 40: by Gisela, Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

Gisela (chicadorlando) | 4022 comments I never suspected Will, usually he would seem a bad guy but would later be redeemed and get his own book. So I was shocked when he attacked Alicia and kept on digging himself deeper.


message 41: by ShoSho , Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments I just finished ,I'm going for a walk and then I'll be back with my Qs.


message 42: by Gisela, Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

Gisela (chicadorlando) | 4022 comments ok


message 43: by ShoSho , Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments Qs for chapter 21 to end

19.Their Lykaen side was almost non-existent in the book , other than healing faster what was the purpose of them being Lykaen and not normal human? I wish there was more about their Lykaen side and more world building in the book.

20. Will was really psycho .I think it was a brave move on the author side to make him this bad .Almost nonredeemable ! What do you think?


21.What the hell was Gavin thinking sending her back to her old pack? To the people who tied her up and send her like that against her will! Of course there is the fact the Gavin was OK with the whole thing ! Did you think sending her back was logical?

21.What did think about what happened with Marcus and Gavin ? And what about the pack finishing Marcus? I didn't like it ,specially Marcus confessing . The writing was a bit weak there.


Overall I really like this book , I laughed a lot I liked Alicia she was a great heroine . The only problem the book had was editing but not just the grammatical errors but it also needed content editing .
BTW did you see that at the end of the book it says " This book is free, so send it to a friend who you think might like it so she can discover me, too.

Grey, T. A. (2013-06-14). The Loneliest Alpha (The MacKellen Alphas) (p. 404). Grey Ink Press LLC. Kindle Edition.



message 44: by ShoSho , Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars


message 45: by Gisela, Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

Gisela (chicadorlando) | 4022 comments 19- I suppose the lykaen was used to justify Alicia's kidnapping. For the most part this felt more contemporary than paranormal. The author could easily have invented some kingdom and make Alicia some maiden offered by her family and Marcus and Will usurpers to the throne. Heck this could very easily have been a medieval romance. Except for Alicia's job which wouldn't be believable in such a setting.

20- I don't like kidnapped heroines in my books but it worked because it was totally unexpected. If it had been Marcus I would've rolled my eyes.

21- It didn't make sense, especially if we aren't going to see her interact with her old pack. She could easily have gone anywhere else since she was holed up in her apartment working. Why introduce her pack at all? To give her some back story? The book could have started with her waking up in the darkened room and Gavin explaning why she was there.

22- Yes that part was flat especially the reason for killing the kids.


Yea noticed that, maybe it was free at some point? I agree about editing, it could've been 5 stars.


message 46: by Gisela, Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

Gisela (chicadorlando) | 4022 comments ShoSho wrote: "This is free on Amazon Breeding Cycle (The Kategan Alphas, #1) by T.A. Grey
http://www.amazon.com/dp/B0058OJ8AG/r..."


Wanna read it? :D


message 47: by Gisela, Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

Gisela (chicadorlando) | 4022 comments I'm looking forward to Hannah's book!


message 48: by Gisela, Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

Gisela (chicadorlando) | 4022 comments I'm looking forward to Hannah's book!


message 49: by ShoSho , Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments #19. that's exactly what I thought . She has another series in the same word (Breeding cycle) she wanted to use some of the same characters.

#21.Yes she could have gone anywhere to be safe .


message 50: by ShoSho , Moderator (new) - rated it 4 stars

ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments Gisela wrote: "ShoSho wrote: "This is free on Amazon Breeding Cycle (The Kategan Alphas, #1) by T.A. Grey
http://www.amazon.com/dp/B0058OJ8AG/r..."

Wanna read it? :D"


Yep :D


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