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message 651: by [deleted user] (new)

Aura is deteriorating alive. Her wings are cracking, and her skin is peeling. "No, Aura! Are you alright?!"


message 652: by [deleted user] (new)

((Wait, I just realized that Indi had no way of knowing that Aura was deteriorating :P))

I hear Alex sounding disgusted. "What's happening?"


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"We need to help her!" I scream.

"No...." Aura's voice is scared, but almost... calm. "No, I.... ow.... I-ouch! I don't want to die, but I can't live like this!" She screams.

"What does it feel like?" I ask quietly.

"Like I am being tortured for eternity, but can never die. Never."

Salifia looks horrified with herself. "What have I done? I didn't know-!"


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I hear a growl, and my instincts from Aura kick in. I lash out a kick, and the attacker turns on me. I have no idea who it is, but I am not going to let them harm anyone else. They tackle me, and bite my arm, hard, drawing blood.

I scream out, and I feel some others --Alex, Salifia--- helping me. I grab my knife, and I am about to attempt to stop the animal, when Alex cries out,

"No! It's Carla!"

I drop my knife. We are at a stale mate. If she comes forward, we will be forced to kill her, but we can't. We just can't.


message 655: by [deleted user] (new)

I hear someone running away; Aura.

I can't let her leave. She can't.

"Aura!"


message 656: by [deleted user] (new)

We were being pursues by Carla. I ran after Aura, but also to get away from the attacker. From Carla. From our friend.

That's Salifia distracted Carla.

"You guys go ahead! I- I'll hold her off!"

"But-!"

"Run!" She yelled.


message 657: by [deleted user] (new)

**please work!!!**


message 658: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
(woaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah plot twist XD )

I stood, my head spinning from all the confusion. The last half hour had been so weird. First, we were going on a bus to complete a mission, then I was forced off the bus to go find Aura with Salifia, then we found out Aura was dying, and everyone thought it was their fault, and now Aura came back from the dead, is kinda alive but doesn't have her wings, and I'm standing here feeling like I'm gonna throw up.

My gosh.


message 659: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
"Aura..."

I said softly.

"You okay? How ya feeling?"


message 660: by [deleted user] (new)

((Yeah... Whats happened in the last 3 and a half pages? XD Sorry for needing to catch up every time I come on, but you guys have been busy!!)


message 661: by [deleted user] (new)

((Aura died but Silifia brought her back to life but the bringing back the dead made Aura like rot alive, and her skin and wings started coming off, but she saved herself with a spell, but the wings disappeared, but other than that the spell worked. Oh, and Carla attacked us because she needed blood (she didn't actually know that she was hurting us) and she attacked Aura just a bit, and so she blames herself for Aura's wings disappearing, but she wasn't the one who caused Aura's death, that was from a wound. Got it? :)))


message 662: by [deleted user] (new)

(Holly smokes. Ok. Where are we now, how did we get here, and what is the conversation going on about?)


message 663: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
(I really have no clue.................................................................................................... if that helps any XD )


message 664: by [deleted user] (new)

(XD)


message 665: by [deleted user] (new)

Kmaefantasy wrote: "(Holly smokes. Ok. Where are we now, how did we get here, and what is the conversation going on about?)"

We are [or were] about to board the bus to go on a quest before Aura died, so I think we are still around there, but we might be at Aura's house thing. We are telling Carla that it wasn't her fault that Aura's wings cam off.


message 666: by [deleted user] (new)

(Got it. So should I start out coming out of bed, or walking into the room after a meal, or what?)


message 667: by [deleted user] (new)

((do anything, you could even act like you've been there the whole time, we don't mind :))


message 668: by [deleted user] (new)

I burst from my sleep when I hear Aura screaming. I jump out of bed, and creep down to her room. "Aura?" I whisper, tapping on the door, after the screaming stopped. "Are you ok?" I twist the knob, but its locked. "Aura?"


message 669: by [deleted user] (new)

"Yeah. No big deal, I needed to wake up anyways." I smile. "Are you ok?" I look at her pale face and her circles under her eyes.


message 670: by [deleted user] (new)

I stare at the door, wondering what was up with her. Instead of wondering off, I sat down next to the door, and relaxed. In case Aura needed help, I would be ready to help.


message 671: by [deleted user] (new)

"Yaa!!" I scream as a stranger walks out of the room. "What... Who..." I stammer, but then I see the familiar glint in her eyes. "Aura?!" I jump to my feet. "What did you do?!"


message 672: by [deleted user] (new)

"Uh... Changed a lot! Why?!"


message 673: by [deleted user] (new)

I take a breath and shake my head. "Ok. Whatever."


message 674: by [deleted user] (last edited Sep 30, 2014 05:21PM) (new)

Alice wrote: "um…no offense but this is my character so could you back off a bit…..?Thanks! :)"

Yeah, no probs, sorry!!!! I will delete that comment... I just was wonderin', was it because you want Aura to be mad at Carla? I just assumed you wanted to forgive her, but I will delete it :)


message 675: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
(erm, where am I, exactly?)


message 676: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
(okay! :D )

"HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIISHAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!"

Suddenly, a magical fairy named Ruby jumped out of the bushes and clobbered the Astar over the head with a big watermelon.

The End.


message 677: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
(BAM. Ruby just got into da picture, like you said.)


message 678: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
(no, sry, I never posted that. YOU SAW NOTHING!!!!!!!!!)


(continue.)


message 679: by [deleted user] (new)

But then the Unicorns of the Universe united, and wanted the last word in the matter, so therefore...

THE END!


message 680: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
"Erm... Um..."


I was standing awkwardly at the bank of the river, looking around aimlessly, wondering what to do.


message 681: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
I shrugged hopelessly. "No clue, sorry."


message 682: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
I just stand there, wide eyed, watching the scene unfolding before me. "What a group." I thought, amazed. "I probably couldn't do anything like that in a million years..."


message 683: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
"Uh, okay, okay guys? Guys?" I shout over the quickly loudening din. "Um, well, let's stop with the insults, kay? Why don't we just...um...well, how about we all go back to the hotel and have the whole group talk this out - remember Indigo, Paige - Alex and Sveinn? C'mon, we can figure it all out with the help of the rest of our group. How does that sound?"


message 684: by [deleted user] (new)

((Hi! So, whats happened sense Aura changed her appearance in her room?)


message 685: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (last edited Oct 06, 2014 05:22PM) (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
((What just happened???))


message 686: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Kmaefantasy wrote: "((Hi! So, whats happened sense Aura changed her appearance in her room?)"

((A LOT))


message 687: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
((Uhhhhhhhhhh okay then))


Grumbling, I slowly turned around and trudged back to the hotel, where everyone was gathered in the dining room.

"Em! There you are! Where's Salifia? Where's Carla? Em?"

Paige was at my shoulder, battering me with questions and looked nearly to the point of shaking me.

"It's okay, it's okay, Paige. Their in the forest. Collecting some ingredients for some potion or other - an enchanted rose, a hairbrush - and I think she said a pony hair or something? But anyway, I came back to warn you guys and...well, I thought maybe should we go after them?"

A gasp broke the silence, and I turned around to see that Paige had toppled from her chair and lay sprawled on the floor.


message 688: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
((So, Mae, Alice and Zaynah for some reason went off to find some stuff to make a potion I think, and I kinda followed them, and they went into the woods, but now I went back to the others to get them... But I think Alice and Zaynah don't want any help, so they walked off........))


message 689: by [deleted user] (new)

((sorry, where would Indigo be right now???))


message 690: by [deleted user] (new)

(What is happening!!?!?? I'm sooooo loooooosssttt!)


message 691: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
(Okay, so Julane and Mae, here is a more detailed thingie on what's going on:

Alice and Zaynah went off to search for potion thingies, and I came back to the hotel where all the rest of you guys are (I had followed the two of them) and well..........check out comments 1352, 1358, and 1359, that should clear it all up ;) )


message 692: by [deleted user] (new)

((thanks everyone!!))

I follow Doyle, who carries Paige. I feel like a little puppy, blindly yapping at everyone's heels.

"Is she alright?" I ask. "Wh-what happened? I mean, I highly doubt falling off a stool would do this, did anything else happen?"


message 693: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (last edited Oct 09, 2014 03:07PM) (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
"Well, I only told her what Carla and Salifia were doing- speaking of which, we need to hurry! Who knows what kind of trouble their getting themselves into!!" I said with a huff.


message 694: by [deleted user] (new)

(So I'm passed out, sick or something? Poisoning? And you guys just got captured by a witch, and Indigo is also passed out? Is that correct?)


message 695: by [deleted user] (new)

((wait I thought Carla was in the forest.... sorry, I don't understand what you were saying, Zaynah, sorry!!! /:p


message 696: by [deleted user] (new)

((wait so are WE with the witch thing too??? sorry, Z))


message 697: by [deleted user] (new)

((No, I'm jus wondering because Z said that she was with us, but then she's with the witch and we aren't??????????))


message 698: by [deleted user] (new)

((awesome))


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inactive account (supernerdgavin) | 80 comments (( What's going on?
Depending on what's happening depends on what character I will use.))


message 700: by inactive account (new)

inactive account (supernerdgavin) | 80 comments (( No just tell me what's happening right now and where we are.))


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