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message 451: by [deleted user] (new)

"Oh! Thank goodness you people are back!" I shout at Indigo and Salifia. Then I see Indigo and Salifia unconscious. "Oh, gosh!" I run over to them. Indigo was healing at a remarkible rate, and Salifia was alive. Oh, what a relief. "Wake up! Wake up!" I shout at the two, and they both stir.


message 452: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
(wait - i thought you, Alice, went disappeared and Charlotte and I were for some reason in the cave???)


message 453: by [deleted user] (new)

(Uh... I was with monsters, so was Doyle, Salifia just appeared with Indigo. I think.)


message 454: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
(um.....okay then...)


message 455: by [deleted user] (new)

(Hey! Your Alice again! Your name is Alice!)

"Salifia! Stop screaming!" I shout at Salifia, shaking her. Monsters crowded around, wanting to watch her parish. "Go away!" I shout at them, freezing them solid.


message 456: by [deleted user] (new)

(Ruby. Awesome Waffle Person?? XD)


message 457: by [deleted user] (new)

"Stop. Screaming." I say sternly to her. The monsters were flooding in now, and I could only give so many frost bite.


message 458: by [deleted user] (new)

(Uh........ Yeah. You were named Salifia. Now your name is Alice.)


message 459: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
(.............nobody DIDN'T notice my awesome ruse..... sigh..... why, world, why....)


message 460: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
(That person that is not Alice? XDXDXD I burst out laughing, thanks so much)


message 461: by [deleted user] (new)

(Alice?! Why is your name THAT PERSON THAT IS NOT ALICE now? XD)


message 462: by [deleted user] (new)

(Sure, Alice. Sure...)
"Oh good. Your ok." I mutter to Salifia. "Never scare me like that again. I thought I was gonna have to give you CPR or something..."


message 463: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
(i am lost. where am i???)


message 464: by [deleted user] (new)

(I think your here with us. Yeah. Your battling the monsters with us.)


message 465: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
(got it, thanks)

I hurried over, shaking my head in confusion. "Woah, woah, sit down, Salifia@ Sit down!"


message 466: by [deleted user] (new)

"Where is it?"


message 467: by [deleted user] (new)

"Uh... I will." I say in bewilderment of the tiny Salifia. I scooped her up in my hand, as gently as possible. We proceeded for the tea shop, and entered. "Could we have a pot of jasmine tea, please?" I say to the boy at the counter.


message 468: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
(ALICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)


message 469: by [deleted user] (new)

(AHH!!! WHAT IS HAPPENING?! WHICH IS THE REAL... SO CONFUSED!!)


message 470: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
(no! i am!!!)


message 471: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
(it's me, Ruby!!! c'mon, mae, believe me!! I have the kitty face in my name, remember???)


message 472: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
(NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!)


message 473: by [deleted user] (new)

(You both have kitty faces!!! ARGH!!! Wait! I know who is who! Ruby, real Ruby, you have Rubyfirewoods, not RubyFirewoods!!! I knew it!!)


message 474: by [deleted user] (new)

(Capitalization!)


message 475: by [deleted user] (new)

(No I don't! You both have capitalization now!! ARGH!!)


message 476: by em_panada (new)

em_panada The real Ruby would've had the mod sign underneath. :)


message 477: by [deleted user] (new)

Alice. Give it up. We can all tell.


message 478: by [deleted user] (new)

XD


message 479: by [deleted user] (new)

:-)


message 480: by [deleted user] (new)

I groan. Someone... someone is shaking me. I ache all over.

I crack my eyes open and see nothing. At all. I lift my hand up to my eyes, and feel a burning pain, and a thin scar on the lid. Oh no.

I reach out and feel someone's hair... Maybe it's Salifia? Yup, I hear her voice now, it's definately her.

"Ugh, I feel like death." she groans. "But it happens. I'll get over it." I feel her get up next to me, and something stumbles over me.

"Sorry, Indi!" she says. "I'm feeling a bit dizzy, but I'm fine."

Someone crouches next to me; Paige (is that Mae's character?!). I see nothing, but my eyes are wide open.

"Oh!" Paige says. "G-Guys? I think something's wrong with Indigo's eyes. They are... well, there is a white scar and they look... clouded."

Someone runs over. "Oh my-! Can you see anything?!" They demand. It's Em, I think.

"Mph." I groan, and then let out a small, "No. What's wrong with my eyes?"

Em sucks in a breath. "Er... well, they are extremely dialated, and green, and... well, you are looking the sun instead of at me, and there are little scars running above them... and your eyes look... clouded...."

"What?!" I shriek. "Am I BLIND?!"

"Calm down." Paige says gently, though I hear a not of panic. "Salifia can probably help."

I feel someone walk over and place their hand on my throbbing head. It clears instantly.

She mutters something in another language.

"I... I don't think I can. This might be permanent." she says, distressed.

"Try!" I say, scared. She lays a hand on me again. This time, my vision goes from black to white to nothing. Nothing.

"Is that all?" I ask, mournfully.

"I'm sorry, Indi. You're blind. I'm sorry." she is crying.

"Blind?" I whisper.

"I am sorry! I am so so sorry." she says mournfully.

"It's alright. There was nothing you could do," I say quietly. I touch the painful scar again. It stings.

I am blind.


message 481: by [deleted user] (new)

((Sorry for writing so much!))


message 482: by [deleted user] (new)

(Yeah, Paige is my character.)


message 483: by [deleted user] (new)

"Everyone need to calm the heck down." I say, freaking out myself. "Blindness... lots of people are blind, right? So there are ways to help... Right?"


message 484: by [deleted user] (new)

(AWESOME TWIST!)


message 485: by [deleted user] (new)

((Thanks!!!!))
I grope around.

"Salifa, it's fine." I try to keep my voice steady.

Paige says, "Try turning into an animal!"

I focus, and feel myself turn into a tiger. I can see a tiny patch of light where the sun must be, but other than that, I'm as blind as a bat... er, tiger.

I growl, and turn back into a human, exhausted.

Paige says determinedly, "You are strong, Indi! You can deal with blindness!"

I give her a weak smile. "I hope so."


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"I'm over here." I say, tapping her on the shoulder to show her my direction. "I'm smiling at you." I say, smiling as warmly as I can at her milky eyes.


message 487: by [deleted user] (new)

"Ugh, now everyone can jump start me so easily." It's hard to joke around, but I try.

"Em?" I say.

"Over here."

"Where's Salifa?"

"Here." Her voice is sad.

"Paige?" I reach out and my fingers brush her freckled nose.

"I... I'll learn, guys. It'll be fine." I say hopefully.


message 488: by [deleted user] (new)

"It adds fun to the group, won't it? With a loss comes a gain, and with a gain comes a loss. Maybe you'll get super powers after the blindness or something." I kid, holding Indigo's hand and leading her to a seat.


message 489: by [deleted user] (new)

"Huh," I snort drily. "Right. Our gain is... what again? That I am blind so I might mutate? Whoopie!" I mutter sarcastically.

"Aw, c'mon, Indi! S'fine! Don't be so sadistic!"

I can tell they're trying to cheer me up, so I give in.

"I suppose my other senses will be sharper now..." I mutter, and allow Mae to lead me to the chair.

"By the way," I ask. "Where are we?"


message 490: by [deleted user] (last edited Sep 19, 2014 05:38PM) (new)

"A tea shop. I think." I sit down next to Indigo.


message 491: by [deleted user] (new)

I sniff. The air is warm with smells of chai.

"Er, why did me bleeding not attract attention?" I ask.

"The seat I led you to is a tea shop. We were at the edge of the town before."

I look at Paige confusedly.

She acknowledges me. "I think you blacked out in between, We carried you here."


message 492: by [deleted user] (new)

"How do you feel, by the way?"


message 493: by [deleted user] (new)

"Horrible. Well, better than before. My side feels perfect...?"

"I healed it." Saphila says quietly.

"Thanks!" I say. "My eyes sting really badly when I touch the scars, but other than that...."


message 494: by [deleted user] (new)

"They should heal in a few days." I explain. "I think its shock effect."


message 495: by [deleted user] (new)

(They're outside, and we are inside the tea shop, and I think they left sense no battle was left.)


message 496: by [deleted user] (new)

I hear Em scream.

"What! What is it?!" I say.

"Sorry, just Doyle scared me!" Em says.

I sigh that nothing worse happened.

"Well," I say. "Might as well order some tea. Then can I go to sleep? I'm exhausted!" I try to sound cheery, but I want to curl up and cry. If it is possible for my damaged eyes to produce tears.


message 497: by [deleted user] (new)

I jump, but turn towards the voice.


message 498: by [deleted user] (new)

"What kid of tea would everyone like?" I ask, and get a serious of different answers. "Ok. Rosemary it is."


message 499: by [deleted user] (new)

"I'll take some Chai." I mumble, massaging my temples. "I can't read the menu, but if they don't have that, a green tea. And a croissant? Sorry, I am in serious need of a croissant."


message 500: by [deleted user] (last edited Sep 19, 2014 06:24PM) (new)

"Sure. Croissant, Chai, and a Green tea, any sugar or honey with that, hun'?" I imitate at southern waitress.


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