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Lila wrote: "@Ivie - You said you adopt Delmy and Peter, so that's my guess. And WUT, three ships??? xD (Actually, that does make sense. *nods* I don't know who they are, but I do have several characters of bot..."I have ships for both of your stories, Lila and Faith, but I'm not sayin' haha!
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I have ships for your stories, too, Nicki....several, in fact....*evilly rubs hands together*
Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Lila wrote: "@Ivie - You said you adopt Delmy and Peter, so that's my guess. And WUT, three ships??? xD (Actually, that does make sense. *nods* I don't know who they are, but I do hav..."Um... *gulps* I haven't even introduced half my ships yet! So now I'm extremely curious over who you are shipping together.
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Oh, it's also coming from the snippets you share over various WIPs, not just WoWWFFD....So....XD
Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Lila wrote: "@Ivie - You said you adopt Delmy and Peter, so that's my guess. And WUT, three ships??? xD (Actually, that does make sense. *nods..."Ah, yes. Right. Well now I'm really curios! ;P
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If you're not sharing, I won't share....*cackles evilly*
Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Lila wrote: "@Ivie - You said you adopt Delmy and Peter, so that's my guess. And WUT, three ships??? ..."*stares for a long time at wall* *finally caves* Well, if there's bargaining chips on the table, I suppose a trade of information could be in order ;P
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*rubs hands gleefully* So.....
Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Lila wrote: "@Ivie - You said you adopt Delmy and Peter, so ..."*eye twitches* Esma and Rishatta! There you have it. My secret ship XD
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Aha. *nods* That's not canon, so.....XD
(I ship Chelsea with Philip, if I'm being quite honest....and Cedric and Elisabeth, although I think that one /is/ canon, isn't it?....and Bobbi and Clint. *nods*)
Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Lila wrote: "@Ivie ..."Yet. It's not canon yet... Yet being the most important word in that sentence ;P
Hmm, interesting. My sister ships Chelsea and Philip, too. And yeah, Cedric and Elisabeth are technically already canon (though I think somebody needs to tell them that XD). *nods* A lot of people seem to like Bobby and Clint, except for my brother who I based Clint off of. He hates Bobby and doesn't want the guy made off of him anywhere near her.
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;P Do make yourself comfortable while you wait...it may be a while....like forever....XD
Awesome! And haha, gotta make sure you keep the peeps the characters are based on guessing. I think she's hilarious, so. You know. XD (Secretly I think they're MADE for each other....)
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Jenni and I both greeted the girls at the door. The social worker was right behind them, and she had been right. With matted and tangled curls, stains of who knows what on..."
Libby, how do I miss your snippet before??!! I LOVE IT. I'm already feeling for those poor girls!!! *huggles them* <3
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I do NOT ship Chelsea and Philip. Ew. :D Chelsea and Easton forever!!!! And Bobby and Clint.... they. Are. The cutest. <3 <3
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Jenni and I both greeted the girls at the door. The social worker was right behind them, and she had been right. With matted and tangled curls, stains of who knows what on..."
Ahhhh, I love this! Heartbreaking but beautiful <3
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I ship Chelsea and Easton too, but from what Nicki has said....I'm re-evaluating that one before I get too attached to it XD
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I'm so worried now. I'm way too attached to Chelston to re-evaluate. O.o
Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword ..."Personally, Bobby was my favorite character when writing the second book, so I'm interested in seeing how she develops while I edit it. Well, favorite character tied with Easton, of course. Easton is always my favorite character XD
Lila wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki ..."To refrain from spoilers, I won't say what I think of Chelsea and Easton as a couple, but both Philip and Easton were getting me pretty aggravated when I was writing the beginning of the third book so... I love the banter Clint and Bobby have :P
Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword ..."Also, if forever is what it's got to be, then that's as long as I'm going to have to wait XD
Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Lila wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword w..."Mwahaha! *grins evilly and sits back steepling fingers*
Lila wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Lila wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki w..."I'm working on getting the second book written! I won't say much, but I'm sure it will make Chelston shippers very happy... and break their hearts in half. *chuckles like a maniac*
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Nicki wrote: "Lila wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Lila wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wr..."
>:( You lovely human being you.....XD
And you can wait forever! I'll keep you accountable to that, actually.....XD
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Nicki, you better not do something to them or I will find you. XD"
*snickers* (I'm torn down the middle....so. We'll have to wait and see...)
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Mwah ha ha ha...........*evil cackle* WAIT FOREVER, THEN!!!!! *runs off howling at the moon*
Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword ..."Thank you ;P XD
Well, I might change my mind when I read the actual story and see how the characters act around each other, but until then they seem like the best couple.
Ivie wrote: "I'm with Lila. Chealston forever!! #ChealstonNicki, you better not do something to them or I will find you. XD"
*gulp* this just got intense. *hides from rabid Chelston followers*
Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Ivie wrote: "I'm with Lila. Chealston forever!! #ChealstonNicki, you better not do something to them or I will find you. XD"
*snickers* (I'm torn down the middle....so. We'll have to wait and se..."
Yes, we shall just have to wait to see a-mwaha-a-mwahaha-a-mwahahaha!
Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword ..."*is greatly disturbed to see you turn into werewolf*
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I see....I mean, I guess I can see that....you'll definitely have to wait and see, though. :P
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There's a reason I threatened to do that.....*evil cackle*
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Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Hee hee...I’ll be waiting, Ivie. XD"Honestly, I'll just be hiding. I have a phobia of pitchforks XD
Ivie wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Hee hee...I’ll be waiting, Ivie. XD"Honestly, I'll just be hiding. I have a phobia of pitchforks XD"
That's cute. You think we'll just have pitchforks. N..."
*swallows hard* Not the fangirls! *looks at Odysseus for help against the dragons* *realizes that if Easton is hurt he'll turn too* *looks at Chelsea for help against fire* *realizes that if anyone is hurt she'll turn too* Um... *backs slowly into corner* *hides behind Faith* She's the meanest! She's the one torturing her characters- in the second book too! My characters don't get tortured till much later. XD
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Honestly, I'll just be hiding. I have a phobia of pitchforks XD"
That's cute. You think we'll just have ..."
*pushes Rish in front of self* He’s the muscle...and I doubt any of you would hurt him. *evil snicker*
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Is Lila in fact GIVING Peter to you, dear Ivie? *smirks* You can only use your own characters in the Battle of the (Author) Fangirls....
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Seriously though, all the snippets that have been shared have been AWESOME. I seriously cannot wait to read all of these awewsome books!
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Is Lila in fact GIV..."
She's talking about her own Peter character, lol! And YES, Peter is awesome! Better watch out for him. :D Though I could never choose a favorite, because aaaaalll of y'all's epic characters are... well, epic. (Or they sound epic, in Faith's case. xD) I'll be on everybody's team!!
Oh, wait... I'm on my own team. *hides behind Peter Pan and Hansel and even Slightly* COME AT ME, BRO.
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Ahhh—I forgot she had a peter :P
And I have the best team to hide behind....*steps behind Rish, Derek, and a number of other spoiler characters who are verging on nightmarish* XD
K... you guys are off topic... like really bad. You should create a thread titled "Defending our favorite Charies from their cruel authors" XDAnd here's another snippet from Dewdrops and Butterflies
We pulled into Jacey’s parking lot. “What are you getting? Joseph asked, parking the car and getting out.
“Cheesecake.” I answered. “Raspberry cheesecake and hot chocolate.”
“Apple pie for me.” He said as we stepped inside, “With Vanilla ice cream.”
“Joseph! Good to see you! Alex! Welcome!”
Joseph’s uncle greeted us with a wide smile, motioning to the bar for us to sit.
“What can I get for you boys?”
We placed our orders and Jacey went to get them.
“How have you been?” Joseph asked, spinning around in his swivel chair.
“Not nauseous until now.” I said, promptly averting my eyes from his spinning.
“Oh come on.” He said, clamping his hands onto the counter to stop himself. “No, really. How have you been?” His childish antics disappeared and the strong friend I knew him to be came out.
“Have guys you been ok?”
I nodded, leaning against the counter on my elbow. “We’ve been good. Jenni’s really been struggling since we found out about her being pregnant. But she usually relaxes when I’m home. And plus with the girls now, she’s occupied, and she loves it.”
He nodded, accepting his dessert from Jacey with thanks. “That’s really good.”
"Yeah. I’m really glad we decided to go ahead with accepting new placements. The house has been so empty, and I didn’t even realize.” I poked at my cheesecake, “It’s hard to get a moment with her alone thought, if you know what I mean.”
“Kinda.” He took a bite. “How about you? I know you’re still worried about Rose.”
I chewed my lip. “Um.. well I sorta had a breakdown in the middle of the street after I called you today.”
He stopped chewing and looked up at me from his plate. “Breakdown? Like a cry-your-eyes-out-sobbing breakdown?”
I reddened, but nodded, studying my dessert. “And sort of ran screaming through the office.”
His fork froze halfway to his mouth and he stared. “Dude. You need some serious help.”
I shook my head...
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And here's another snippet from Dewdrops and Butterfl..."
I love this!!!!
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I agree. If nothing else, we’re writing such different GENRES that there really is no comparison. *goes off to start that thread* XD
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Shine was in the vintage style room, waiting. The waiting was short as the doctor and nurse came in. Shine..."
It's so random and intriguing, love it!
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After my dad disowned my older brother, the peace in our house had been fragile. I was all he had left out of a runaway wife and a rebel son.
Joshua, the perfect one.
Dad was a businessman, a wealthy well known all conservative business man, so as any smooth businessman would, he began to collect the remains of our tattered reputation with me by his side.
I felt trapped. Suffocated. I was at the end of a pointed gun held by a nervous trigger-happy lunatic, and I couldn’t seem to escape.
Perfection is easy to fake.
Big smile. Firm handshake. Confident stride. It’s all a show.
But I was never the best at staying in character.
I needed an escape, and I found it in burning liquor running down my throat and overloading my senses with drugs. Climbing in and out of windows late at night and early in the morning and sneaking off to parties became my religion.
By day I was Joshua the perfect rich all-American-boy, but at night I was flying high, I was free at least in my mind.
It was okay. I was okay.
And Dad was happy with the illusion of his flawless son, until it all came crashing down.
Rumors spread fast, and so do pictures of a popular local businessman’s sixteen-year-old son getting high on drugs.
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Yet, this is a story that plays out a lot in society, it's super scary.
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Anyways, here's part of a chapter I wrote today for The White Rose:
“What ho, my young liveryman!” Karsten called out cheerfully. Arnor turned around and saluted with a smile on his face.
“Did you lose something, dear fellow?” Karsten called to the curly-haired lad.
“Indeed, good Prince Karsten! My spear. I thought to beat that braggard Henrik in a javelin throw.”
“And did you?”
Arnor nodded, a grin creasing his youthful face. “By a good 5 leagues.”
“Right into the pond, I presume.” Ealdread could not keep a smile from his face either.
Sheepishly, Arnor lowered his eyes as the three laughed heartily.
“Never you worry, Arnor. We’ll find it even if it takes the rest of the undern.” Karsten joined Arnor’s side and started searching further along the edge.
Ealdread walked in the opposite direction, shouting to the other two that he was going to search the other side. After several minutes of minutely scanning the bank, Arnor grew impatient.
“It must have gone deeper. I’m going in.” With that, he kicked off his boots and stripped off his socks. He stepped into the water, manfully hiding a shiver and a squeak at the coldness of the water.
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Yet, this is a story that plays out a lot in society, it's super scary."
It is scary, and I do jab at society a lot in this book.
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Yes, that is definitely the vibe I’m going for with him, so I’m glad you feel that way!!!!!! :D