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Alex R Carver - has it really been 7 months since I updated this thread?
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Dec 14, 2016 12:09PM

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Diablo 3 is a fun game. I spent a fair amount of time on that too!
Welcome Alex. I have to say, I love the doggy on the picture.
May I ask how you came up with your pen name. You explained Alex, and it's true. Can't tell the sex just by the name. But I'm curious for the R. Carver part. :)
May I ask how you came up with your pen name. You explained Alex, and it's true. Can't tell the sex just by the name. But I'm curious for the R. Carver part. :)

Additionally it seemed neat to use initials that can also stand for Advance Review Copy, my odd little mind at work. "
Ooohh. Well played! "An ARC from ARC."
Alex wrote: "Additionally it seemed neat to use initials that can also stand for Advance Review Copy, my odd little mind at work. ..."
Ah Cool! Mighty clever I'd say!
Ah Cool! Mighty clever I'd say!



I like knowing the thought behind your name. It also makes me think "hmm, maybe I should have had a pen name instead of using my real name - but since I croscconnect between my writing and my art, it's probably best that I used my real name."

That's so funny Alex I do the same thing! My kids are seven years apart and their names have all the same letters in them! They all begged me not to do it but I'm evil and I did it anyway! LOL!



Thanks, I'm trying to be as thorough and honest as I can be with each review, on the thinking that it will ultimately help me with all aspects of my writing."
How would it help your writing?

ETA: couple of typos that are a bit distracting.

I found the short story to be pretty good, but sometimes it got to be too descriptive with a bit of unnecessary info being given. For example: The stranger was obviously a police officer, there could be no doubt about that since he was wearing a uniform, as was the man with him. The dialogue was fun though and the action scenes were very well-done, as usual. Plot has been done before of course, but its a short story so no need for me to nitpick. I can see it turning into a fun, free short story.


I like fine tuning editing, but these major re-writes are just frustrating me right now.
Good luck to you!

Thanks! I'm chugging along.

It's free on the US Amazon for me. Generally, for me, the US Amazon is the first to go free, and then the other Amazons follow after. I don't know why they do this - it's very incovenient! - but there you go.

Haha, yeah, I don't have a basement either. I have my bedroom, with a desk. It sometimes works!
Good luck with your new book!

My laptop also travels. Sometimes I'm at the dining table and my boyfriend is on the couch. When he turns the TV on, though, I escape to the bedroom. Especially if I'm on a roll!

I think that most indies write for the love of it. I know I do.
I write on an iPad. And I can do it anywhere EXCEPT where it's quiet....


(By the way, you lost your last name on your thread title.)

Lol, I like to be cryptic. Glad you got there in the end. :)"
The best part of a mystery is working out the answer. :) Well done!

What a fun idea! I like puzzles. :)
(Though, is it just me, or is the last letter wrong? Should be 'I'?)

Tree foot egg leg my man. Four of bananas to Sarah. Oh no. Under duvet is!"
Got it, I was just babbling when I wrote it :)"
Babbling? I thought you was quoting one of them experimental novels.
XX
J

Take a deep breath. Swear. Put a packet of frozen peas on your ankle.
And then carry on.
*leaves a special Dog hug and tiptoes out*


First off I buggered up my ankle, it's now twice it's normal size, or near enough, and painful to walk on, and now, just whe..."
Ah! Crap! I have been through stuff like that too so I understand. I hope things get better for you, and good luck with the book.
Alex wrote: "Okay, I'm feeling seriously bummed right now. Today is not a good day.
First off I buggered up my ankle, it's now twice it's normal size, or near enough, and painful to walk on, and now, just whe..."
Oh I hate when something like that happens. Or when you work on a manuscript to realize it's an older copy you had for safekeep so you have to restart over with the right one.
Good luck with both the book and the ankle. Take it this way. At least, once you'll sit down to work on the book you won't feel like walking around to do something else. :P
First off I buggered up my ankle, it's now twice it's normal size, or near enough, and painful to walk on, and now, just whe..."
Oh I hate when something like that happens. Or when you work on a manuscript to realize it's an older copy you had for safekeep so you have to restart over with the right one.
Good luck with both the book and the ankle. Take it this way. At least, once you'll sit down to work on the book you won't feel like walking around to do something else. :P
My fear is that one day I will take an old version and save it on top of my new version instead of the other way around. (That's why I try to keep many copies in many different folders, HD, cloud etc but the more you have saved the more chances you have to make that darn mistake lol
And yeah.. coffee is good...but it will keep you awake so careful!
And yeah.. coffee is good...but it will keep you awake so careful!

My day was no good either. I had to make yet another emergency cross country trip Monday night because my grandma had died and we had her funeral this morning. Three family deaths in 2 & 1/2 months, my mom being the first. Still believing 2017 will be a good year though. Keep hope alive. Always!

I know it's already been said, but take a deep breath, two or three if you have to, and know that we're behind you. I know what it's like to have your computer not save your work. You want to cry, but you accept that it happened, then start where you left off:)
Keep your ankle elevated!

First off I buggered up my ankle, it's now twice it's normal size, or near enough, and painful to walk on, and now, just whe..."
Ah, Alex, I'm sorry. Nothing quite as frustrating as a Word bomb and not even being able to walk to the teapot when needed. Good luck, and look after yourself.