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Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 297 comments Here we are! So did you have a set age range in mind? And is there a specific format you have for creating characters?


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Um 17-19 No not really we could just start if you want.


Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 297 comments That works for me! You can start.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Ok

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Aaliyah was walking slowly fast through the city. She dove each perfect trying to blend in. So far so good. She hope she didn't run into anybody who can tell she's human. Even though most could easily tell. She kept her head up some. Making her eyes look down. She couldn't get caught. The city was very busy which was an advantage and disadvantage at the same time. She didn't speak up. Her eyes would give her away. She had grabbed a pair of sunglasses from the sale table. She put it on her face. The sun was setting she had to get home to her brother.

Her eyes were going to give her away. She didn't have the health com in her eyes. She can't see in the dark either. Her heart rate was speeding. She was super nervous. She walked in the alley way that lead her to to her house. She then saw some people there. She backed away. She had to distract them knowing she was going to get turned. Her little brother had to stay safe. She took a shaky breath and went out of the alley way. She then turned down another one not knowing where she was.

She walked quickly looking down. She was super protective of her little brother and if he got hurt she would feel responsible. She ran throw her sunglasses down knowing she wouldn't be seeing anymore perfects or at least she thought she wouldn't see any. She ran into a person a perfect. She looked up and looked in his eyes and ran the past him trying to get away from him.

Her heart was racing. She was having a rush. She kept running not looking back. She stumbled along some trash cans. She was in a dead end. She was going to be turned. Her brother was safe that is all that matters right now.


Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 297 comments Alec trotted down the front stairs from his house, hands shoved in his pockets and head down as he grumbled. He pushed past perfects who muttered and scolded him for not paying attention to where he was walking, but he ignored them all. After walked a few blocks he looked up from the sidewalk and stretched his arms above his head, a smirk finding its way onto his lips.

He began humming as he walked, watching the setting sun in the west and began to grow excited. There was a look of satisfaction on his face as he thought of how he had told his father off before leaving; and his father had deserved it. Alec was sick and tired of his father always trying to control him. He wouldn't have any of that.

Alec had closed his eyes for only a moment when someone walked into him. He opened his mouth to tell them off but his voice caught in his throat when he looked into the girls eyes - she was a human. He broke out in a full grin as she ran past him and began bouncing on the balls of his feet before chasing after her at full speed.

How long had it been since he had chased down a human? He could hardly remember the last chase. His body surged with adrenaline and a laugh escaped his lips as he realized that the girl had run into a dead end.

"Well well," Alec said softly, "what have we here?"


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She looked up at him. She knew she wasn't going to make it. She looked down. She didn't say anything. "I'm not going to give up." She said. She was head strong person. She wouldn't let people control her at all. She would give up easily but she knew she didn't have anything to do get out or around him with. She had daggers in her shoes she would use.

Her ankles hurt. She winced at the pain figuring she sprained it. She didn't mean to hurt self. She was weak. She was showing weakness. She will be turned. She wasn't going to be turned. He didn't have the sleeping spray or mind control. He didn't. She hoped he didn't which he probably did like most perfects.

She got up slowly and fell. She looked up at him again. She looked down. One thing she knew was she wasn't going to be a puppet. "I'm not a puppet. I don't and won't ever be controlled." She didn't say another word. She smiled up at him not looking in his eyes. "I won't give up."

((Sorry so short busy))


Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 297 comments ((It's fine. I'm busy as well.))

"Of course you're not," he replied, a smirk now playing on his lips, "They never are sweetheart. Yet look at this world around you." Alec chuckled and grabbed her, wrapping his slender fingers around her bicep and yanking her harshly off the ground.

"You might as well give up, girl. Have you taken a look around you? Look at the boy who has you by the arm - I'm a perfect. You're walking in a city full of perfects. You're crazy to think that you'll end up any differently. You're crazy to have walked into this city."

Alec shook his head and laughed, the sound of his laughter cruel and cutting. He looked down at her, his grey eyes peering into hers. "You'll be controlled, and there's nothing you can do about it."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((Ok))

She didn't answer anything. Her faced wrinkled in the pain of him pulling her up. "Let go of me." She said. "I can and will fight." She retorted. She was started to tremble. She was afraid. She didn't want to be turn. "Your just a puppet." She said.

"There's more than you think of us. We will rise up and will take our world back" She shouted lowly. She couldn't reach to her ankles to grabbed the daggers. She wouldn't let him do this. "Humans can come back again." She said not looking up at him,

"I will not be controlled." She said then his eyes made contact with hers. She started to relax. She cursed herself. She soon started to fight it. "You'll have to try harder than that to control me." She said looking up at him. "You will not control me with this mind control power you supposedly have"


Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 297 comments "There's more than you think of us," Alec repeated in a mocking tone. He shook his head and looked down at her, an amused expression on his face. "We aren't unaware of the humans that are still out there. Do you really think we're that naive?" He chuckled, shaking his head again, "No, no. Of course not. We just like to see the hope go out of your eyes when we catch the few of you who decide to come out of hiding."

Alec smirked down at her, fighting back a chuckle when she started to relax. "Mind power I supposedly have? Dear girl, you let up for an instant and started to relax. Surely you must realize our powers aren't simply some made up story."

He paused for a moment, cocking his head to the side and peering at her curiously. "I wonder," he murmured quietly to himself, "what it would take to make you break."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She couldn't break away from his gaze. She was fighting a hard as she could. "Well at least we aren't cowards that think they have to control people. At least we fight to save our own kind and to save people we care about. We stand up to the people who treat bring us down." She said. She wasn't giving up.

"Mind control? Your not controlling me perfect that's because you can't." She said knowing she didn't have much time. She was about to kick him with her good ankle. She smiled softly. "You can't break me and there's nothing you can't use to break me." She said.

There as one thing. One thing her little brother but she wouldn't say that to him.


Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 297 comments He laughed lightly as she spoke, rather unfazed by the words that were coming out of her mouth. "Yes, I'm sure you find it all very admirable. The idea of it all is very romantic, I'll admit that much. That doesn't change anything though."

Alec smiled at her, but there was something off about it. It was by no means a genuine smile, but rather there seemed to be something about it. As if he knew something that she didn't. Some secret that made all the difference in the world.

"You're very resistant, I'll give you that," he said softly, a smile still playing on his lips, "But I do hope you realize that I can do more than talk," he murmured, moving closer to her.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments He thought saving her brother was romantic. She almost laughed. She spent every waking moment trying to fend for him. He knew it was dangerous to do it. But she had to. She was the older sibling. She had to stay strong and fight for him. Even if it means dying or being turned into one of them. He begged her not to do it because he could lose her. She told him who else would give them food and they weren't going to begged. "Yeah very romantic trying to protect the only person left in your life." She gritted her teeth.

He was smiling. He knew something. This wasn't good. If he knew sob her little brother. She would do anything to protect him. She wanted to say something but knowing she would give him away if she did that. She wouldn't. She bit her lip.

"I learned from my dad." She said. She had no chance if he kissed her. She would fall. She was already trembling. She made sure he couldn't get inside of her head but she was failing awfully at that. At least she was trying.


Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 297 comments "It must be hard," he said softly, his attitude and demeanor completely changing. He no longer seemed like the arrogant perfect who was intent on changing humans, but instead almost seemed as if he cared about her and sympathized with her. He almost seemed as if he felt sorry for her and would do anything to help.

"All that responsibility is far too much for one person to bear. Especially a pretty girl like you," Alec murmured, tucking a loose strand of hair behind her ear. "That's not to say that being pretty makes you weak, not at all. I have no doubt in my mind that you're strong. How else would you have made it so long? What were you doing here? Searching for food or clothes?"

Alec sighed and shook his head, looking down at the ground for a moment instead of at her. "I actually feel kind of bad about all the perfects taking over, but you have to understand. We have to survive too. You understand that, don't you?" he asked softly, looking into her eyes.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments He sounded like he cared or was taking pity on her. She didn't him to care or to have pity on her. "Look I don't need pity from you or anyone else here." She said. She looked down on the ground thinking if her brother and how she got caught and how he is all alone and must be scared. "I was going home the long way." She said. She didn't say anything else. She looked down some more.

Her plan was not to let the mind control to take over her. She relaxed even more not paying attention anymore. "No it's not easy taking care of your little brother on your own." She paused. "I don't like to beg or do anything like that and I'm strong and I would do anything for him. He's all I got left." She said. She realize she told him about her little brother.

She looked into his eyes still when he was talking. She was completely under his control now. Her eyes glazed over slightly. "I understand." She said as she stopped struggling.


Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 297 comments "Now, I didn't know you had a little brother. Why didn't you mention that in the first place? All this hard work must be for him," Alec said, a sense of deep pity in his voice. "It all makes sense. I bet you would risk anything for him, wouldn't you?"

He was quiet for a moment, a sad expression on his face. He knew that in order to keep her under his control he couldn't break character. She was harder to control than most humans, and she put up more of a fight than any girl he had ever encountered, but he didn't mind at all. He liked a good challenge and knew that in the end he would win.

"So what's your name? We really got off on the wrong foot here. The whole perfects and humans thing. We're not allowed to mix at all, and it really is a shame," he said softly with a sigh, "My name is Alec. Alec Payne."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She looked up at him. She didn't break the gaze. "I wanted to protect him." She said. She paused for a second. "I would do anything for him." She said. "I would die for him. I would fight till the end for him." She said.

She didn't move from her spot. She was falling deeper under his control. She could feel her mind and self control leaving. Soon after a bit it left and she was left with this feeling of nothing. She had to follow orders and would do so. She blinked her eyes some. She tired to fight it off but she couldn't do anymore. She was tired of fighting and doing all of it.

"My nic name is Lilly." He didn't ask for her real name yet. She wasn't going to tell him her real name unless he asked. "Nice to meet you." She said.


Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 297 comments He nodded at her, looking down in the most sympathetic way. "Who wouldn't do anything for the one that they love? I'd die for someone I loved too. It's only natural."

Alec loosened his grip on her bicep, instead slipping his hand into hers. He smiled down at her and took his other hand as well, lowering his head so that their foreheads were touching. Through all this he never broke his gaze, always keeping eye-contact with her. He wondered if that would have any effect on the extent to which he could control her.

"Lilly is a beautiful name. It's fitting for such a beautiful girl," he said with a smile.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She nodded her head not breaking the gaze. "I love my little brother." She said. She didn't break the gaze. She smiled some. She didn't say anything else to him.

He then took her hand. Her heart started to beat faster. His forehead against hers. She was losing focus. She was blushing knowing he's won. She wasn't order to do anything yet. She waited for him to say something. Deep down in side she knew this was wrong. But the old self was buried inside and there was nothing she could do about it.

"Thank you." She stammered. She smiled some more. She didn't say anything else.


Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 297 comments "Of course you do."

Alec had to force himself not to laugh, seeing the profound effect that physical contact had on her. It seemed that she wasn't even resisting anymore. "You're blushing," he murmured, brushing a finger across her cheek with a light chuckle. "Why are you blushing?"

He gave her the most genuine looking smile in the hopes that it would get her to soften up anymore. "It makes you look even cuter," he said softly. He paused for a moment before leaning in and brushing his lips against her cheek. "But how about you tell me your real name, missy?"


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She nodded her head slowly.

She looked at him smiling. Her heart was racing now. He knew she was blushing. She bit her lip. Then running the finger across her cheek made her heart do flips over and over again. She looked into his eyes not wanting to move from them. "I don't know." She didn't know why she was blushing. She was just blushing.

She kept staring then he kissed her cheek. Her heart did summer salutes in her chest. Smiled at him. She didn't know her surroundings well. All she knew was she had to listen to him. She paused before saying something. "Anything for you." She told him. She would die for him now. "My name is Aaliyah." She said.


Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 297 comments Alec smiled down at her and for a scary moment he realized something - he did think she was pretty. He closed his eyes for only a moment in an attempt to clear his head. She was a human and therefore she had to be taken in and changed. It was the only way. Perhaps when she was changed they could talk. After all, her body would still remain.

"Anything for me?" he asked, raising an eyebrow. "What a sacrifice that you're giving for me. It makes me feel special. Aaliyah is a very pretty name."

Alec paused for a moment, toying with an idea in his head. Maybe he could have some fun with this before he turned her in. "You said you'd do anything for me. Do you think you could...oh I don't know, maybe.." he trailed off, smiling down at her and hoping that she was eager to know what it was that he had to say, "kiss me?"


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Something was lurking here. She heard sirens. Her eyes widen at fear that they found her brother. She stopped about that. She could hear screams. She blinked for a second. What was she doing here? She lost control she thought. Her brother she had to get to her brother. She looked down so he couldn't control her anymore.

She darted out of the alley way. She had to tried. She collapsed because of her ankle. "No." She whispered. "No." She repeated. She failed her brother as she heard his screams. "You guys are sick people." She said. She failed him that's he only thing that went through her head. She looked at him.

"I will never become one of you. You made have controlled me for a few minutes but you don't nothing about me."'she said.


Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 297 comments His smile faded as he noticed her eyes widen in fear. He knew at this point that he had lost her and he silently cursed to himself - he had gotten so far and come so close. It was a shame, really. He'd catch her anyway, but now the fun was over.

Alec stood for a moment and watched her dart out of the alley before calmly strolling after her, smirking once he saw her fall. "I actually am sorry about your brother," he said calmly, stopping over her. "I didn't know they were going to catch him. You probably don't believe me, but I swear that I am sorry about that."

He watched her curiously for a moment before once again curling his slender fingers around her bicep and yanking her up off the ground. "It's too late, Aaliyah. It's over and I'm taking them to change you as I speak," Alec said in an almost weary voice, walking in the direction that the sirens were coming from. "Things would have been much simpler if you had only kissed me. You wouldn't even have realize what's happening right now. You would have been...ah what do you call it...ah yes, blissfully unaware."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She looked at him. She was going to give up without a fight. Her little brother. She had to get to him. She smiled some. She kicked him with her good leg and darted to the dead end again. She reached to her show and grabbed her dagger. She wasn't going to go down without a fight. "Well I'm sorry your over there and I'm here and I'm not going down without a fight and you won't be able to get to me now." She shouted she backed up against the wall.

She wanted to cry. "I will not be changed and I will not be a puppet. You knew the whole time. You played me to get to him. He is only seven he doesn't even know my parents." She said. She wasn't going to cry.

"Now you can't control me anymore." She said. She knew it was possible he could get to her. How can she fight him if she can't look at him without falling under his control. She was going to get turned but she wasn't going to stopped fighting.


Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 297 comments He let out a yelp of surprise as she kicked him and spun around, glaring at the figure of the running girl. She ran back into the dead end and he shook his head, now angry and annoyed. "I'll be able to get you and you know it," he said angrily, wearily eyeing the dagger in her hand. He didn't really want to get hit with that.

"I'm telling you Aaliyah, I honestly wasn't trying to get your brother. He's far too young. I only wanted you. I told you that I don't care about the rest of the surviving humans, only those crazy enough to wander into our cities."

Alec stopped a few feet away from her, not wanting to risk getting any closer to her and getting stabbed. "You know I can control you," he said softly, "and this time I won't play games. Once you're mine then you'll be mine for good, and I'll take you to get changed."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She just made him mad. Maybe that wasn't the best thing she did. She looked at him. "How dare you think you came make me come with you and stop me." She said. "I will kill you before I died. I'm not going to be one of you." She said.

"And don't you think you bring my little brother into this. I'm not crazy. I'm trying to make sure we can live and not die off." She said at him angrily. She kept her gaze down making sure he couldn't look into her eyes.

She made one mistake when he stopped in front of her. She looked up. Her eyes wander to his. "You can't control me good enough." She said. She was getting weaker this time than before. She dropped the dagger out of her hand. "I'm not going to lose." She was going to look away and be safe. See didn't look away. She couldn't. She was falling under his control now. "You can't make me to be under your control." She said to reassure herself..


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Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 297 comments "You and I both know that you won't kill me," Alec said simply, entirely unfazed by her threats. "You may attempt, but that attempt will be short lived.

Alec looked at her curiously and pursed his lips as he thought. "I can make sure your brother doesn't get caught," he said slowly, thinking more about defying his father than saving her brother, "So long as in return you allow yourself to be changed."

He was quiet again for a moment, his lips curving up into a smile as her eyes met his and her dagger fell to the floor. "However I doubt I'm going to have to try and convince you for much longer, because you are going to lose. The sooner you accept that Aaliyah, the sooner we can both move on."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She looked at him. "I could kill you easily." She said. She didn't leave his gaze. "My brother is already caught" she said. "I won't stop fighting though." She said. "I will not become a puppet." She shouted softly.

Then he was telling her she wouldn't make it. "I can and will fight...." Her voice trailed off as she looked into his eyes longer than should have. She couldn't break his gaze just like last time. Her heart started to race some. She tried fighting it but she couldn't. She was so tired from fighting it earlier. Her body grew less tense. She was almost under his control.

She wanted to go over to him and give up. She walked slowly over to him. Her eyes went back to the glaze coat they were again. Her mind was free to be controlled by him again. She looked at him waiting for a command. She didn't break his gaze.


Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 297 comments "You could if it wasn't for the fact that I can stop you without even raising a finger," he replied wearily, growing tired of her defiant attitude. As understandable and almost admirable as it had been, it was now growing old.

"I mean I can get him out. Assuming we act fast and I get there before they do anything to him," Alec explained, "but there's no way that will happen if we stand here and you continue to try and fight me."

He opened his mouth to say something more before realizing that she was no longer fighting. She walked towards him, her eyes glazed over again, and he sighed, almost upset to see her this way. He held a lighter grip on her bicep and began taking her towards the center of the city, where the main government building stood.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She didn't hear his but speech about her brother or fighting him. She was far too gone to care now. She simply nodded her head. She looked at him when he touched her. She still felt her heart best super fast. She didn't want him to let go. The last thing she remember was him saying a she could kiss him. Once your under control and you snap out of it you remember where you left off at under control. As he was taking her to the dome her ankle was killing her.


She wanted to say something about the kiss but figured he'll say no now. "Alec my ankle." She whispered as the pain spread through. She wanted to scream but didn't do that. "It hurts really bad." She said. She looked so him hoping he wouldn't yell at her if she did anything wrong. She would still do anything for him.


She looked around the place. There was people everywhere and a big building. She didn't really know what was happing. She was to busy thinking about him touching her and the pain from her ankle. People laughed at the stupid human that was caught and how they were weak minded. She didn't care if they were laughing. After all she didn't care about anything but how he was touching her which made her cheeks turn red.


Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 297 comments Alec lead her through this city, walking past the many perfects who were still out at this hour. They generally tended to take on some of the characteristics of their host bodies, and almost everyone out was a party-goer. Take away the strippers and hookers that the humans had indulged in, because perfects wouldn't tolerate that, and things almost seemed as though there were no perfects around.

He looked over at her when he heard her say his name, and frowned after hearing what she said. After a moments debate Alec decided to pick her up to relieve the pain in her ankle. He swept his arm under her legs and continued to carry her towards the government building, ignoring the laughing and staring perfects around him.

"You're blushing again," Alec noted, not really seeing how pointing this out would do anything. While it was necessary to control humans to get them to change, their then lack of personality was a bit dry and uninteresting.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She didn't say a thing more that she needed to. She looked around at the propel laughing and stuff. She didn't see what they were laughing about or who they were. She didn't realize it was her. She was the laughing stock of the show. But she would be change soon and all of her human memories would be gone. She wouldn't be the same person really just in e same body. She saw many different people out. They weren't people they were perfects. She was taught that they were monsters.


She waited for him to answer her. He never really answered her. He picked her up and her face turned a bright red. Her ankle felt better some but not much. She didn't complain about it because soon she would be a perfect. She looked up at him. "Where are we going?" She asked.

She didn't care if she was blushing. That was just showing she was under his control more than others. But to perfects that could mean something else. She didn't know the laws of the perfects yet. She did to even know anything that she could remember. She didn't realize that this was wrong to control people.


Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 297 comments "We're going to the government building," Alec replied with a smile, looking down at her. "They'll fix up your ankle and then you'll be changed into a perfect. Won't that be nice?"

He raised an eyebrow at her and kept his smile intact, almost as if to ask her what could possible be better than being changed into a perfect. He returned his attention to the streets ahead of him, his pace slowing as they neared the government building. It was a tall building - at least one hundred stories high - and the entire place was lit in a mysterious green light. Guards stood post outside to ensure that no one who was unwanted would get in.

Alec walked up the guards, nodding his head as he drew near to them. "I have a human girl here who needs to be changed. Rumor has it that you have already found her young brother. It would appear as though the humans are getting careless, aren't they?" he asked with a smirk.

Neither guard responded, they merely looked at him and nodded, giving him permission to pass through. Repressing a sigh Alec continued on, walking through the government building entrance doors.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She looked up at him with a smile and nodded her head. "That means I won't be different right?" She asked. She was happy. What was a perfect it didn't matter. He was acting like it was the best thing that ever happen. So she would do the same. She didn't frown at all. She was happy. She looked around at the people.

They came upon two guard who wouldn't smile. She looked at them weird. Who doesn't smile. Alec smile. Maybe they are having a bad day. She but her lip figuring Alec would be mad if she asked them why they don't smile. She looked at them with her glaze eyes. They were kind of creepy but she didn't say that either. She kept her mouth shut. She started to run through the reasons someone should smile. Maybe they just don't like smiling. She liked smiling. She was lost in thought about smiling.

As they walked into the building it was huge. Her mouth flew open as she looked around at the space. It was so clean and no one was there. They had people in a holding cell. She looked at the little boy. He was screaming for his sister. He slammed on the glass her eyes widen some but she didn't feel like fighting anymore. She was too far gone to fight. "Who's that little boy there." She asked. Her old self was trying to fight but nothing happened.


Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 297 comments "You won't change a bit," he assured her as he walked. "They'll fix up your ankle, and then they'll look at your genes, just to make sure they can prevent you from getting sick. That's why they call it perfect. They're going to help your body."

Alec chuckled a bit at the expression on her face when they entered the government building - it was as if she had never seen a building before. He didn't notice the little boy until she said something, but when he looked over he felt his heart sink a little. The resemblance between the two was striking, and it was horrible to realize that she couldn't even recognize the little brother she had fought so hard to protect.

"He's another human, but you see Aaliyah, sometimes they don't appreciate what we're doing for them. They don't understand and so they get scared. But you don't have to be scared," he said with a smile, returning his attention to her, "because I'm here to help you. You understand that, right?"


((I'll be a little on and off today because of school.))


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She looked at him and nodded her head. "So I'll be perfect that sounds amazing." She said looking up at him as her attention wasn't to the little boy crying in the room. She was really happy. "My ankle will be all better." She said with a smile. She heard the sobs of the little boy as her head turned. "Why is he crying? He looks like he lost someone special." She said.

She didn't like the sounds of the crying. "Why would they fight it something so good?" She asked confused. She was looking at him. Deep down inside she wanted to come out. For a moment she froze as she tired fighting it but she couldn't. "Why doesn't he smiled." She asked. "Why isn't he liking the help?"

She nodded her head. "I know your helping me."


((Me too.))


Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 297 comments Alec looked sadly over at the little boy, unsure of what to tell Aaliyah. All he knew was that there was no way he could tell her the truth. "Maybe he did lose someone special," he replied sadly, "They try fighting against us and sometimes they get hurt."

He walked over to a chair in what appeared to be the lobby area in the building. The holding cells were still visible and the boys cries still rang out. "When people don't understand something they get misconceptions. You see, there are some people who think that instead of helping them we're actually hurting them. They think we're trying to take over." Alec shook his head, his grey eyes seemingly full of sorrow. "That's why they fight."

After a moment however he smiled at her, "I really am glad you understand that we only want to help. We want this world to be a better place. Don't you?"


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She looked at him then to the little boy. She smiled some at Alec. "Poor little boy." She said. She looked at him with a big smile. "Well your only helping him." She said. She smiled some at the little boy. He started to call them monsters. She looked at him and froze again. Her eyes were becoming unglazed. She didn't look back at Alec.

Her eye widen again. She was regaining control slowly. She still had about five minuets left before she takes total control. "Let me go." She whispered but it wasn't strong or defiant it was weak and tired. She was tired of fighting. She never relaxed before. She didn't fight nor did she struggled. "I'm sorry," she said. She was defeated.


"I'm sorry little brother I tired but I'm trapped with no way out. I promise I will never stop protecting you." She had a single tear coming down her cheek. She looked back at Alec eyes and went under his control again. "Why am I crying?" She asked.


Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 297 comments "Exactly," he said with a smile, nodding as she spoke. He looked over at the boy, wishing that he would stop yelling. He feared that it would only make him lose control of Aaliyah, and as he turned to face her again he found that his fear was confirmed.

"I can't let you go," Alec said simply, staring impassively down at her, "but I can let him go. If you cooperate. I promise that I will."

He knew that his promise fell flat as she fell under his control again and he sighed, finding himself tired of this whole process and wondering when someone would finally come to the desk. Alec made sure not to touch her and broke eye contact, looking instead at her lap.

"Aaliyah I will make a deal with you, but so help me I need you to come back to me for a moment. And I need you to promise you're not going to run or scream, because our guards will not hesitate to tranquilize you...or worse."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She didn't hear him say this whole speech. She looked up at him some then he looked down. She blinked a few seconds out of his control. "Your promises probably mean nothing." She said bitterly. She wasn't going to do anything that would hurt her or her brother. She notice that he wasn't going looking at her.


She looked up to her brother. She nodded her head. "Ok." She said. "I won't run but you better hurry because they are coming." It was too late they were here. She looked into his eyes and fell under his control quickly. She looked at him. She didn't move.

"Hello I see you found a human. Is she completely under your control? If so you have to come with us to make her stay clam until she's ready for the transformation. You know all her memories of being human will be gone. Make sure you know her name and can you take care of her to make sure she adjust well."


Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 297 comments He pressed his lips into a thin line but said nothing as she spoke. He couldn't blame her for believing that he woudln't hold to a promise. What she didn't know though, was that Alec would always keep his word, even if it was to a human.

Alec opened his mouth to speak but closed it quickly as Aaliyah announced that people had already come. He silently cursed under his breath for waiting so long before looking away from her, gently placing his hand on her shoulder so he could keep some sense of control.

"She is completely under my control, of course. Does it look like she's trying to run?" Alec asked with a light chuckle. "I know the drill. I'll stay with her. She won't freak out with me around. I do however wish to know if it's possible for us to remain alone while we wait for all preparations for the change are being made. She was particularly hard to get under control, and I fear that being around too many perfects may be enough to set her off again."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She looked up at him and didn't break her gaze. Her eyes were completely glaze over. She didn't speak. She looked up at the at the person who was there talking. She was so far gone it didn't matter unless he backed away.

The person nodded at the desk. "If she is under your control like most weak minded humans you can control anywhere you go." She said. "Her eyes will stay glaze no matter what. If you can prove to us that she can do that then we will let you stay alone." She said. "We do this to most. Sometimes humans fight and get weak. But we need to make sure there is no fighting left in her."

She smiled some at the her. She kept smiling. She didn't know any better than to smile.


Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 297 comments Alec nodded, holding back another curse as he heard the conditions. "That's fair enough," he replied simply. He looked down at Aaliyah and repressed a sigh, ideas running through his mind on how he could guarantee that she would stay under his control.

"Come on Aalyiah, we're walking back by the holding cells," he said with a smile, talking to her in a gentle tone. "Maybe if those people see how happy you are, they'll realize that we're actually helping."

He moved away from her slightly, letting his hand slip off of her shoulder. He made sure that they were still close enough that his hand would brush her as they walked, ensuring that physical contact would remain in the most casual way he could think of.

Alec knew that if this worked he would have full trust with the attendant at the desk. Keeping Aaliyah under control while she was staring into the eyes of fellow humans - some of which she may have known - would prove that she was controlled. He would just make sure not to take her too close to her little brother.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments The person at a desk. "We will be falling you to make sure nothing gets out of hand. Where did she find this girl? We just busted a whole section of them not to long ago. Maybe she's that girl that little boy keeps talking about. If you prove to us she can be near him then she will be able to stay. We just don't want nothing to go wrong near humans but if she can't stay control near her brother then she can stay control in front of everyone." She said.


She followed them. "Yeah your helping them." She said with a smile. She looked up at him. "But my ankle hurts really bad." She said. She looked up at him. "I can try to walk." She said. "Why would anyone get sick or hurt. He said your going to fix my ankle." She saw the people in the cells. "Who are we going to see?"


Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 297 comments Why her brother?, Alec groaned internally, making sure that his face remained calm and collective. He worried that at the site of her brother, the real Aaliyah would break through, and then everything would be ruined. He could only hope that even if he did lose control she'd be smart enough to play along and pretend she was still in trance.

"I'm very sorry about your ankle, but we will fix it. I promise. We just have to wait for the doctors to get ready," Alec assured her. He stayed close to her, both for control reasons and out of fear that she may fall. "The attendant thinks it'd be good for you to see the little boy. He really needs to calm down, and we think you'd be the perfect person to help him realize that we mean no harm."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments The attendant looked at him. Something was off. "Are you okay with that sir? If she needs to be control we have some sleeping spray." She said. She looked at her. "Yes we are helping her." She came to the little boys holding cell. "His name is Jason." She said. She looked up at her. "Do you know who he is?" She watched for her to snap out of it. Nothing so far. "Her body is weak from fighting so the worse thing that could happen is she will fall under further." She said and rolled her eyes.


She looked at the little boy in the room. "Jason." She whispered. She didn't snapped out of it. "That's a good idea he's over reacting. You are helping us why don't they see that so clearly?" She asked. She looked around then she heard him screaming at them saying they were monsters. She looked to Alec then the attendant. "They are both perfects they are helping us become better than we are." She said looking dead in the eyes. "We will all be perfect we don't get sick. Isn't that great?" She said. "Then we will live longer than most people."


Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 297 comments "Everything is fine," Alec said with a smile, "I assure you that we won't need any sleeping spray. Just watch her." He stood by Aaliyah, watching to see if there were any signs of her breaking. There were none. The attendant was right. Her body was much too tired to try and resist anymore.

"See?" he said pointedly, a broad smile on his face as she interacted with her brother. "I told you I had control over her. If she can interact with him, then she's ours." He turned to Aaliyah and smiled, "That's right. We're only helping."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She looked at him with a smile. "The doctors are ready for her. Make sure she is relaxed and derlious so the needles won't bother her." She walked and left them be. "When you bring her out she will be in the room to the left. Do you want to watch it?" She asked not known if he would want to or not. "It's up to." She said. "We have to get her in before the others." She shouted back at them.

"The little boy is sad. But he will be able to see it that you are right. We won't be able to get sick." She said, "your helping us." She looked around and smiled. The little boy insisted that they are monsters. "They did nothing wrong little boy." She looked up at him. "Needles?" She's gulped. "I don't really like needles."


Jasmine | ModernScrolls (modernscrolls) | 297 comments "Yes I'd like to be there. I want to make sure everything goes well and she stays calm," he replied with a smile. "I know the whole experience can be quite scary for some people."

Alec placed his hand on Aaliyah's shoulder, gently turning her so that she was facing away from the holding cells. "You did a great job, now come on. We're going to make you all better," he said in the most comforting voice he could muster up, "Don't worry about the needles. I promise, you won't even feel a thing."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She nodded her head as she heard him say that. "Yes it is." She smiled some and walked out waiting for them to come.

She looked up at her. She smiled some at him and nodded. "I'm going to get all better." She said with a smile. She looked at him. "You sure I won't feel anything?"


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